
Diary of a Primitive Man
原始人日记
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- Historical
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- Alternate History
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Ghosts cry and wolves howl, I am very surprised. Ghosts cry and wolves howl, I am shocked. There is another ghost cry and wolves howling, a new beginning.
Xu Chen and Chen Xu are the same person
More than 90% of Qidian's original novels are of the fantasy genre, and less than 10% of the original historical novels are of the historical genre. Good-looking historical novels are worth less than gold. This historical novel is by far the best-looking one for me. Unlike other similar types, there are not some strange powers, but also some totem gods, or some strange plants and animals. I still like this kind of pure original writing.
A brief sharing on issues related to the transfer of gender discourse rights from a matrilineal society to a patriarchal society
There is a place in this book that I would like to share with you. The end of the matrilineal clan is related to the emergence of early farming. In fact, the truth is very simple. Whoever controls production and distribution is the leader. Blood relationship is only a subsidiary state. It is even said that tribes do not consider blood relationship to be distant at all. It is not as simple as the story in primary school history books about blood being the foundation of a clan, only knowing one's mother but not knowing one's father. I think this statement demeans the status and dignity of women. Animals all know that they choose strong mates, but after you enter civilization, women are not as smart as animals? The core of the right to speak is the control of the means of production and the ownership of the right to distribute materials. In the early days when fishing, hunting and gathering were the main focus, males mainly hunted and females mainly gathered. The income from hunting is unstable, meaning you will be hungry for two days and you will be full for two days, while gathering is relatively stable. Although it is not guaranteed to be half full, it is still guaranteed. The overall society is biased toward a matrilineal society. The clan will have an elder who will be the imparter of knowledge and distributor of materials, and will also be the leader of the clan. Usually this elder is a female. The first reason is that females have more gathering knowledge. The second reason is that the males who are mainly responsible for hunting in primitive societies do not live to be old. But things changed after humans domesticated cereals. People found that cereals were becoming more and more productive, and hunting was not as profitable as farming. Eating more will stimulate fertility, and a larger population will in turn require more farmland. Relying solely on females could not cultivate so much arable land, so males had to be introduced to participate in agricultural production, thus officially transitioning to farming civilization. Males are more advantageous in physical labor and play a huge role in expanding the scale of agricultural production. In terms of protecting farmland, males have more prominent fighting capabilities. Gradually, the right to speak began to shift. At this time, during the transition from tribe to civilization, wars and exchanges of interests continued to occur during the merger and integration of various tribes. At this stage, the female right to speak is gradually lost. Looking for relevant records from legends, it should belong to the Central Plains of Yanhuang. After the integration of the Central Plains tribes, due to annual battles, males basically dominated the society with force and productive labor, forming a father-in-law inherited by blood. According to legend, the abdication system was transformed into a blood system, the public world was transformed into a family world, and patriarchy was gradually consolidated, eventually leading to the oppression of women in later generations. Among them, the first large-scale oppression that was even engraved in the culture was during the Song Dynasty, and the second large-scale oppression was during the Qing Dynasty. Anyway, it's very fragmentary. The transfer of voice is also related to production redundancy, the emergence of private rights, and even early transactions and commercial prototypes. The author has a great heart when writing about this subject, but I wonder how much he knows about it?
A matriarchal society is not a female-headed society. It is a large family with women as blood ties. The head of the family is still a man. For the specific social form, you can refer to the lion group. Bows and arrows are useless, and slings and spears are more practical.
The protagonist's logical thinking does not conform to reality, and some of it is too confusing. Let me give the author a rundown of the development direction of normal people after traveling to primitive tribes: 1. First, solve basic survival problems (food + weapons), and cleanliness and hygiene (clean water, haircuts and nail clippings, bathing, clean clothes, lice elimination); 2. Develop urgently needed and easy-to-operate light industries ~ pottery making (partly for personal use, The excess can be exchanged with other wealthy materials for the population of other tribes), salt production (tracking sheep, deer and other animals, collecting rock salt to melt), fishing (building embankments to leave holes, weaving bamboo cages, weaving nets for fishing, openings on the ice in winter), digging ponds and raising fish; 3. With surplus food, you can continue to exchange and absorb the population, forming a positive cycle Ring; 4. With a continuously surplus population, it is possible to mine and make furnaces and make metal tools to improve and develop productivity, and then use the surplus metal to make arrowheads, spear points, and spear points; combined with wooden shields and rattan armor, it not only improves combat effectiveness, but also helps hunting and self-protection of tribes; 5. With the ability to protect yourself, you can In order to speed up transactions, absorb more people and materials, and then increase productivity, develop livestock breeding, planting, building houses, and city construction. With sufficient security and sufficient survival material foundation, we can further improve the quality of life (weaving, clothing making, shoemaking...), And then form a virtuous circle and continue to develop...
Many people are very concerned about getting salt quickly, but I feel that it is boring to get salt easily. This article becomes a cool article. This will soon cause other tribes to have nothing valuable to trade with you, and many of the things invented by you are not so interesting. The reason is that salt is too valuable. Many novels that occupy salt-producing areas in the early stage are like cheating. It is more reasonable to depict the salt-producing area as a rich ally or a big boss that can be annexed.
