The Mortal's Wan Xiaoshan

Author, you shouldn't let Dong Xuan'er enter the Bloody Forbidden Land. This impossible Master Hong Fu will not let Dong Xuan'er enter. In terms of emotions and resources, Master Hong Fu will not let Dong Xuan'er enter. Otherwise, Senior Brother Lu will never give up on Chen Qiaoqian and hook up with Dong Xuan'er. Moreover, it's too tacky for Dong Xuan'er to go into the forbidden area to reverse the protagonist's reasoning.

After reading it for three days, I finally persisted in reading it. Just a rant, hope it helps. The protagonist is a time traveler or a drug police officer. I want to ask the author, do you know the police? If the anti-narcotics police want to go undercover and obtain intelligence, they must first undergo strict training and protect themselves first. I don't understand. The protagonist traveled to a more dangerous world of cultivating immortals, but forgot how to protect himself. To be honest, I was very embarrassed. He was so cruel! There is nothing wrong with hugging Han Tianzun's thigh wholeheartedly! The problem is that you have to live until Han Tianzun ascends! Protect yourself always first! I hope I can write better and better!

Take a look at the heroine Dong Xuan'er! I can't read this book. Han Li picked up all the tattered shoes he didn't want.

Another mortal cuts the cock, little eunuch.

How obsessed are you with Qingyuan Sword Technique!! I have been thinking about the Qingyuan Sword Jue all the time. Just leave it alone. You can add to it at will on this basis. You can add as much as you want. As long as it is reasonable, no one will say anything about you. Why do you care about the Qingyuan Sword Jue? There is still a problem with the sword technique. You are not a model worker and have the strength to get 72 golden thunder bamboos. When you reach the spiritual world, you will have to plant 72 more.

It is recommended that the author read Mortal novels several times. If you have not read a novel to death, it is not recommended to write a fanfic of the novel. You can also learn the special effects of animation, but it is best not to use anime plots. The plots of anime are adapted, and the rationality and logic are not correct. Your readers are all bookworms, and they must have read Mortal novels.

Damn it, you disappeared for three years in 22 years and came back in 25 years. Is this a three-year appointment? The three-year period has come and we welcome the return of the Dragon King!

The author is still writing nonsense. Do you think the Foundation Building Pill is a bad pill on the street? You can take it out casually during a few short Qi training periods. Go and see how rare this elixir is in the original book? Just one pill is enough to kill countless casual cultivators. Moreover, the seven sects of the Yue Kingdom can only train a little bit every 10 years.

Another book is finished. You, the author, are so unreliable.

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