The Side Path to Immortality

As I read it, I felt a bit dragged out. There is no growth at all after dozens of chapters, and there are so many psychological activities. By the way, doesn't high comprehension mean high IQ? If you don't have a high IQ, how can you draw parallels? Just relying on some things from the previous life to successfully cultivate and achieve enlightenment? What's even more outrageous is that the first time I practiced cultivation, I expected the teacher and principal to be in class. It was outrageous that I succeeded. Then, when I went to get the fire fruit, I had a fight with the snake and my thoughts became clear. . The most incomprehensible operation is the operation of asking the snake meat to be taken back to eat, and the deer meat is said to be pitiful and not eaten by God. Of course, this book is not without its merits. The writing style is acceptable, and the subject matter is okay. It only writes a lot of inner dramas of the protagonist, and the protagonist has not grown much. After all, he has been alive for two generations, so it is better to write about indigenous people.

Apart from the suicidal intention at the beginning, the author's writing has gradually become better. Whether it is the white-haired boy's plan to cultivate a bride, or the deer spirit becoming a guardian spirit, or the upcoming Fengling Linggen Dual Swordsman, it can be seen that the author is very careful to create some exciting points that can attract people (lsp ecstasy). Since the competition for resources in the upper realm is fierce, you must collect more resources in the lower realm and cultivate your own foundation and team, so the subsequent plot should be more exciting. I hope that after the protagonist enters the upper world, the child bride will not be snatched away and cultivated by other forces like Doupo's Qinglin. After all, it is more attractive for a young wife to support herself. From the current point of view, the protagonist is in the middle stage of Qi training, and his strength is still relatively low. He has only mastered the thunder method, a relatively strong method, but the talent of Fu Li is very powerful. It should be a long-term method in the future, and it has the flavor of Zhang Jiao. At present, apart from being relatively small and not enough to watch, the plot is smooth, the writing is good at foreshadowing, and the refreshing points are dense. It is different from the popular Gou Dao school. The style of the harem-style cultivator is very obvious, but it is not a novice who pretends to be a slap in the face. It is worth watching. "Xiancao", if there are no major poisonous points in the subsequent writing, and you can use your writing skills to create more resourceful villains or supporting characters, I think it will have the potential to become a masterpiece (we dare not say that it has the qualifications to become a great emperor or a god). Without further ado, Mr. Lei helps me!

The writing is pretty good, and I can see that the author has put a lot of thought into it. If it maintains the standard, I will definitely subscribe to it. But there are some minor issues. Question 1: The protagonist wants to commit suicide at the beginning, which is not good. Question 2: The protagonist teaches fellow disciples Kung Fu for free, helps them fight zombies, and helps them obtain food. Are you sure this is an unrelated fellow disciple and not the son of the protagonist? Problem 3: The protagonist's talent is too strong. He often has epiphanies, encounters, and shocks the master. Too many of these plots will make readers tired.

No wonder this is the case. The male protagonist has a low IQ and keeps thinking wildly.

In the first chapter, he was persuaded to quit. The protagonist found out that there were no cheats and wanted to die Then there were cheats later. Did he feel that he was not strong enough and wanted to delete his account? Seeking life and death at every turn

It's a bit of a trick, and the main character has little to do with the story until it's released. One thing that makes me baffled is that the male protagonist is responsible for food and training resources, so what's the use of them? Wouldn't it be better to concentrate these resources on yourself? Not to mention taking them to the upper realm. They are just a bunch of weak chickens in the lower realm. Wouldn't they be even weaker in the upper realm, and they can't provide themselves with resources? If I have to provide them with resources myself, then what's the use of them?

It feels okay, I just like this one without plug-ins, I hope there won't be any plug-ins suddenly. . .

Just the pig-crying character that deserves a beating is really fucked up

I didn't read it, but when I saw the introduction, I raised a little bride, it was rubbish.

You might as well pick up people's wits... With a child to survive in this social world, you still have to avoid cheating. Come on, withdraw.