The author assumes that the diameter of a half-day journey for an average primitive person is the tribe's activity range, which can also be regarded as territory. It should not overlap with the territory of neighboring tribes. This setting is basically logical. A modern healthy adult man can walk 5 kilometers in one hour and 25 kilometers in 5 hours. The walking ability of primitive people will not be lower than this number. Therefore, if it is a plain, with 10 hours of activity time, the activity range of primitive people should be a circle with a diameter of 50 kilometers, totaling 1963 square kilometers. This is a very huge piece of land, which can be compared with the total area of Shenzhen City of 1997 square kilometers. Imagine that a group of people like the Ba tribe live in such a large area of Shenzhen. Isn't it a bit too spacious? ! A casual check revealed that the area of Jiangsu Province is 107,200, and that of Hubei is 185,900. If the Ba tribe has a population of 100 people (in fact, the U tribe's setting of more than 500 people is a bit too large. It is difficult to imagine the scale of 500 people for a primitive tribe in a mountainous area, where they grow like hair and drink blood). In such a large area, Hubei Province can only have a population of 95 Ba tribes, less than 10,000 people. A country as big as Hubei Province is considered a big country outside of China. I don't know if it was that big during the ancient Xia and Shang Dynasties. So I think the territory of a tribe should be greatly reduced, otherwise the population density will be horribly low. The entire territory of China is equivalent to the Qin Dynasty, which has a population of less than 200,000, and the first emperor of the Qin Dynasty can be called the emperor of the ages. The population is too small. In addition to the tribe's own technological advancement and farming, the plot of external exploration and conquest will be greatly restricted. Therefore, we should find ways to reduce the area of each tribe, or increase the population of a single tribe, which can increase the overall population density. On the one hand, due to the influence of mountains and rivers, the territory of mountain tribes will be greatly reduced. On the other hand, they will definitely reach plain areas in the future. Then increase the population of each tribe, and there can be more large tribes with 500 people. No matter how large the tribe is, they must master planting, otherwise it is unimaginable.
I have read more than sixty chapters, and it is a similar plot again. The weak protagonist goes to the strong man with a good thing, but the strong man refuses to take it away, allowing the protagonist to lose his temper, and the strong man keeps smiling. It's unreasonable for this kind of protagonist to live!
Every time I see Saga, I feel like the author is writing an original diary of a Japanese island. Your book will definitely be popular in Japan.
The rest of the book is pretty good. Why do I keep thinking about those mushrooms and sashimi? One of these two things can lead to death. The survival of primitive people is the most important thing. Even if the risk is only 10%, they would not dare to touch it. As a result, not only did you eat a lot, but you also pushed it to other tribes to eat together. If you don't have anything to write in the future, will you have to use mud to cover a table of mahjong?
How to say it? I can't stand it, the author stuffs shit into a burger that is obviously delicious.
In Chapter 20, people ran away all of a sudden, and they couldn't even find any salt, so they had to make paper! We still have to worry about weaving, and they are all naked! The original steps include normal food, salt, clay pots, weapons, etc., And then collecting them into tribes, so that food can be stably maintained and circulated, and the safety of the living environment can be improved! As soon as you pass through, you need paper and cloth. The author is really a delicate person. He would rather use stones to scrape in the wild than use leaves! No wonder there were many people before Chapter 20, but after Chapter 20, they were just like Leng Muqiuqiu!
The protagonist's generation can be enfeoffed to expand the living space of the ethnic group. At least half of the 800 years of the Zhou Dynasty's enfeoffment was spent fighting and integrating other ethnic groups, which is why China has a profound foundation behind it. It feels a bit empty to directly achieve feudal unification in one step. After all, what can one generation do in primitive times? Roads and environment cannot be solved by one generation. In the end, if the area can reach a city, it will be invincible. Our ancestors also slowly came out in a small place.
Maybe it's because I prefer paleontology, so I know a little more about paleontology, but this book written by the author creates a great sense of separation from what I know. As far as human combat effectiveness is concerned, there is clear evidence so far that the ceiling of human unarmed combat effectiveness is to kill a leopard with bare hands. A single person with a weapon can kill a tiger. If multiple people cooperate to throw spears and javelins, the mammoth will be a pile of meat. From the existing fossil and archaeological evidence, no creature has been found that can threaten the dominance of Homo sapiens. On the contrary, since Homo sapiens stepped out of Africa, creatures on other continents began to undergo mass extinctions in "genus" units.
Why do you keep eating sashimi? It's freshwater fish. . . . How should I put it? Even during World War II, the problem of parasites could not be solved. I can only say that if the halo of the protagonist is removed, there are primitive tribes who really like to eat sashimi, so the destruction of the tribe is inevitable.
Why not use modern writing and have to create a new kind of symbolic writing on our own? The reason why the predecessors were groping for roads was simply because there were no roads. The main character is a time traveler, and there is already a two-way sixteen lanes. You can run, crawl, or lie down. Don't stick to groping and exploration. If you have knowledge, you might as well just write a savage.
