After Marrying My Childhood Sweetheart and My Archrival,

I thought I was marrying the hero's childhood rival...

Sigh, it turns out that I am already so old. This kind of Japanese two-dimensional male protagonist seems to take me back to 10 years ago. I thought that these days should be the kind of era where I would tell you if I like it or not, and I would not say anything to you.

I feel like the title is wrong. I want to read the title: Battle between Tiansheng and Qingmei.

Why do all the love stories nowadays feature women being strong and men being gentle? It feels so twisted.

I forgot which book I recommended it for. This book has a lot of references to the books I have read before, but the writing is good, and this kind of small theater format is relatively rare. There is a small problem. Some places, especially the transition in the small theater, feel a bit abrupt.

The way you describe it doesn't sound like they are mortal enemies. They feel like strangers.

After reading more than ten chapters, I feel that the author's book is simply a stitching monster, but the good news is that it is completely stitched. First, he was the writer and painter in Honey Chicken's "Sister", then he was the childhood sweetheart in Kiss Pig's "Falling in Love with My Childhood Girl", and finally, he was married first and then fell in love in Zi Qian's "After Becoming Roommates with the Marriage Partner". It's very interesting, keep writing!

The writing is pretty good, but I don't know why but I can't stand it anymore. I feel like it's tasteless and a pity to abandon 😭

Each chapter was good, but it felt messy and incoherent. The change of relationship seems very sudden, and some of the emotional processing of the male and female protagonists are simply omitted. It makes me uncomfortable to watch. I hope I can see a better you in the future.

You can remove the "of".

When I first read the title of the book, I thought that the male protagonist married his childhood sweetheart and his nemesis. That is, the male protagonist is A, his childhood sweetheart is B, B's nemesis is C, and A and C are married.

Write well, it's well written, don't care what people who haven't read it say.

Come on, it's obviously a story about two people, but I thought it was a love triangle when I read the title. After marrying my childhood sweetheart and my arch-rival, the title seems to be a love triangle. If I change it a little, it would make sense after I marry my childhood sweetheart and my arch-enemy.

I thought there were losers. What a pity.

Qingmei's rival or something?

At the beginning, it felt like the enemy. It felt good and I thought there would be a twist later. But by the second and third chapters, it felt like it was not the same novel. How can I put it, it was strange. . . . Sort of. .

Childhood sweethearts, childhood sweethearts, eventually lost to the sky.

Behavioral changes are too divisive. After all, they are enemies.

Marrying a rival you have known for a long time can be understood this way

Come on, author. It's very interesting. Support.

Those dialogues feel a bit like crappy vernacular, so embarrassing

I guess it's a novice author who has never been in love.

The writing is good, another dog food article delayed by the title, please improve it.

I felt it from the title, and it turned out to be true. My ability to express logically is so poor, it looks weird.

The heroine's best friend was not a routine before. Did the heroine say that she has a group of handsome guys? Then nothing happened?

So embarrassing, so full, I feel so anxious to see it

Why can't everything be equal On both sides, one is strong and the other is weak?