Eastern European Eagle

First of all, I would like to thank the author for having the courage to write historical novels about Eastern Europe. Firstly, the information is sparse and complicated; secondly, it is relatively niche and may not have many readers. If you can muster up the courage to write, you are already much better than most people. But I want to make some comments here. I just hope that the author can polish his work to be more exciting. First, collect as much information as possible, not only Eastern Europe, but also European history at that time, to prevent common sense mistakes Second, try not to exaggerate the golden finger. The numerical expansion will lead to unreasonable plots in the later stage and make people look dizzy Three, don't have the sense of superiority of modern people. The ancients were just inferior to you in technology and vision. Strategies for ancient heroes are far better than those of you, a time-traveling commoner. To reduce your opponent's intelligence will only make others think that you are writing a novel, so you might as well write something with a wide audience Fourth, listen to the opinions of the big guys in the comments, and absorb the useful ones into the novel. There is no shame in it I hope you can persevere, and at least you can write the beautiful story in your heart.

In other words, this novel is readable, but not poisonous at all. But it looked extremely uncomfortable, and there was nothing pleasant about it. After reading about one hundred and ten chapters, I felt that the entire article was devoted to describing the inadequacies of the other side, and did not describe the great aspects of the other side at all. Fighting is like a sideways push, and the grandeur of the war is not depicted. And with this population, the author said that there is no problem with people from other territories running away, but tens of thousands of people running away in a few months is an exaggeration, right? Population is an important resource, and if you run tens of thousands of people, your tax revenue will be greatly reduced. In short, it feels like this has become a routine. People run away from other territories - the protagonist's territory vigorously develops industry and commerce to enhance national strength - and the enemy's army is blasted, and the enemy is defeated miserably. There is also the issue of population supporting the army. What was the productivity level in ancient times? Is it a bit outrageous to support 60,000 troops with 2 million people? China's agricultural productivity around 1640 was much higher than the European average at the same time. Even if official corruption and other problems are taken into account, it is estimated that the support level is similar to that of Europe at best. More than 100 million people can only support an army of 80-90 thousand, and most of them are guards rather than fighting soldiers. Is there such a small principality that can provide 7,000 troops? The story is a good one, but it can only be said that the author's technique is a little rusty and cannot support such a huge story.

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Author, please update quickly! Can you update it every day? Don't just update the Persian Empire.

To a certain extent, as long as the protagonist can establish an administrative model that is more efficient than the fief system and the tax farming system in the 15th century, the protagonist will probably be able to sweep the Balkans in his lifetime. If there are a few more reliable descendants, we might not be able to "fight the remaining heroes of the Sixth Generation" to drive out the Turks and restore Rome🙂

As long as those writing about Chinese history can farm and carry out the industrial revolution, it will be fine. Writing about Europe is really a mess. Unifying weights and measures, cultivating nationalism, carrying out religious reforms, and strengthening centralization are all difficult to achieve. The administrative system in the book feels inferior to the nine-level Zhongzheng system, let alone the imperial examination. Emperor Qin and Han Martial Arts are really awesome

​​Writing history is easy, as long as you update it every day. I update three to four thousand words a day. As long as I keep updating, someone will read it over time. The author of the book "The Road to Overlord of the Mediterranean" wrote the first 100 chapters poorly. But he persisted and finished the book. Although I am no longer involved in history, I am still a person who has made over 10,000 promises in fantasy, but my writing style is not that good now. Don't be like that Romanian author, who updates every day and despises his poor grades and doesn't even have a complete work. You can't get ahead anywhere

A running account, no plot, the decree is announced, the whole country obeys, the local government implements it to the end, the results are remarkable, haha, the world in the dream, please open a new book by the author, farewell

Why do some people still believe in Western pseudo-historical theories? You believe it, then please explain why there are records of the Western Qin Dynasty in the Han Dynasty? Why do envoys from the two countries still come and go? The Romans really came to the Eastern Han Dynasty

If the empire wants to be stable and expand, the dominant nation must develop, and more monkeys will be born!

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The protagonist is well written, but has the author forgotten a big issue, which is the continuation of the country? A feudal centralized country like China has basically not been more than 300 years old, but many European countries have been around for thousands of years. There must be some reasons for this. If you don't do this, you will be gone in 300 years.

Damn Aristotle, the Renaissance was a translation movement of cultural relics of the Ming Dynasty and their use for one's own purposes.

I always feel that this book lacks some flavour, as it writes more history than foreign history. The basic readership must be readers who like to read foreign history. There are always various explanations of Chinese inventions, which are neither Chinese nor Western, just like using fried chicken to make dumplings. , If you just want to see time-travelers using advanced technology to cheat, why not go to the Han Dynasty and the Ming Dynasty? To be honest, most readers are not very professional. The articles often include cheats such as Rotherham Plow and European Horse Plowing. This is not true or practical, but at least it satisfies some of everyone's exotic fantasies, and most readers can't tell anything wrong, right? Of course, after saying so much, I actually hope that this book will get better and better. Who would say so much if I didn't love it.

