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A country that has developed for more than 5,000 years, let alone breaking out of the solar system, at least has no problem jumping around the solar system. Your technology is not as good as that of the earth for more than a hundred years. The first chapter is full of troubles. Hurry up and start over. Otherwise, you will not be able to write any more soon.

In addition to the first chapter, the prototype of the story has been initially seen in chapters two and three. The story at the beginning is very cliche, but the narrative is well-organized. If it is written like this, it will still be popular among passers-by. It is recommended to change the part before traveling. First, the author's complaints are serious and not suitable for inclusion in the article. They can be placed at the end. Second, the mother of the attacker had a wrong motive for killing the protagonist. I can't guess the reason. Third, even if it is reasonable to kill the protagonist, in this kind of time travel, the protagonist should be very, very angry, unwilling, and painful. He should write a line about the quintessence of Chinese culture or curse. (Swearing is indeed bad, but you can see the character's emotions.)