In Order to Cultivate Immortality, He Joined Baihua Sect at the Beginning

I have read Chapter 50 so far, and I want to read on, but there are some flaws that I really don't know what to say about, and the more I read, the more uncomfortable I feel. One is the issue of the protagonist's qualifications. I can understand that his qualifications are middle to lower, but he told his roommates that his qualifications were about the same as theirs, and later he suddenly changed his mind and said that his qualifications were yellow in order to give the wine to them. He gave it to them in the hope that they could grow up as quickly as possible and then feed the protagonist back. Then his cultivation would progress as fast as his red qualifications. Wouldn't these two be suspicious? If he doesn't need the nectar, his progress will be as fast as if they use the nectar, so if he uses it, he will be far behind them. One is the protagonist's explanation of his own abilities. Later, I kept emphasizing to my roommates that it was my unique skills that made them feel comfortable. So how should we explain this situation when the protagonist was explaining the exercises to one of them? In the case of inconsistency, why not simply set it so that when you meet others, you will easily make others feel emotional?

Hey hey

Big logic problem. First of all, no matter how hard it is banned, it is impossible that no man will succeed in cultivating immortality. Because this ban is artificial, there will definitely be loopholes. Let's leave this to the setting for the time being. Another point is that the male protagonist comes from a red mansion and is the type to be beaten to pieces. I personally don't think this image is very flattering, and I think people who have had this kind of experience may be afraid of women. It is absolutely impossible for them to react immediately to women when they see them like in the book. They are still very proactive and happy. This gives me the feeling that the male protagonist is just a hairy machine, and he will be green to everyone. Personally, I think the best image of the male protagonist in the beginning is that he had a miserable life in the past, was sold to his parents, and received guests in a red building. As a result, he developed a kind of extreme thought, misogyny, and hatred of this society. Therefore, I want to cultivate immortality to make changes and take revenge. Then it's about enduring the humiliation and growing up. The scene in the Red Mansion doesn't even need to be that cheap. The male protagonist can be the top one, not entertaining many people, and they are all respectable big shots (which can be used as a foreshadowing to help the male protagonist in the future). In this way, the image of the male protagonist at the beginning is more inspiring. As for the male protagonist's sister, I feel that according to this setting, the best ending would be to forget each other in the world. Because even if it is written that the younger sister had no knowledge at the time, or even opposed it but it was ineffective, parents will never be able to get around it. So either the sister knows and agrees, leading to the ending of revenge, or she doesn't know, leading to the ending where the male protagonist knows that she is innocent but cannot feel at ease because of this experience, and in the end can only forget each other in the world.

The protagonist has been exploited for so many years and is enthusiastic about cultivating immortality. Can he not lose his temper (both psychologically and physically, especially psychologically) with the slightest physical contact? I think it would be better to be less erotic.

Looking at the introduction, there is a saying that women are inferior to men. Shouldn't the White Flower Sect be a men's sect? 🌚🌚🌚

This kind of subject matter is rare! The transformation stream back then was also booming and was in a trance. Later, it was completely wiped out by the blue and silver entanglements. I hope the protagonist can transform as soon as possible (ಡωಡ)

Let's make a bold guess, it may not be correct Is this pig's foot the epitome of the author's heart? To put it simply, the author also wants to dress up as a woman, and also wants to enter the Baihua Sect! (moustache, dog head)

It would be more appropriate to rename this book "A Duck's Cultivation of Immortality" or "A Tale of a Human-Demon War"

To be honest, this novel cannot be read with your brain. Add 1 skill point to the same skill, and you can infinitely copy haircuts to earn skill points. And people like Taotong, who are like maids, don't dare to refuse.

