Wuxia Across the Heavens: Storytelling in Zhangjiakou, Huang Rong Tips Me

I don't know how the author managed to put all these poisonous points into his book. Is it to disgust people?

To be honest, I really don't want to read a joke about mindlessly chasing the heroine. Times have changed. What everyone lacks is women. What everyone lacks is money and power. At first glance, it was written by a young man. The old bookworm is determined not to live long. Also, when I started writing about the main character's appearance, I praised him for being a lowly person. No more foil. . .

Zhutianliu cannot have a single female protagonist. Either there is no heroine in Zhutianliu who simply seeks immortality and transcendence, or there are many heroines in the harem. I want them all, and then I will take the chickens and dogs with me to heaven. It just can't be a single female lead. Because having a single heroine means that you have to allocate resources to let her grow with you, and she must be able to keep up with the growth rate of the protagonist and cannot be a sheltered vase. In other words, this book is equivalent to two protagonists. And when you write it, you must convince the readers that you, the heroine, can keep up with the protagonist's growth rate, is not a burden, and will never betray you. I think this will definitely not work. 99.9999% Of authors cannot write it.

The first part was okay, but for the sake of the plot, the protagonist forcibly suggested that Mu Nianci compete in martial arts to recruit a bride and persuade him to quit. Who is the protagonist Yang? It was a life-long event for the daughter's family. An outsider proposed a competition to recruit a bride. They would not let his adopted daughter and Guo Jing fall in love for a long time.

Nowadays, people no longer like to read novels that are about flirting but not marrying. The more ambiguity there is, the more poisonous it will be to others! Also, the protagonist likes to follow the main line every time. Could it be that the author can't write without the main line? It's a lie to say that it can't be changed. If you kill a character, it's impossible that you can't change it. This person no longer exists, and there's no way that the next person will be born again! Also, there are so many exercises to choose from, and you have to choose Tongzi Gong. How many people do you think like Tongzi Gong?

I finally understand why the results are not ideal. The woman you wrote has to seduce the protagonist. You are overly obscene.

There is nothing to say if you want to pursue Huang Rong. The problem is that you miss the point. After Guo Jing comes into contact with Huang Rong, you should first get rid of Guo Jing from Huang Rong's heart. For example, the information that Guo Jing is engaged is more sincere, warm, and upright. There are several people who are Guo Jing's opponents. Then it will be possible if you follow Guo Jing's path. Also, this book is seriously inconsistent with the title. How many lines are used in the story and how many chapters are used in picking up girls? Such a good subject matter is wasted.

It's quite funny. A eunuch who chose boy skills at the beginning asked everyone to suggest who should be the heroine.

I didn't bother to watch the boy-selecting skill when I saw it. It's even more disgusting than deliberately blocking the realm.

Also, does Huang Rong like Guo Jing because she spent so much money on her when they first met? The author was led astray by the self-media. First of all, Huang Rong is not short of money. Her father is the owner of the island and has seen a lot of great things in the world. Secondly, Huang Rong was well protected by Huang Yaoshi. She was only 16 years old when she first escaped from Peach Blossom Island. She pretended to be a beggar to protect herself. In fact, she didn't have much concept of money at all, which can be seen from her ordering food. How can you spend money like this when you meet for the first time? Because there is no need to spend money on Peach Blossom Island. In terms of wealth, Yang Kang and Ouyang Ke are both richer than Guo Jing, right? Are they all handsomer than Guo Jing? Why didn't Huang Rong like them? What Huang Rong lacked was care and love. Her father was so obsessed with martial arts that he had no time to care about her, and her mother died young. Senior brothers and sisters are dead and disabled. She is so in need of love. Guo Jing showed just the right amount of concern and it just tickled her.