My Immortal Journey of Despair in 40K

See Chapter 478. This article contains a lot of AI copy and paste, and it has not even been reviewed manually. There are many text vocabulary sorting methods that are not visible with the naked eye, but will feel awkward when using audiobooks.

The beginning part is very well written, but from the middle to the end it feels very unmotivated. Because there are too many wars and they keep fighting and fighting, you can just write something interesting. After I reached 50%-60%, I no longer had the urge to read any more. The opponent can't kill the protagonist, and the protagonist can't kill the opponent. There seems to be no output or change. The subsequent process is very simple and template-based I can even guess that the next step is just to finish defeating this planet, and then go to the next planet to continue fighting. There may be four vendors' men to kill the protagonist or something. Then the protagonist shouts long live mankind and fights back and forth, which is really boring. Nothing has changed except recovering the planet. I don't see any advantages to humans, other than becoming an e-demon [joking], this is just a lost primarch template. I wrote about loneliness

It is recommended to give the protagonist the dimensional weapon among the three bodies, the dead line. All dimensions can be reduced to zero-dimensional nothingness. How about getting some more Foundation containment items. Or the evil god in Cthulhu is integrated into Warhammer 40k. Or the potion system in Lord of Mysteries could be improved a bit for humans. At that time, humans who become the weird gods of sequence 0 may still survive. How about adding a little more weirdness to the mysterious resurgence, letting humans become ghost masters, and creating weird demons? How about some more meme pollution? It is recommended to sew these together. Make Warhammer 40k even more chaotic. Let the entire universe be destroyed and there will be peace.

According to scientists' calculations, two billion years from now in the real world, the Milky Way and the Andromeda Galaxy will collide. At that time, a supermassive super black hole will be formed. Because the number of black holes in the Andromeda Galaxy exceeds tens of millions or even hundreds of millions of black holes. Earth and solar system. Far away from the Milky Way and the Andromeda Galaxy. It is suggested that the protagonist go to the earth and stay for 4 billion years. By then the Milky Way will be wiped out. The nearby Andromeda galaxy is gone too. Four billion years later, the universe is at peace. Form a super black hole. Devouring all nearby galaxies. The destruction of the universe is the peace of the universe.

Come on! ! !

The writing is a bit mindless and cool. What is the concept of thousands of immortal Astartes? You can directly jump to the Eye of Terror. From then on, chaos and order are exchanged, and the demons directly become ordinary people. Imagine thousands of Dooms in the demon's hometown, and even the fourth aunt can't play.

OK. 1. I think the settings are OK. The system is here. The biggest difference is that Evil God Explodes retains certain functions. Unlike other books, it communicates with the system to complete tasks and give rewards, which is quite good. 2. At the beginning, the original body's strength is immortal + the emperor takes the initiative to recruit people and bless them on the spot, leaving no opportunity for the four vendors to take advantage of. It is very comfortable to have no worries. 3. From a strange angle, directly enter the world and pull the man over to push the boss. It's not a game stream, but it's a time-travelling experience that comes with a bonus resurrection. It's fun to see how the Fourth Scourge plays the subspace club. Finally, I should not mention that I have been in the Warhammer pit for four or five years. I have read a lot of official copy and fan animations. I am a newbie who has fully understood the setting. I am really desperate for the official original version of Warhammer. The entire 40k series is full of a sense of powerlessness. Sometimes I think about crossing over and becoming an Astartes to fuck Chaos, but I always read on the Internet that if you slip in and commit suicide immediately, otherwise you will be captured by four people who are having fun, I have also seen what they say: When the Emperor saw you, a 3k pure-blooded human, he happily teleported the Custodes Cursed Legion to come down to fish for people. After fishing, he found that his mind was filled with the settings of the Four Gods. He was beaten to death by a powerful psychic on the spot and then squatted on the ground crying. So I was very happy to see that this setting adheres to the original work and can come in to change the plot, especially when it also deceives a lot of fun people. Come on. Can you sleep without updating 10,000 words a day? How did you, the author, fall asleep? Inquisition Loyalty Warning. If you don't do it properly, I'll take you to the golden toilet and kneel down to write!

I think the four vendors are actually not very powerful, they are just jumping around in a river system.

Immortality, isn't this the evil god's favorite toy? May the four evil gods watch over you.

Wang Ming

Is the change okay?

What about lobster? ? Why not conscript the lobsters? ?

Since you are an immortal, if you want to save the empire, why not sit on the golden toilet and just get down?

I don't know that the protagonist is by no means hopeless. When I started reading the novel, I couldn't understand the sentences and the semantics were confusing. I was quite desperate anyway.

To be honest, Warhammer's combat effectiveness is not that strong compared to other works in terms of settings and expressiveness. It's just that its worldview is super disgusting. If you are interested, you can learn about those nonsense setting data of GW. GW plays chess first and then writes the book, so you can see all kinds of outrageous overturning scenes. It really does not mean that those characters have any special purpose, it is just a bad dice. In addition, various fan creations have been included, resulting in a mess of the plot. You can only see the general direction, but you can't see the details at all. It's purely a mess, and it's all up to the fans to go back and make up for it.

This book is so painful to read! It doesn't feel like Warhammer at all, so what kind of parental care is it? Brother, are you writing Warhammer? The writing style is like that of a primary school student. How about changing the subject matter? I feel like you don't know as much about Warhammer as I do.

Group dressing... The toxicity of this thing is probably similar to writing a pornographic book whose subject matter is gay, and it directly eliminates most people.

Immortality, in Hammer's worldview, is not entirely a positive buff...

It's unbelievable. The writing style is like boiled water and makes me feel crazy and desperate.

Brother, your writing style is like failing the Chinese language test in junior high school.

There is also a system that will give you immortality, but you actually work for Huang Pizi? Huang Pizi and the Four Gods are immortal! If you don't want to transform yourself into a killer, you will at least have to start a new one! How can you, a Chinese, stand up to these civilizations that embody all the dregs of humankind and not change them? Even if you don't want to die, why don't you give the four gods a few beatings and they won't be honest? Without the four gods causing trouble, it would not be a matter of time before a person with a non-crazy mind would find a way to defend against the evil gods of subspace through development. To put it bluntly, they are just four small people whose influence cannot spread beyond the Milky Way.

If you want to continue reading, you have to throw away your brain This book just borrows the world view, and the characters are hundreds of times different I just can't hold it anymore

Let me tell you this, author, your writing skills are not as good as those of my nephew who is in elementary school.

An outsider named Wang Ming is commanding the troops, and this comes with the disastrous debuff.

Star Traveler

Around 700 chapters. It is remarkable that a minister of the interior can turn over and over again and write so much if he no longer wants to work.

Author, I really can't finish this book, so I'll start another one with the Warhammer IP.

I haven't read anything about 40K, does it affect my reading?

How to say it? The first 600 are really good, and after hearing more than 600, I started to fall in love, but I have to say that the Warhammer novel that I listened to at the beginning is still in the top five. I still hope that after the journey of Warhammer is completed, Wang Ming and the others can find their original world after tens of thousands of years, step by step with the empire, and let those original people People who come to this world can see what it means that the Empire has successfully defeated the Four Gods of Chaos and has successfully revived. They came to this universe and took out a group of time-travelers and said, brothers, the guys from your hometown helped us win the war, and we are here to pay you back. Don't worry, the military affairs are also fully connected with the Empire's technology. You will definitely become a first-class force in this universe within a few hundred years.

Can you change the punctuation? It looks a bit uncomfortable.