Transmigrated as the Villain's Divorced Wife

Since this is an ancient world, the shopkeeper in the town shouldn't address any ordinary woman who comes to buy something as "Madam." Nowadays, "Madam" is a respectful title for married women, but in ancient times, it was reserved for women of a certain rank. Using it incorrectly would be punished. Generally, one would address her as "Lady" or "Young Lady."

I quickly sketched it out; these two look quite like a married couple.

To be honest, I just don't understand what kind of genre you're writing anymore. It's a mess. A clam spirit is one thing, but then you add a system. And then there's this whole "heavenly way" stuff and all that fancy stuff. If I remember correctly, your novel's title is (Rebirth of the Villain's Divorced Wife), right? That's way off track. It's not that the writing is bad, but something just doesn't feel right to me, so I'm leaving.

I drew Xiao Zhiyu and Nanzhi.

Although it's quite good, I don't quite understand what kind of story it's trying to tell. At first, I saw there was some kind of disaster, and I thought we'd have to flee, but the disaster wasn't too big, and we managed to get through it. I thought the male and female leads would hide things from each other, but they just confessed everything to one another. I thought the transmigrated woman from the previous life was really bad, but it doesn't seem like she is.

I asked tentatively, "Why was the original owner divorced? Judging from the current plot, the original owner didn't do anything wrong. It's okay if I can't reveal the answer."

I think there are some things that could be considered. After the earthquake, the female lead's brother immediately came to visit her and helped repair the house, even though it wasn't actually damaged. However, when the male lead returned, the female lead didn't even think to go back and check on her parents.

It feels like a tangled mess...

I initially thought this was a farming novel without any cheat codes or spatial systems, but it wasn't. It veered off course and even became increasingly fantastical, which isn't my type.

It's too long. I couldn't finish after 200+ chapters. Honestly, for a romance novel, overly long stories are hard to accept. I think after the famine ends, the couple should just directly confront the transmigrated woman. That would keep the plot tight and grab the reader's attention.