Global Card Game: I Loaded a Universal Card-Finding Map

It is true that the first chapter is too poisonous. A seedling who has just taken the first place in the exam is being worried about by others just because he has an awesome card. He can also be rummaged in the street to grab the card and no one cares. This is too outrageous. The most important thing is that the protagonist has no intention of resisting at all, and even wants to lick it. I don't understand...

Run quickly, it's very poisonous when it's released. There is a powerful woman who takes a fancy to the protagonist's cards and steals the protagonist's two highest-level cards. Then she is in a good mood and shows mercy and seals one of the protagonist's demonization cards. The protagonist has no idea of ​​revenge at all. It is expected that he may go to this woman to kneel and lick her later.

Poison points (energy) are completely useless. Bronze 9-star white will consume 90 points. The green quality you set will consume more. Those rich people's 9-star blue and 7-star red ones will be recruited for the first time. It was only 80 o'clock when the protagonist entered.

The plot of The Collector is really poisonous. The worldview of the whole book is that the bottom will always be the bottom. As long as someone at the bottom takes out a powerful card and is snatched away by others, it is really okay for you to be rewarded.

I have only read Chapter 20 so far. I just want to say, are the people in it mentally ill? Can't there be adventure at the end of the crane? In every chapter there are various questions about the protagonist. Author, do you think it is necessary to write this way? You yourself have written before that there are various cards in the mist world, right? It's okay for the protagonist to have some adventures and so on, so can you write about something that has your brain online? Try to write as few plots that raise questions as possible. It is easy to dissuade readers. After all, this time is not the time in 2011 or 12. Many readers are more disgusted with those. I have spoken out my suggestion. Whether the author considers it or not is your own business, right? It's your book anyway.

After reading 50 chapters, I remember nothing but 3 words: Crane tail

Isn't it serious? Please give me some small suggestions Author, after you finish writing a chapter, search for two words—— A hint of flash. There is almost a chapter of ten or eight. You can change these ten or eight sentences, just half of them, and the impression will be much better. The author's vocabulary is too lacking, and there are too many ways to express the protagonist's emotions. A trace of doubt and a trace of joy flashed all the time. My scalp felt numb while watching it.

It's enough for you to put poison as soon as it's on the shelves. It's enough for you to be a card collector. If the cards in the protagonist's hand are robbed, it's enough for you. Oh, I won't read it anymore.

The energy setting is fuzzy = unlimited energy It takes a long time to find cards. Is the map useless? Can't it be zoomed in or out? Is it difficult to find the exact location of a card? There is no sense of tension in the timing. Is the protagonist rich? A poor person who despises this and that. Where did this mentality come from? You have time to prepare but do nothing. Is the protagonist invincible? Do you have a lot of energy? Are there many gold coins? The most terrible thing is, is it difficult to find the mount card? I just can't find a strong one, nor a weak one? There are a lot of holes that haven't been filled yet. In addition to looking at luck, how does this card system identify things like qualifications? Still a monster! Tsk tsk tsk

After reading more than a dozen chapters, I realized that there seemed to be no way for me, the Liver Emperor, to survive in this world. The cards here either have to be bought with money or have a lot of European energy. Free prostitution is like being behind the wheel. Once you don't get a good one at the beginning, it feels like it's useless no matter how hard you try. Because when you upgrade, you need to enter the fog, and you need to get stuck in the fog. Adding African chiefs for free means you have no cards. If you don't have the cards, you will be useless. Being useless means you have not improved in the fog. What a vicious cycle. If learning things (such as fog knowledge, weapon skills) will improve the exploration of the fog, then you, the author, did not reflect this at all in the first copy. Throughout the first copy, all I could feel was how wonderful money is, how wonderful European atmosphere is, how wonderful are non-chiefs and civilians? It's just the end of the crane. You see, there are still many ways to survive for the Gan Emperor in reality, but your book does not reflect the fact that hard work pays off. Why is the protagonist the tail end of a crane? Because he can't do it, why he can't do it, because he is wrong, because he is poor, and there is no reflection of it because he is a salty fish. This kind of power system that only relies on wealth and European style is really annoying. I hope the author can pay more attention to this point. Let me give you an example. It is also a dungeon system, Nine-Star Poisonous Milk. Although the skills are very ordinary, the skill proficiency and so on make people feel that the Liver Emperor is also an Emperor.