Although I have only read a dozen chapters, I am really disappointed. It is said that it is a novel about women, but in some places, for example, all sects only accept women, and men are useless. It is too deliberate and too divisive. What is the reason why men are inferior to women? It's not that men can't cultivate immortality. At any rate, it's better to have some qualifications than women. Furthermore, it does not reflect a world of immortality where men are inferior and women are superior through the subtleties of life. In comparison, although I don't like the aggressive and scumbag male protagonist in "The World of Immortals, where men are inferior and women are superior," its world view and details are really well done, making it really feel like a world where the social atmosphere between men and women has changed emmm

Very beautiful, a book of fairy grass!

When the protagonist's level is high, he can think of ways to use his identity as a big sister to lure the newbies who come in. Finally, he takes out the big baby xxxxxx on the bed, which is about 100 words long.

The introduction is already very exciting, and the content is quite interesting. As long as there are no problems later, I will continue to follow it.

I think the plot design is very good and interesting. In a world where women are superior to men, and each sect only accepts female disciples, the protagonist sneaks into the Hundred Flowers Sect to practice, and relies on golden fingers to continuously improve his cultivation and combat power, as well as his disguise skills. There are also some plots where he has sex with beautiful women or faces crises. If he writes it down well, it will definitely be a fairy tale. But I feel like there is something wrong with the author's setting of the protagonist. According to the setting, the protagonist has experienced hundreds of battles. How could he be disgusted with the flower demon's wine? Moreover, the reaction when in contact with women is a bit too much. Although it can be explained by the attraction of immortal cultivators, I think it is more suitable for the protagonist to be calmer. In addition, the protagonist sometimes upgrades his skills, and his choice is a bit problematic. For example, when there were two options: empty water and disguise, the disguise skill should be upgraded. Even if you upgrade the water control skill, can you still resist it once you are discovered? Moreover, there is no big danger for the protagonist when he stays in the sect. It will be a little dangerous when he helps Hong Mu subdue the demon, but he is also protected by the talisman, so there is no need to improve the combat skill of water control. On the contrary, if the camouflage skill is too low, it will be seen through by an elder with advanced cultivation. No matter how strong the combat power is, it will be dead. Just some choices like this show that the protagonist has a little IQ, but not much.

Let me guess, will the protagonist be split into two people, a man and a woman, like the Summoner?

The writing was quite good in the early stage, but the more I wrote, the more it tended towards nonsense literature. A basic sentence can be reread three or four times in a few pages, and it also reads stiffly. Some things and backgrounds should be described sideways through character dialogue as much as possible, so that the background can be properly explained in the process of fleshing out the characters. Instead of repeating a sentence in vain, which will make the readability plummet, like a foot wrap.

There's something wrong. The protagonist has been a prostitute. How can he still be so horny?

For the sake of word count, the author has given up on keeping the article concise and easy to read and conveying the meaning in every word. There are a lot of repeated words between paragraphs, and the artistic conception is confusing, making it difficult to read smoothly.

You can't whisper, you can't

The internal investment has passed and the contract has been signed. We are just waiting for the status to change. Please feel free to read! Today is Friday, and the status will be changed on Monday at the latest. Finally, please collect and read it!

I feel that since the protagonist entered the sect, he has lost the spirit of risking everything to change his destiny against the will of heaven.

Is this novel a novel about cultivating immortals or a novel about supernatural powers? ! Why is your Hundred Flowers Sect so powerful, but you don't have the ability to just plant seeds? ! He even has the ability to read minds, haha ​​🤫🤫 What kind of plant can do this? ! It's impossible to say that it's your potential, your talent that was inspired by the seed, right? ! How do you usually know personal information without searching for souls, entering dreams, and collecting personal imprints left in the world? ! 🤫🤫 The more powerful a person is, the stronger his personal aura is. When the magnetic field is the aura, how do you break through this barrier? !

Not bad

I don't like to imitate this kind of cheat, it's simply a waste of words

Can any book friends tell me about the style?

By the way, what kind of civilization does the author intend for the protagonist to build? Can the protagonist use his supreme power to change the situation of female superiority to male inferiority into male superiority and female inferiority?

It's okay to watch it without thinking. I was short of books and took a look.

It's just a female figure, it would be very uncomfortable if she was a pervert