Stop Pretending, What You Are Talking About Is the Autobiography of the Heavenly Master!

To be honest, in addition to the novel subject matter, the writing style and the logic of the story are completely confused. If it weren't for your good subject matter, you would have been thrown into the trash heap long ago.

I really can't stand a book like this where the plot relies entirely on coincidence. It's so weird.

I don't think there is a need for such coincidences to happen frequently. Of course, these two stories just happened to show off the protagonist's ability. What I am worried about is whether the subsequent plot will also be such a coincidence. If it is such a coincidence, it will be difficult for people to think that it is not the protagonist. After all, this kind of thing has never happened before. However, it is also possible that the boss department of Zero One Bureau is the same as the department in the movie The First Ring. That department always said that there is no trick in the world, and then found a more reliable reason to say it. It doesn't matter whether you believe it or not, as long as the person who caused the accident believes it. Although they know that there is really a trick, they must say that they did not hide the matter because they are unable to deal with it. Haha, I am also curious about why the movie "The First Ring" is not able to destroy the trick. It would be nice to have some auxiliary abilities. The result is that the trick can be taken over by touching people. If you keep touching and changing people, you can only kill the person to let the trick die together. At the end of the movie, the trick seems to be not dead. It is so unsolvable. You can ask the protagonist to tell some stories that have happened before, and these stories are similar in the files of the 01 Bureau, such as the tomb robbers who stole the rice dumplings and were killed in them, took a car and took a trick bus, engaged in side ways to transport poisons or harm people, engage in evil and evil sorcery, etc., Those batch in the 01 Bureau When there is no coincidence, look at the previous files to see if there are any similar things in closed or unclosed cases. The protagonist can just talk about what just happened when he encounters a coincidence. It is hard to say whether a closed case should be reversed. To reverse the case is to slap oneself in the face. Although the closed case is closed, this weird thing is still there, Zero One The game needs to be eliminated. New events take time. Now it seems that many people have forgotten the time. It has only been a few days when so many things have happened. I am shocked. It is impossible for the protagonist to travel through time and new things happen every day. This is the same as those fantasy and hot-blooded time travel stories. The original owner's life experience Nothing happened, but it turned out that the protagonist seemed to have a mark when he traveled through time. It was outrageous that the goddess, fox demon, and villain all ran here. The protagonist was either fighting or on the way to fight. Just after fighting a small one, another big one came, and then the bigger ones continued in a cycle. It was very tiring to watch and could not take a break.

Is there really such a person in reality? After three super hits, I said something for a while and then stopped saying it. I will wait until five super hits before talking about it. Is it true? Such a person

What kind of retarded zero-one game is this? So many things happened, and they were reported to superiors and the country. It feels like a small team of people are performing a one-man show with the protagonist. It feels like everyone else is fake, just to praise how powerful the protagonist is. Are everyone else fools?

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It's too poisonous. The author chases the readers to feed him poison. He won't give up until all the readers are poisoned and abandon the book. The whole text forces wisdom, coincidence, and accidents. If there is no supernatural situation, it forces an accident. In one sentence, it poisoned me to death. Give it up. Come on, fellow Taoists.

It's the same as last time. After more than 10 chapters, the readers started to be discouraged. Then the readers almost ran out before the protagonist's IQ came online. The author really has you.

It's hard to watch without thinking. Really, the story-telling parts are okay, but from the beginning of the movie, it's outrageous.

How many times can you tell a movie that lasts for more than an hour? How can you broadcast it live for ten minutes in one day? I learned how to talk about movies with Douyin Kuaishou, but they are making videos and you are live broadcasting, okay? The best thing is that every time you say something, something happens. Are you the source of terror? You can completely change what happened in reality. It would be outrageous to copy a movie or story that is directly based on it!

The studio has started a new theme. I have seen a lot of this kind of stuff recently.

It feels like these kinds of books have fallen into a strange circle You tell stories, make movies, storytellers, and write novels. These are all introduced concepts. For example: You are making a movie and moving to the Uncle Nine series of movies At this time, do you need the plot, characters, scenes, or anything else to be the same or similar to the movie? ? No, it's not necessary at all! And too many coincidences will only make readers feel insulted to their intelligence! You only need to make sure: 1. The monster is a zombie 2. The breath-holding zombie cannot sense 3. The glutinous rice removes the poison from the corpse 4. The peach wood sword can kill ordinary zombies This is OK, then the movie you make will naturally be discovered by people, and people who are very reasonable will think that as a director and screenwriter, you are unusual in throwing out concepts Why does every stone have to be fake and look exactly like in the movie? ? ? ?

