As the Younger Brother of Superman, I Have Become a Native of the Motherland

The more I read, the less interesting it gets. The more you go to the back, the less interesting it gets. The superheroes who can obviously be slapped to death just don't kill them, leaving them with a low word count, and readers feel like they're all being taken advantage of.

It started well, but the more I write about it, the more rubbish it gets. You can still read Supergirl in the future before the green light comes, but you can abandon it after it comes.

No, I can't watch it anymore. I'll come back and take a look in a few days after I've recovered. The protagonist agreed to equip his eyesight, but in the end, he just followed the plot of the TV series. You don't know what will happen next, but it's always right to make more preparations. I don't think you have any training for those subordinates. You know it all day long and have a cold face. You don't even decorate your own base, even if it is good. Give it a facelift. You are not required to prepare hundreds of plans like Batman, but you should at least prepare a few plans. A little person jumps out and a third-rate villain comes out, and then you go up and beat him. Moreover, the unitization between plots is so obvious that it is almost the same as a TV series. I thought I might be able to write a longer and better series if I support you, but I didn't expect to see something like this when I came back—it's not a bad series, but it's definitely not a good one.

I paid to watch it because of the story of Superboy. In addition to the Superman IP, Superboy also has many weird superpower confrontations. I have no interest in DC, and I have no interest in DC superheroes such as Wonder Woman. I am more interested in the Joker than DC superheroes. So when DC superheroes appeared one after another, I basically left it alone I watched the characters of Professor Schiller next door, but I was still interested, so I came here to know the difference between the two.

How should I put it? After watching it, it feels like I haven't watched it. I have no desire to continue watching it, and I don't have the feeling that I don't want to watch it. It just feels ordinary. . . The author who can write this kind of feeling is also an np

The author's fighting is too draggy, but the rest is very good

The people of the motherland are too weak and cannot compete with Superman!

One thing to say, the author, this anti-theft thing is really cool. So far, I haven't found any published chapters on the Internet. Does the author have any special background? That's why we can do this

Go high and low, I was attracted by the introduction. The previous plot was very disdainful, but the main character's character of being able to do whatever he wants and being invincible seemed very exciting, but the subsequent plot was a bit speechless. Clark was forced to be darkened, whitewashed and darkened, and there were a lot of DC villains. You have to choose Superman to start the plot. I'll be honest. By the way, most people who read American comics have a favorable impression of Superman. This is tantamount to directly hitting the gun. When Jonathan died later, the protagonist cried, which was very funny. He has superhuman abilities but not a superhuman mentality. Logically speaking, the protagonist should explore the whole world and extend his father's life, instead of dying in the author's writing. So cowardly

... The subsequent plot is like Aunt Wang's foot-binding cloth, the whole thing is *! Superman has gone dark, ah! Superman's girlfriend has become evil, ah! The female reporter has become evil, ah, the supporting character 123456789 has become evil. After you become evil, I will become evil 😴😴😴. The personality of the protagonist is getting lower and lower, and now the psychological activities of the supporting characters are most described in the whole text. Are you writing about the people of the motherland, the superman, or the supporting character award? The group portrait didn't leave the protagonist aside.

In order to write the plot of Superman without interfering at all with Superman's awakening? The whole world is drunk and I am alone awake? And it's very annoying for the protagonist to talk to Superman halfway.

Well, any opportunity to change the plot has the protagonist leaving to make soy sauce. Apart from mindlessly bragging about Cthulhu and the Motherland, the protagonist has done nothing in so many chapters. It can be said that the plot will develop like that without the protagonist. ... Water, water

I'm about to give up the book after reading the third chapter. I rewarded you with two coins just to leave a mark. So speechless. The protagonist is set to be a gangster, and the template is from the motherland. Does it have to be a giant baby? Brainless, bad, what about the restraint and caution of the Chinese? Is there no secrets after having a new foreign parent? Personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it

Does anyone know whose trumpet this is? Qidian has thousands of works, how come this book allows Qidian to hold an event alone?

I advise the author to take advantage of the popularity and think about your outline. You, a native of the motherland, do not cause trouble. Superman's daily expenses are really trying to persuade people to quit. The plot is too homogeneous. The enemy appears, Superman is decadent, the protagonist attacks, the enemy retreats, and then the next round. Moreover, the positioning of the supporting roles is too awkward. There are many characters, but the role of promoting the plot is too little. It feels like you are holding the identity of a supporting role, but doing the work of an extra. There is no surprise when it appears, and it has no impact if it is removed. The beginning and creativity are really great, but start high and go low. Even if you don't know the word count, skipping 20 chapters won't affect your reading. That's a huge problem.

XDM, you died from poison, don't recommend wasting money 😐

The more I watch it, the more I feel like it's watery. I don't watch DC, so I don't know what the original work is like, but I'm a little tired of watching Superman's dark transformation and mischief every three days.

I have kept it since it was put on the shelves and now I think it can be sold, but what I didn't expect is that it is written into family ethics. The key is that I still turn on the automatic subscription. I never expected it! Oh, let this be a lesson

There will be templates other than people from the motherland in the future, right? Such as Hyperion, Fighting Sword, Sentinel, Super Kryptonian Hale, Silver Superman, etc.