If you want to read an authentic original novel, it's best to read Survival in the Ice Age. Don't mess with any systems, Qi, strange beasts, and cultivation are all a mess. I don't know if there is
Is the protagonist constantly reincarnated? Still ageless? It feels like a primitive person can't write long...
Has someone finally written the original text? I really love this kind of subject, but it's not very popular.
I only like two original novels so far, one is "Back to the Paleolithic Age" and the other is "I am a Primitive Man". Apart from time travel, there is no supernatural power, and the various developments are more logical and less poisonous. I haven't read this one yet, so I don't know what it's like. Support it first and give some recommendation votes.
The little mother-daughter wild man Ye, the protagonist should accept it. Otherwise, in a few years, she will be matched with other wild men. That will be a big poison. It is a part of giving away daughters that many Qidian readers cannot accept. You can add a background of life. For example, Ye is not from the tribe, but was picked up from outside by Ba, so there is no blood relationship. Then the conditions are good, she is well-fed and clothed, and she is raised to make Ye whiter. Now it is almost a cultivation type.
The top of the science and technology tree is enough to reach the Western Zhou Dynasty. Systems, customs, etc. Can all be considered in the Western Zhou Dynasty. It will be difficult to develop further down. It will be affected by factors such as productivity, population, roads, wild animals, and the environment. Oh, by the way, there is also the evolution of humans and the increase in brain capacity. Therefore, if you are serious about it, the finale can be reached in the Western Zhou Dynasty. To sum up, it is best for the author to write according to history. Xia, Shang and Zhou, systems and customs, food, etc. May not necessarily be the best, but they must be the most suitable for that era. It doesn't look out of place.
Super pretty. Thank you to the author for your hard work There are suggestions. I hope the author will add pictures when new tools are available. There are several other weapons that the author can consider Blowgun It is also a relatively easy weapon to make (it is a commonly used hunting tool by many Native American tribes in the tropical rain forests of Central and South America) (The prototype of the boomerang) Throwing stick (A traditional weapon of Australian indigenous people for over 10,000 years) It is a hunting weapon used for war and hunting animals. It is different from the curved flight of the return boomerang, but flies in a straight line. It is larger than the average boomerang and can hit enemies or prey from a long distance. Its general range is about 60-120 meters. Flying Stone Cable Flying Stone Cable. Flying stone ropes are made of ropes or leather straps tied to stone balls. Its characteristic is to throw stone balls together with ropes when used, and use stone balls to hit or rope ropes to restrict the movement of beasts and capture them.
5. Residence should be caves, houses, small forts (houses with defensive and observation properties), Guo (small cities), and cities in order. Each stage must have a defense system at each stage. Build a defense system based on the economic foundation. Do not insist on building a Chang'an city for twenty people. This wastes people, slows down development, and is not conducive to defense. The gain outweighs the gain The location of the city must be carefully considered. The era and location must be considered comprehensively.
I feel that it would be much easier if the wolf could be domesticated and could hunt. The author could think about how to arrange the encounter between the protagonist and the original wolf 😒
This is the best book I have read in its original form. At first I thought the rattling sound was not good.
Teach the ancients to eat sashimi, are they not afraid of parasites? You still think that if the water is clear, there will be fewer parasites and bacteria. Does the author have no common sense in life?
The author, on the one hand, taught primitive people to wash their hands before eating and after using the toilet, and on the other hand, he taught primitive people the intelligent operation of eating sashimi. He wrote the plot for the sake of plot. You deserve the bad grades in this book!
Song Jiang in Xunyanglou wrote an anti-poem, but Huang Wenbing took advantage of it and wanted to arrest him and hold him accountable. "Don't worry, brother, Wu Yongnai and I have been friends for many years. His name is Zhiduoxing, and I am the King of Ideas. We have a good relationship for a while. As long as I use a little trick, I can help my brother out of trouble!" Dai Zong laughed. "What's the plan?" "Brother can mess up his hair, splash his urine on the ground, pour it in, and pretend to be a wind demon." "High!" One day later. Song Jiang was in the lobby of the government office. One Buddha was born after being beaten, and the other two Buddhas entered Nirvana. He couldn't bear the beating, so he had to fight and was taken to the death row, waiting to be executed. Dai Zong went straight to Liangshan for help. "Don't worry, dear brother, as long as I use a little trick, I can help Brother Song Jiang get out of trouble!" Wu Yong laughed. "What's the plan?" "Write a false reply. When the wise brother goes back, he will say that the Grand Master will send Song Jiang to Tokyo, and we will be robbed nearby." "Wonderful." Three days later. Dai Zong was tied up and beaten until his skin and flesh were torn, and blood flowed out. Unable to resist, he had no choice but to fight. He was put in a big yoke and thrown into prison. "Don't worry, brother, I have a plan to keep me waiting for a few days." In prison, Dai Zong comforted Song Jiangdao. "The plan is out?" "I have a good friend Huang Kongmu..." Six days later. Song Jiang and Dai Zong had plaques tied on their necks, glue was applied to their hair, and a red silk paper flower was inserted into their heads. I am having a long break and say goodbye to wine. "Don't worry, brother, I have another plan..." "Brother, I want to be quiet, you'd better stop talking."