After returning from the drug test, the protagonist has no cheats and is still an ordinary person in Chapter 20, which is not as exciting as it is. It is quite sadistic. It is suitable for those who like sadistic people~

The protagonist behaves like a high school student

Test poison, food and grass There is no need to cheat, there are really any cheats, the halo of the protagonist is enough. Since I have the resources and talent, I can write a system that is weird and annoying. Anyway, I don't like system writing. The suicide at the beginning is a bit nonsense, but the writing style is quite relaxed, and it can be treated as a joke, which is probably (there is no point in committing suicide after traveling to another world-but, my father bought a daughter-in-law, that's good, don't commit suicide, go back and take a look.) At the beginning, I always felt that the subsequent development was dark and powerless. The opening village, Gu and immortal cultivation, human lives are like grass, cruel demon sect, inconsistent and mysterious cheap masters, and it feels like a mortal cultivating immortality and a immortal Gu. However, the protagonist's out-of-the-box ideas and unorthodox writing style are quite confusing. After entering the sect, the writing style becomes relaxed again, and the content is extremely dark and profound. I haven't seen the abuser for the time being. The untrained protagonist is quite powerless, but he has never encountered a deadly enemy that exceeds the protagonist's combat power. After encountering it, it gives people a feeling that he will start to abuse the master immediately. The result is twists and turns, which makes people speechless. After I started practicing, my combat power was pretty good. It wasn't as exaggerated as the Invincible novel, but it can be seen that it was no longer a torture novel. (To be honest, it is easy for the author to please both sides like this. Readers who like dark and deep crimes would prefer to see killings and decisive battles of wits while being unable to accept whitewashing. However, the setting of the Demon Gate obviously attracts this group of people. It is certain that the cheap master is not a good person, but at present it seems that he is whitewashing or copying Mo Juren's script) (If you think about it carefully, the background and plot are quite dark and sad, but... It doesn't seem to have anything to do with the protagonist? In a serious dark novel, the protagonist is so naive and leads a child to worship the devil. But if the author doesn't write a dark novel, why is the previous one so depressing, and is he not afraid of driving away readers?)

It's better to be a disciple of the outer sect crawling through the soul. This writing seems really boring. This master is also fake. He's invincible. Why would I accept you?

It is too difficult to adopt a little daughter-in-law who has been adopted for a few months. No one will complain about her father's death. But your little daughter-in-law will be criticized after her death. How can you survive in a harsh environment with a child of about one year old? The protagonist should rebel against society later on. Although there are no cheats, it is the same as cheating. Otherwise, the protagonist will not live for a few years, so there will be more and more unreasonable places. If you can tolerate raising children, watch it.

Very good, the author keeps writing. I hate Portable Space, Grandpa, and Control Panels the most. Just like playing a game and turning on the cheat code, you often get tired of it within an hour. Invincibility = boringớ ₃ờ

I've read ten chapters, but I feel like I've read them and yet I haven't read anything at all. I don't know what you want to write? I haven't seen any of Mao's heresy, bye bye

I have a small question, now that I have decided to die. Why not leave an offspring to the parents? After all, they are not dead yet, nor do they want to die. Now that I am old, I can no longer regenerate.

Why are there no chapter names? You scare me. . . Many books. . . . . . 🥺🥺🥺🥺

Is this book just gone? I've been chasing you for so damn long, and you're just going to give me up like this?

Why did the title even disappear?

Why did it suddenly disappear? I want to wait and see how the protagonist ascends to the upper world

This time traveler without plug-ins just wants to die. Such a time-traveler is still a god. He always wants to get something for nothing, so just die. Those who rely on the system and plug-ins are actually like puppets. Some of the plug-ins can still be looked at. The system is very disgusting.

By the way, there won't be any updates after it's released.

Why do I feel like this book is going to be a eunuch? ? ?

In the early and mid-term, we saw zombies practicing Waidan. I thought the male protagonist would ask his master to help him train his wife into a zombie. Now, the love gu is kept in the body of a zombie, and the male protagonist can take it back when he grows up. This way the male protagonist can practice faster and his wife will not die easily. Anyway, the subject matter of the novel is heretical, so it is reasonable for the protagonist's wife to be a zombie. . Waiting for nothing

To be honest, I was quite confused. Halfway through, I realized I didn't have the patience to read any more. But I really think this book is worth reading. Although the plug-in is not very obvious. It feels like the protagonist only relies on the protagonist's aura. Anyway, I feel pretty good. I keep seeing them catching big lobsters. But the problem is that I haven't seen it yet. It feels like there are fewer and fewer aspects of cultivation that I want to see. Until now, I haven't practiced many side sects. I haven't practiced much on the side roads, and the coffin hasn't been laid yet. It feels like it's going at a slow pace, but the slow pace is actually pretty good to watch. The key is that I don't have the patience to watch anymore.

Chapter 28 is completely out of touch with the previous one, and the main character that I liked last time lost its flavor all of a sudden. What a pity for such a good subject

Holding on until chapter thirty-eight is not my cup of tea.

Does the author still write books? Does anyone know about the new vest?