Douluo: Reborn Hu Liena Becomes the Group Favorite in Wuhun Hall

Just waiting from here

Nana

Why! What! The big! End! It's over! I am a fan of Yan Na CP. Yan Na has always been in the cold circle. I have never had a full meal in four years after entering the pit. I accidentally saw someone recommending it on Baidu. I searched for it for a long time and specifically downloaded the Qidian App. I finished it in two days. I felt that the pace was a bit fast and the ending was rushed, so my suggestion is to revise it and add dozens of chapters. This is not enough. 😁 The author must be a novice, right? I feel that the writing is still relatively immature, the writing is not strong enough, the emotional conflicts are not intense enough, the visuals of big scenes are not strong enough, and some areas that can be refined are ignored, so it looks a bit ordinary, has no characteristics, and will not cause readers to have great emotional ups and downs. But this article has a good idea, the plot is smooth, and it reads smoothly. The key is that CP fans have finally found their way. 😭😭😭 Are you going to write about Yan Na in the next article? When will it be released? Mommy, rice, rice, hungry~

Although I don't think the protagonist is female. Keep at it and become a boss

Why don't you get married? I think it's better without a male lead😳. I haven't started watching it yet.

The writing style is very delicate, and the psychology between the characters is described very clearly and truly.        ，，，， Even though only one of the two could survive, Xie Yue did not hesitate to let her sister live. This brother-sister relationship is really enviable. I love the sister-protecting madman Xie Yue so much. In addition, the relationship between Tang San and Hu Liena is described very appropriately. They have ambivalence. After all, they were the people who loved deeply in the previous life. They gave up everything for him and were willing to die alone for the rest of their lives. Na loved and hated Tang San, so when she saw him again in her rebirth, it was inevitable that her heart would fluctuate. Show mercy when killing him. But Na wanted to protect everyone so that the tragedy in her previous life would never happen again, so she vowed not to show mercy next time. And Yan, the male protagonist of this novel, the man who protected Na for two lives, has a bad temper, but can restrain himself for the sake of the one he loves. For Na, even if it means death, I feel sorry for Na (even if she suffers a little skin injury), I hope Yan can catch up with Na soon, sprinkle more sugar, there won't be enough. I am very envious of Yan's sincere feelings. About Tang San's group of people, write less, it will waste your hands, time, eyes and people. (You don't have to be so detailed) Well, Na's soul power level is higher than or equal to that of Mai Xiaoya (after all, Na is one year older than Mai Xiaoya, and she has practiced harder). The protagonist of this novel belongs to the golden generation, and the protagonist must have the aura of the protagonist. I suggest that ① the soul bones for the Soul Master Elite Competition are Na, Xie Yue, and Yan. ② Let Na know that there are ice and fire eyes, and go pick fairy herbs (everyone should be upgraded to at least 5 levels). Shrek has it, and the Spirit Hall should also have it. ③Shrek went to Poseidon Island to practice. Yan, Xie Yue, and Na should go to Na's divine place to experience. ④Xie Yue and Yan should also have divine positions (their power and talents are not bad) ⑤Na's divine position does not seem to be very suitable among the god kings and first-level gods, so they can create their own. Yan can be a level one Vulcan. Xie Yue's own creation (the God King is unlikely) ⑥The final outcome of the battle between three gods and two gods (Yan and Xie Yue can become gods together with Shrek) A. The Spirit Empire wins, and Tiandou and Xingluo become subsidiary kingdoms B. The Three Kingdoms stand side by side. The plot of the novel is well-organized without feeling messy. Not in order, not straightforward. There are some plots that I'm looking forward to. What was the first time Mai Xiaoya saw Xie Yue? A hero saves a beauty? What did Mai Xiaoya and Xieyue do when they were not in school? Will Tang San die? Will the relationship between Mai Xiaoya and Xie Yue progress or be interrupted? I don't care about the final outcome of Mai Xiaoya (after all, I don't want to see my Xie Yue being snatched away) TH Pioneer author adds more {"NickName":"TH Pioneer","UserId":379435751}

I'm here from a male channel. Is there anyone here?

Let me introduce to you the update issues of TH Pioneer's "Douluo: Rebirth of Hu Liena in Hu Liena as the Group Favorite in the Spirit Hall": ①Two chapters are updated a day, each chapter is 2k, and the update time is random, usually once in the morning and once in the evening. ②Updates will be released on Saturdays and Sundays. The more support you have, the greater the chance of updates. ③If there is a shortage of updates for the day, we will definitely make up for it!

The author Baobao, I like the male protagonist and the female protagonist's characters very much. I hope Nana and Tang San will have nothing to do with each other Those who say they don't want a male protagonist, get out 😡😡

Was it written by a girl? The writing style is indeed quite delicate, and the fighting and other aspects are all OK, and the plot is not sloppy. There is indeed a big problem with your attempt to grab the throne of an angel. There is no way to grab it. Regarding martial arts issues, there is also Qian Daoliu. The second is to try to win a win-win situation. How do you say this? It is difficult, even impossible, because Tang San's mother and Xiao Wu's mother both died because of Wuhun Palace. It is impossible for others to win-win with you in this kind of revenge for killing your mother. If you change it, I think it will be better than many Douluo novels now. If you use your own settings to change it. Changing Tang San and Xiao Wu's mother to not be killed by Wuhun Palace would be useless even if the logic is correct. Because most readers cannot accept it. Your changes are too big. Or you can put it another way, even if Hu Liena keeps hammering Tang San, the effect is not great (after all, he is the son of destiny). In the end, the Seven Monsters and the people from Wuhun Palace (Qian Renxue Bibi Donghu Liena Yan Xieyue) became gods, and the two forces were almost the same. Then another favor came, and Tang San accepted it after seeing that there was almost no difference in power between the two sides. (For example, Hu Liena accidentally rescued the Blue Silver Emperor. When Hu Liena rescued the Blue Silver Emperor, she also gained great benefits. In general, don't let Hu Liena trade at a loss.) Then it's a win-win situation. You didn't violate your position and didn't affect the seven monsters. The difficulty is really high... (Personal opinion)

Nice ! Cheers to the author

Although I have just read a few chapters, I feel very good. To be honest, the writing is really delicate. I just read the comments here and said that it is a bit poisonous to grab the angel god. It is indeed inappropriate. Hey, it will be very strange if the setting of Qian Renxue inheriting the angel god is changed. The author creates his own god. For example, the god of love and beauty, the god of original sin, etc. Don't grab the angel god. It feels so inconsistent. The sense of violation explodes.

You can't abandon the article, can you? I'm afraid I've seen it in vain

At present, I have basically corrected all the problems pointed out by readers. I won't reply to everyone one by one here. Every once in a while I will correct the typos and let everyone know in this building. If a system bug swallows words, or picture information cannot be sent, it will also be posted in this building.

It is recommended that this book should not be married, so that most readers can easily accept it. Personal opinion

The only suitable god position seems to be the God of Desire, or you can create your own god position. The prototype can be Venus, the goddess in charge of love and beauty. I just happened to play with a certain light recently, the goddess of beauty 😏

Why can't I find the book club? 🥹

Why can't my monthly pass be issued?

Dude, why did your book get taken off the shelves?