The First Emperor Who Swallowed the Starry Sky

If you don't have the ability, don't write a book. It's embarrassing.

Traveling back in time, you are the emperor, and you have to lead the development of an entire country. You are running here and there by yourself, and you still have a lot of things to do at home. This seems a bit uncomfortable.

It is set that Qin Shihuang is the protagonist, but it is when the universe first opened. I am speechless.

Come on, keep working hard, I believe you will write better and better

Qinglong clone gene 18 times?

Based on my more than ten years of reading experience, I can tell that this book is ready for the palace, and it would be a waste of time to write it again.

This plot left me confused

To be honest, at this early stage, the whole article can only draw on some of the cultivation manifestations and the final sea of ​​chaos, which is almost like starting a new book. If the writing is not good, the writing will not be good at all. If it is to connect the history of the original work, then casually compiling a relic or a golden finger system that has only been over 2,000 years can be written down, and no one will complain about it.

It's too ink. Why don't you travel around the country and write a hundred and eighty chapters before starting the war? Now I'm just trying to persuade people to quit.

I have thought about this idea, but what I was thinking about was that the Three Kingdoms of Gaowu recruited a younger brother into the starry sky. The golden finger of the protagonist is luck. The more luck, the higher the understanding, and the more adventures there will be.

Can't rise,,,, have you considered the will of the universe? How do you think the original ancestor was sealed? You can't touch the Ancestral God Sect. This is the son of the will of the universe. All the mountaineers are excluded. You don't think that the will of the universe doesn't know that you are an outsider? The immortal level can go back in time, and a lot of people can hold you to death.

The subject matter is quite novel. I will give you two monthly passes. I hope the author can write about the domineering demeanor of the first emperor of the human race. As for the poisonous clones, there are actually clones in Swallowing the Stars. As long as the clones are not described in too many pages, it is not considered poisonous.

Let's change the name... An emperor struggles alone, why is he writing about the First Emperor?

Let's get to know the history of Qin well before writing.

Was the original ancestor suppressed in the early days of the universe? It's hard to communicate without a virtual universe.

Who is the First Emperor preparing to replace?

Big cheers for the author! Although I haven't watched it yet, the genre is novel! As long as it doesn't collapse, it should be fine.

The hang-up is too big, it's best to suppress it with some settings later, otherwise the protagonist will be called a saint before the world beast comes out.

I would like to express my humble opinion. I think the first part is okay, at least I can continue to watch it. Although this Qin Dynasty does not look quite right and has a lot of pitfalls. The setting is to swallow the starry sky and the earth, which makes people feel weird. But overall, I can continue to watch it. In fact, I don't need to say anything about it later. You must know that I will take it. What should I say next? The following story is too boring. I don't know if I feel this way alone. At the same time, it also reveals a strange feeling. On the one hand, it is said that Luo Feng and others are not from the same era as the original Earth, and at the same time, familiar NPCs like Nolan Shan often appear in the original work. I don't want to say anything.

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The front is okay, except for the title of God of War and General, which is a bit weird. The problem of Qin Dynasty can be explained by the predecessor of the earth. There is no need to write about Luo Feng. You can write about the protagonist developing power and leading mankind to the top. Come on!

Qin Shihuang is in the Zhetian branch of the heavens.

When you write about the First Emperor, don't talk about the beginning of the universe. First, you say that the earth doesn't even know it exists anymore. In the original work, Hu Yanbo died for more than 50,000 years, not to mention that he lived for more than 60 million years. You talk about the beginning of the universe and then you write about Qin Shihuang, good guy. Then the Source Star and the Mountain and Sea Realm before the Earth, are those things from the last universe era?

The level is too bad. Isn't the grand master better than this?

After writing it, it will disappear...

Have you come out of Cining Palace? Tie Zi, please do some homework😊, use your little finger to search on Baidu! It's so embarrassing!

I don't like the novels written by (virgin author) a bit now…………😓😓😓😓