Ever since you became the president, you have started to write down. If you don't want to kill superheroes, then you can just live your own life regardless. If you want to kill those superheroes, as a time traveler, you know the plot, wouldn't it be easy to kill them? As a result, you were caught and rescued here. How about playing house with children here?

The main line of this book is the darkening of Superman - the correction of the protagonist's personality - the darkening of Superman again - the correction of the protagonist again... In this cycle, Superman Clark is just like the brainless SB, always darkening and misunderstanding the protagonist. The protagonist is a mature adult who is always on the road of not knowing what to do In short, Boring, just like the flashback, every major event, Superman must be darkened. What's more interesting is that the protagonist can fly for a long time, and Superman learns to fly. I thought it was interesting when I first watched it, but then it became more and more boring. Superman Clark and the personality-modifying Clark are either darkening or on the road to darkening. In one word, they are absolutely perfect.

Drive high and go low! ! ! ! ! A native of the motherland? ? ? Are you sure it's not "My Little Life with Superman"? Am I here to see you delve into the inner world of the Superman family?

Whatever is written in the back, if you read it normally, you will definitely subscribe. You will not regret it later. The author keeps feeding you. You can't kill a person for dozens of chapters. He can slap him to death. Hey, it's just for fun. If you don't kill and wait for someone to rescue you, you can cause trouble again. Especially since Batman didn't die until the eunuch in this book. He was killed five or six times in the middle. Hahahahahahaha I'm crazy hahahaha

I want to see Henry's version of Superman, not the plot Superman. I was dawdling, my patience was almost gone, and I wrote about Superman around those few points every day. The plot is not very exciting and there are too many people blaming themselves for this and that. It's like falling down in a pit and falling again next time. The more I look at this superman, the more disturbing it becomes. The people of the motherland are also becoming more and more strange. You may say they are similar, but in some aspects they are not as good as others. They are not alike. What kind of influence are you talking about? What kind of milk is not loved? ? ? For most people who come to see Superman and Homelander, their first impression is of the movie version of Henry Superman and Homelander in the Black Robe TV series. From the opening to the pre-orders until now, the plot is mediocre and boring, and some of the added characters have no idea what they are for.,,, There is a plot, and there is a plot, and there is no plot? Does that mean that after the plot is over, the book will be completed if you become silver? It's a pure TV plot, just add a person who doesn't look like a native of the motherland? And that template is really a lot of complaints. I won't talk about the first one, but the second one is really pure and simple. I really don't know why. Should the third one also have a purely physical upper limit, and then have no special features? The first one is very distinctive and distinctive. How can the subsequent ones continue the power of the villain and hero without adding some villain characteristics? After all, it was mentioned in the opening that he is a villain superhero, and he is not a superhero who can do justice. Wouldn't it be better to let the people of the motherland become the ancestors? Wouldn't this attract subsequent readers Although I don't know how to subscribe, but starting from the second last shift, I am sure that the posts will keep dropping and I will not be able to retain people.

Drive high and go low, every few chapters Superman becomes black and then clears himself up, then darkens and clears himself again. Especially the shocking plot twist. Inexplicably, I gave up and had no desire to continue reading.

Eric - the original core of chaos, enter the great demon king. Vampire germs entered Eric's body, and the crazy primitive animal nature began to gradually eat away at his sanity. Eric, who had a vague will, murmured inexplicably. Kara and Green Lantern couldn't hide the smiles on their lips after witnessing this. When Eric's will becomes more and more blurred as time goes by, when his sanity completely collapses. The dark and deep universe connected by Eric's dream world responded to the call of madness. A bizarre and absurd lullaby played in the deep darkness, and invisible dancers danced around Eric. They were not welcoming him, but trying to prevent his resurrection. When the reason is completely asleep, when the will returns to nothingness, only blindness and ignorance can save this dead body. In the deep universe beyond the earth, a huge eyeball shaped like a rust-red planet emerged from nothingness. It made a celestial sound that was difficult for human ears to hear to welcome this time of awakening! The second template - the original core of chaos, the demon king Eric, emerged from the ancient darkness. An incomprehensible murmur came from His lips. Looking directly at the gods is an unbearable burden for mortal life, and hearing the voice of Azathoth is the greatest honor in their lives. But mortal things are just mortal things after all. Seeing Azathoth's majestic body, the indescribable pollution caused their bodies to collapse into a pile of rotten flesh. As the sounds of the celestial bodies play, more and more indescribable gods appear in the dark universe outside the earth. Their majestic bodies even cover the starry sky! But the weak mortals fell into madness by looking directly at the gods, and all creatures became the favored ones of the gods, except for the Kent family who were favored by Azathoth. (There is no such thing as a percentage of unblocking, any infinite fraction of an infinite is infinite)

I have no idea what the author is writing about. Is this League of Legends? This is a complete family drama and a complete waste of time and readers' money.

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I feel that Eric is acting a bit like a salted fish now. This plot development makes me think that he is more casual and has no lofty ideals. But I personally feel that the soul of a book must be reflected in the ideals of the protagonist. Now the protagonist not only has no empathy with the readers, but the main line is also unclear. And most of the readers actually come here for the fellows who want to have sex whenever they want. This is okay in the beginning of the plot, but gradually they no longer look like fellows.

I personally think it was well written in the early stage but I couldn't understand it in the later stage😭