Let's put it this way, it's a miracle that this anchor is still alive. On the first day, he found out that just saying the same thing as what is happening has already put you in the game. He also allowed you to continue broadcasting and rewarded you. You are overthinking it. Secondly, the logic does not make sense. In the first incident, the captain said that you are master and cannot be disturbed without arresting. The director does not believe in ghosts and gods, and then there is only one captain in charge. There are ghosts and gods who have such magical things happening and they do not report it? Save it for the New Year, and this is just happening in one city. If you look at the number of people who die every year across the country and there is no response like this, then it can only be said that they are all stupid and incompetent. Anyway, I don't understand your logic and there is a problem, and you tell a story and one thing happens. I am the leader and don't care about anything else. I invite the protagonist back and ask him to tell you all the ways to restrain and eliminate ghosts.

Before reading this book, please flush your IQ down the toilet so that you can start reading it properly. . . 88

Start a live broadcast, and halfway through the live broadcast, people who come in later will automatically know what happened before. It's so magical.

There is no market for brainless books. This is obviously a batch work of a studio, winning by quantity.

What a miserable comment section...

After reading the first story, I have a few things I want to complain about. I don't mean any harm, so don't complain if you don't like it. 1. Conflict setting. The setting is that the official tone is materialism. I don't believe there are weird things in this world, but there is a Bureau 01 specially set up to investigate bizarre cases, and it is strictly forbidden to spread horror-themed works. This is outrageous. Most of the cases solved by the Zero One Bureau are committed by people or accidents. If the existence of ghosts and supernatural beings is not recognized, is there any need for the existence of a paranormal investigation department? It is assumed that no one in this world has ever been exposed to trickery, and there is no way to conquer trickery. However, it is said that China has a long history with countless masters, and they are not involved in cause and effect. So where did these masters and theories of cause and effect come from, and who approves them? 2. Insufficient details. An official organization actually chose to put it down lightly when handling an incident that resulted in the death of many people and nearly imprisoned investigators. There was a big problem with Tan Shui but it was ignored. Even if you don't believe in the mysterious god, at least send the water to a laboratory to analyze whether it has hallucinogenic ingredients, right? Otherwise, how can we ensure the water safety of local people? The person in charge of a paranormal investigation agency is actually a staunch materialist. He did such an unreasonable thing and treated it as an accidental closure without even checking the local files. Is this just to try to get him to go bankrupt tomorrow? The protagonist tells the story live throughout the whole process. Your paranormal investigation department has to ask the protagonist, right? Even if you don't believe this, you still have to wonder how he knew it, right? He actually ignored it like he was blind! What about the public security department? Why are you doing everything in one go? When setting up this department, were there any confirmed or suspected supernatural incidents? 3. The system rewards are too big, and some of the protagonist's behaviors are also very problematic. The first reward is a few years of life plus fighting skills, and a cash reward of 100,000. After the first story is told, he is given ten years of life, a god-level painting skill (although it can only be imitated, not original), and a mirror. The protagonist's reaction is actually disgust. Tell a story and the protagonist's life span is ten years longer, but the protagonist actually dislikes it? Then all I could think about was the 20,000 yuan gift money he received during the live broadcast, pointing out that he was relying on this to become a well-off person. I really didn't know how to complain about it, it was too dramatic. Also, when someone asked what happened to Gui in the end, an anchor who told supernatural stories actually boasted that he had shot Gui to death. Aren't horror stories just to scare people? Whether you claim to have personal experience or exaggerate how weird and powerful you are, it's all about scaring people and leaving a deep impression on the audience. Is this the protagonist? Are you afraid of scaring the child into crying so you need to comfort him quickly? The civil servants from the 01st bureau over there also followed the boast. It was really... There is no malice, but I was a little bit unhappy when I saw these points. I wish the author good health, a spring of literary thoughts, and an early becoming a god. Come on, author.

Each organization and department has been established for such a long time, and these organizations are written like idiots. I can't stand it.

I haven't seen the back yet, so I don't know that there is such a thing as a ghost. After seeing the skills given by the system, I still don't know that I am disgusting.

Let me tell you a joke. The director of the Paranormal Bureau is an atheist.

Forcibly subduing one's wits is extremely embarrassing and poisonous.

Classic completed? What happened at the starting point?

I have a question, why are there so many people who write about weirdness? There are no ghosts like Uncle Nine who want to see it. This series is all about weird plots and killings. It makes me vomit.

The word count is too few Look at the introduction, it's interesting Look again, there are 67 chapters in the series, forget it and keep it.

No, it's another awesome book that I don't know about. Isn't it disgusting?

It seems like I can't write a book without a system.

Generally, the title of this kind of book is adapted from the whole cast, and the introduction of the protagonist is an invisible pretense. At first, it was like, am I so good? Why didn't I know? All the coincidences won out later, that is, I am so good, it all depends on my own efforts! 🤓

Taoism and Taoism are randomly arranged. There is a saying that wherever there is injustice, there is old Taoism. Grandmaster doesn't care what nationality or race you are from.

The plot should be developed in a different way. The anchor failed to attract investment to make a movie. The storytelling plot was terrifying and the live broadcast room was blocked. By chance, he got the black technology of the system. At midnight, he could appear in the room number of major live broadcast platforms. The midnight horror story telling room where the face could not be seen clearly.