The Latin Empire established by the Crusaders when they occupied Byzantium during the Fourth Crusade was called the Romanian Empire. The author's change of name was not just to add salt to the wound.

So far, I have seen that Chapter 47 has been written by the author, but the problem is that it is too game-like. It is probably like playing in Europe. The protagonist is more like the national consciousness than the crown prince. I will definitely be able to do what I want to do. Everyone in the country supports me unconditionally. My domestic reforms will not encounter any resistance that I did not expect. For war, it is a pile of numerical values. If my numerical value is high, I will definitely win. Even if the overall numerical value is low, I can locally high and low. It is always fun to write like this, but I worry that it will collapse later.

The author is great, can you introduce some Oriental people and technology through the Silk Road? After all, the protagonist is at this point in time. Zhu Yuanzhang is about to die. Did Zhu Di send Zheng He to the West after Jianwen? Can you make arrangements in advance to send people to contact and exchange some things that Zheng He left behind for the Arabs and the black uncles in East Africa? It would be a pity, they were all ruined.

Compulsory education, establishment of universities, civil service system, military staff system, intelligence bureau, post office, establishment of hospitals, defense against smallpox and cowpox, military industry, desert cannons, flintlock guns with bayonets, fixed charges, establishment of a race, leaving no hidden dangers of division,

I write it on a whim and on a whim. This building is hereby put up and I hope you will express your opinions.

Originally, it was quite good to focus on national expansion, but it obviously went astray later on. Conspiracies and calculations are not impossible to write about, but from the author's God's perspective, which is comparable to Baidu Encyclopedia, I still forget it.

As a refreshing article, it's okay; as a reasonable article: I have Justinian's heart but not his strength, and the country has not been able to straighten out and complete the integration, so it starts to annex land everywhere, and I am not afraid of the death of the First Emperor and the division of land.

I should probably start writing a new book now. I haven't read a hundred or two hundred chapters, and it's still in the 70s. My interest plummeted after the country was renamed the Romanian Empire. I might as well read about the Holy Roman Empire, then colonization and trade. The writing became duller, and I lost all interest in the end.

The overall writing style is more like a running account. The story description is more like playing a strategy game. (The protagonist is constantly reforming, what he has learned is effective, and there is no obstacle, just like adding points directly to the game) Most of the content is science popularization and explanation, lacking detailed narrative. The characters are quite flat. There are really not many books about Eastern Europe and this period. This one at least has a readable story. In fact, the overall framework of the outline is good. The information prepared by the author is also very complete. But the shortcomings in the writing style are really a hindrance. Generally speaking, it is a matter of opinion, which is quite tasteless to me... [The text lacks the ability to mobilize emotions, and the popular science explanations are long and long, which makes it tiring to read.

I feel that the male protagonist's great achievements will be taken away by his father in later generations. It is better to directly write that the male protagonist became the emperor. After all, in history, most people only know about the great achievements of the emperor at that time, but do not know that there were also great achievements of officials at that time, unless they can be like Bismarck.

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Zhihu Lin Xugu: During the Roman Empire, the towns in the Sava and Morava river basins on the south bank of the Danube actually spoke Roman The surrounding areas of these towns were mostly colonized by legions Later, in the 4th-6th century In the 19th century, the Roman Empire collapsed. The Slavic peasant tribes went south crazily along the Tisza River and Wallachia People killed people and Buddhas killed Buddhas, destroying all the Roman towns in the plains Finally, the Sava River and Momo The Rava River Basin was fully Slavicized The local Romans fled in all directions in this chaos. Some were driven further into the southern mountains and became the Aromanians living in Albania, Macedonia, and Greece The other part, which was more militant and organized, crossed the Danube to the north and entered the Carpathian Mountains. They relied on the mountain barriers to multiply and became Romanians Due to Wallachia has always been a corridor for steppe peoples to invade Europe, so the Slavs themselves were unable to gain a foothold there Until the 13th to 15th centuries, the north and west coast of the Black Sea were still ravaged by steppe Turks for a long time By the 16th century, the Steppe Turks had ceased, and then the Romanians from the Carpathian Mountains immigrated to the water in a large scale Bucharest is the pearl of the Wallachia Plain As for the Hungarians, that is another complex matter The story But to be honest, the descendants of the Romans went to the mountains to breed, which is really sad The Romanians in the 16th century have completely lost any of the advantages of their ancestors thousands of years ago Became shepherds in the mountains Their understanding of urban culture and advanced agriculture all came from the Slavs Today's Romanian language reveals the origins of this ethnic group's military and its exhausting history Latin The soldier became the Romanian fiancé The trench became a village; the camp became a plain; The saddest thing is that the avenue became a single-plank bridge.