Start Swinging the Sword from Konoha

I'm Shennong, and I'm here to talk about poison. This book is poisonous! ! Poison 1: 15 years old at the beginning. How old you are at the beginning is not how old the time traveler wants to be. But isn't it a little late? ? The normal pace in the world of Naruto is to go to school at the age of 6. 12 Graduated genin. The genius ninja Itachi awakened the kaleidoscope at the age of 12 and slaughtered his clan at the age of 13. 13-Year-old film grade. You start at 15 years old. . To be honest, too old! ! ! Poison Point 2: The pure samurai system in the world of Naruto? A bit off track. . . If the pure samurai system can rise, the Kingdom of Iron will not be alone. . In the world of Naruto, I should study ninjutsu. I am really drunk when I learn sword skills. At this time, someone has to ask, isn't it Konoha White Fang? ? People add ninjutsu, commonly known as ninjutsu. I'm really convinced by Pure Knife. . Touting the power of other world systems in fandom is poisonous. It is even more poisonous to not use mainstream power in fanfiction and to use eliminated power to defeat mainstream power. We watch Naruto, not Samurai! ! Poison No. 3: God-like advancement Start at 15 years old. After one year of practicing swordsmanship alone in the mountains according to the swordsmanship provided by the system. 16 Year old chuunin. Only attack means knife skills. He wandered aimlessly out of the village and became a 16-year-old jounin through 3 chapters of killing chunin and bandits from other ninja villages? ? If you practice hard and make no progress, go out and kill the fish and advance as you please! ! At the age of 17, he had an epiphany while fighting with the Third Raikage with his life hanging by a thread. Direct film grade? ? ? And then the sword skills? ? There's one thing to say, it's really awesome. Please, stop wearing the ninja shell! ! ! You are incompatible with that world! ! ! Poison Point 4: Does the system have a position? Occupying Konoha? Or peace in the six realms? ? The golden finger brought from another world actually has a stand. Killing Chuunin will give you +100 points, killing White Zetsu will give you +100 points, and destroying White Zetsu's surveillance perspective point will give you +50 points? Rescue Konoha Ninja three times to get +500 points? ? Stop, what are you doing? ? Do you serve the protagonist, Konoha or Six Paths? ? ? Points for rescuing Konoha ninjas? ? Do you get points for destroying the Bai Jue Watch Point? ? Who are you serving? ? Off-topic: Isn't Bai Jue's greatest role in research, one-click packaging for system recycling? Is there any difference between you and a puppet? Do you have independent thoughts? Do you trust the system so much? Poisonous Point 5: The protagonist has no purpose after he has the strength, it is all about self-impression. . The protagonist is not a ninja. Otherwise, I wouldn't have been exposed to the task of becoming a genin after graduating from the Ninja Academy. Hunting wild boars while practicing alone in the mountains? Feed yourself? Uncertain lifestyle. . Okay, I'm not a ninja so I can leave the village at will? Then kill ninjas from other countries. Bullfrog, Bullfrog, wherever you go you can encounter chuunin spies from other countries acting alone in the Land of Fire. After rescuing Uzumaki Kōryō and his daughter from the Land of Grass, take them to Konoha? +500 Points for changing the tragic plot? ! One thing to say, one is moved by oneself. . Oh, and the transformation technique changed his appearance into a strong one from the Uzumaki clan? ! No, you don't want subordinates, you don't have time to train them, and you don't know how to train ninjas. . A ninja who is not from any country, wanders around incognito, and then goes to the Kingdom of Thunder to kill. After a while, he ran to the Kingdom of Wind and killed everyone. Resolutely safeguard Konoha's interests. They are all incognito. What is the picture? ? Do good deeds without leaving a name? ? Give me a purpose Summary: The self-fantasy of a pure samurai who travels to the world of Naruto, stands on Konoha's side and remains anonymous.

I glanced at the table of contents before reading the content, and found out that I defeated AB in more than 30 chapters? Wait for me, Shennong, to cook you

It feels uninteresting. Even a time traveler doesn't know what he is doing?

What you wrote is not cool at all. I thought I could see a cool battle like that of a great swordsman.

I feel that the writing is very good, and it meets most of the key points of a cool Naruto novel. Although some of the power advancements are unreasonable, fortunately, the plot is not procrastinating, and there is almost no water injection. The sixty consecutive chapters are either improving or on the way to improvement, which is rare in similar novels. Unfortunately, the author's way of writing may result in Naruto having nothing to write about after it is released. My advice is not to suddenly change your leveling pace, start thinking about what the next world will be now. Don't write about pirates, it's already been written badly. . . You can write about One Punch, Pacific Rim, Owen or Marvel, etc. (You decide for yourself, I'm just a suggestion) If you suddenly change the pace, it is very likely that both sides will not be pleased. In the early days, the pace was fast and some people were persuaded to quit, and later when the rhythm was changed, another group was discouraged. Guess who else will read your novel? At least the transition should be slow, and you can't hit the brakes all at once. How to do it can only depend on the author's skill. I can't write, I'm just a reader expressing suggestions haha

Defeating the Third Raikage in more than thirty chapters 👍

What's his name? What is his name! ! He is Han Feng, the name of Silly Patch Ban, he said how he was created, it was the result of the obscenity of fishing.

Why don't you upgrade a skill first, but you have to upgrade a skill and maybe reach the sixth level? Is this stable win situation going to lead to a life and death crisis (prepare to deal with one type). I'm really unhappy.

Good guy, I just work for Konoha

Author, the title of the book is missing the words "" and ""

The main character's name is considered extremely poisonous. Wouldn't it be better to copy the name from a Japanese comic? You can call it Rukawa Kaede.

Naruto's pure swordsmanship is a bit boring. It's interesting to have various illusions, ninjutsu, and assassination techniques.

The name is Han Feng, just two words. As for the strength, Chapter Four kills Chuunin, Chapter Seven discovers and kills White Zetsu, and Chapter Thirty One defeats Kumogakure AB combination. I think everyone should know the quality of this book. If you want to add poison resistance, just read in.

I read three chapters. Tell me what you saw in the three chapters. ………… I wield the knife every day for one to two years. I know nothing else and became a chuunin. Within three steps, he can kill a Jonin. Awesome, I was really shocked when I saw this sentence. What kind of concept is it for an author to write such a unique article? ………… The cheating device is true love for the protagonist. Although it is written as a fee, in fact, whatever the protagonist lacks, the system will provide it. Then come, this is the protagonist's sudden reward. What kind of holy mother is this? She loves pig feet so shamelessly. ………… I read the book after reading the reviews. A dog reviewer said that this book is very reasonable and very helpful, so I read it. Here I want to say something to that dog, I am ****.

I thought the word "zigong" didn't show up at the end, but it turned out to be just a sword swing. The title of the book is really disappointing. If the author had been more ruthless, he could have made a name for himself with the title🐶

Started punching kindergartens and kicking nursing homes 😎

Why aren't you in prison yet? This is the only point I am curious about. Everyone knows that the writing is bad, and you are the author and you know it, but why do you torture yourself and your book friends?