My Xiuxian Has a Shopping Mall

I admire those people who know the bloody plot but still write it!

Since some people say that some parts of the city are ridiculous, if it really doesn't work, you can skip to the secret realm first. Qingjing Mountain (1-2, 7-11, 28-37), Villa Storytelling (69-95), the more you go on, the better it gets. Chapter 69: Taking Off, you must see it, it will get better after it is released! If it doesn't look good, I'll cut it, but if it looks good, I'll fix it later. It's all interlocking, with a lot of foreshadowing! 🙂

It's not impossible to revive literature and art, but you can't just copy the way it was before, otherwise the poisonous spots will be concentrated. If you want to revive literature and art, you need to add some new writing methods. For example, the protagonist is a time traveler. After traveling to this world, he encounters cheats and bloody plots, and then while participating in the bloody plots, he complains that this world is too bloody. And your mentality should always be stable, and you will not be easily broken by the bloody plots. Even some of the screwy plots that can be avoided should be avoided. In this way, the protagonist will be a normal person, and the other people will be mentally retarded because this is a world of screwy plots. If you write it this way, the plot can be directly adapted from the bloody plot full of poisonous points, because this world is originally a world full of bloody plots full of flaws. Even if a lot of bloody plots are added, it will appear very reasonable. The only thing that changes is the mentality, thinking and action of the protagonist.

It will be on the shelves on the 1st of next month. If you want to invest in the income from the shelves, hurry up, you can make money for free. 4,000 Words are updated every day, and the plot is advancing steadily. I am really serious about writing the book. Let go of your prejudice against bullshit and read more 😭 I will work hard to continue to improve my level 😊

The protagonist is a coward, he is an organization, and even the family can plot against him. The eldest brother of the Mo family, the head of the second house, Lingwu, Ninja, the Zhou family, especially the eldest brother of the Mo family, are inexplicably asking questions. However, the situation of death is just like this. The head of the Mo family even uses smoke to plant psychological hints for the protagonist. In the end, he can flirt with the daughter of the head of the Mo family. Is it true that the three senses follow the five senses?

No fun, you started making waves as soon as you came out! Can't you cut the stone by yourself? Want to introduce the heroine? Brother, if you can't hold on, you will die, be realistic.

It's just like the bloody domestic TV series, where a love story can be inserted into any subject.

I don't like the system flow too much. Without the system protagonist, it would be useless. Will there be a farming stream? I prefer the farming stream.

Gan, who is the first?

Apart from not liking class reunions, the chat group is so annoying. You can keep reading. Also, can you write less about the author's chat group? I listen to books and my brain is about to explode.

I am a poisonous person, I like to watch 😍😍

After reading it in one night, the protagonist can build his foundation in a few chapters 🙂

I hope there won't be that fat man anymore. Why do so many novels have a fat brother?

Damn this

What happened to fantasy? Everyone likes to rub it on the ground. Now you can hardly see orthodox fantasy. There are all kinds of suture monsters.

I just watched two of them. The heroine is also a cultivator of immortality. She should be cultivating the modified version of demon. Is she dead now or has she become a demon?

After a long time, I finally came across a book that doesn't require fan points to be reviewed. Let me briefly talk about some of the shortcomings I saw 1. I rarely encounter poems and lyrics in novels. When these things are used, it is easy to arouse relevant memories in readers. Maybe when I see this lyrics, I think of what happened at that time, and I instantly change from Coming out of the novel, this is not a good reading experience for the novel, and it is not very good at using it. It is very dramatic 2. The routines in the city are really uncomfortable to watch. The author may think that the theme of cultivating immortals is old, and the routines have been finished. It is wrong to think like this. It leads to a misunderstanding. You think the routines have been finished because you have only read this You need to think out of the box. Many things you encounter in life can be written as inspiration through secondary processing. This can avoid many intellectual plots. If you have to write down the weird people and things on the Internet, I can't help it. After all, you can pick him out of so many things at a glance. It is also fate 3 Protagonist Some of the behaviors and activities are very strange and do not fit with his character. It is easy to write people off. After thinking about it, not only the protagonists, but many people are written very strangely. It feels like an urban TV series. I don't know what words to use to describe this feeling. It is unrealistic and has a bit of fantasy. This is acceptable. It will be much better to write more books and practice.

I read a few chapters and found it uninteresting. The plot was too bland.

The character of Tong Yao'er is really disgusting. If you don't know how to write it, don't write it. Everything else is fine. Only the emotional line was written ten years ago. Mo Qingran is more comfortable. In the end, don't give me a whole Tong Yao'er who can also cultivate immortality. The plot will kill you.

, The author of this book is very brave, what can I say? Because of his book. Not like this century. But it's still fun to watch. If you have high poison resistance, you can try it. Or if you haven't read much of the novel, you can give it a try. I feel like this is a continuous trap. The version is a big mess. Why does the current civil service feel like a pornographic job?

Several days and more than ten hours have passed, and I am still the first to catch up with the latest updates. I am not the only one reading this novel, right?