Madam, I Am Really Just a Scholar

Major poisonous point 1: too many "m" words! Major poisonous point 2: too many plots to reduce intelligence! Now he is dead from poison...

If you don't know how to write, then don't write. Damn it.

The plot at the beginning is like this again, basically changing the soup without changing the medicine. In the past, the mother was the maid in the beginning, and then the male protagonist suffered all kinds of misfortunes. In your beginning, although the mother is the mistress, because of this matter, you are not as good as others. You might as well become a poor scholar, and then answer certain test questions correctly, and be recruited by someone to recruit a son-in-law.

I should look at my mother-in-law more often in the introduction.

The author has little experience in this kind of situation, so you have to explain that this is a novel written by a novice. Also, don't listen to some people's nonsense. Do too many words count as a serious poison? At best, it's just a random rehash of bad writing habits. What is the major poisonous point? In Xiaobai novels, the major poisonous point is the cuckold protagonist, who suppresses the protagonist and the writing style is depressing. For Xiaobai Shuang's articles, don't think about expressing your desires before suppressing them. It's best to report your revenge on the same day, or reveal a successful revenge plan for readers to see (for example, the villain baboon howled wildly in the previous chapter, and the pig's feet transformed into Lao Yinbi in the next chapter, giving He arranged it clearly. It doesn't matter if you can't finish one chapter of this revenge. It would also be good to have five chapters describing in detail how the villain baboon was manipulated by the pig's feet.) Let's put aside the issue of whether to reduce one's intelligence or not for now, and just make it generally logical and reasonable. After you practice writing until your writing skills are up to par and you can handle plot arrangements, you can then consider the portrayal of characters. Let's put it this way in your novel. The villain, the baboon, dances wildly in front of the readers. It has not been dealt with until now. Originally, your protagonist has moved the location to avoid contact with them. Cold treatment is also a good way. Wait until the pig's foot is strong enough to arrange the baboon before letting the villain appear and let him dance wildly for a chapter. At this time, the book friend's mood of wanting to mess with him must be very strong. Then you arrange the baboon in the next chapter. Wouldn't it be very comfortable? But what you do is, when the protagonist's ability is not up to standard, you make the villain baboon jump and taunt you. You are a new author and have no reader base; your writing style is not good enough to make readers continue to watch the angry plot; the number of updates is still small, and the plot only advances so much every day. It is equivalent to waiting a month to resolve a pimple, and being angry for a month? Anyway, I don't have that hobby.