Lu Mingfei: the Return of the King of Elden

This is a magical Dragon Clan fanfic [Involving spoilers] This is a magical Dragon Clan fanfic without Jiangnan Disease. It is a brand new version that I have never read! The most amazing thing is that this book may make Lu Mingfei kill Lu Mingze and Constantine and not be able to resurrect them, but I actually feel that it is not impossible. Because my favorite character in the original work is Lu Mingze. [But now it seems that Xiaokang may be resurrected. Because this book gives me the feeling that it treats Old Tang and Norton as two individuals, and Lu Mingfei and Lu Mingze's brother are also treated as two individuals to a certain extent. [Maybe I'm exaggerating a bit, but that's what it feels like. Old Tang is a modern human being who has lived in modern New York for twenty years. His three views and thoughts have shaped his life today. He might not be Norton, at least not in spirit. This Lu Mingfei or Ah Di, after consulting Old Tang, deprived him of his unawakened memories before this life, but gave him the power of Norton. Although Constantine seems to have died this time, and I don't know if he can be resurrected in the future, but my mentality is now stable, and I feel that it is not impossible to die... Because he is Norton's brother, but not Old Tang's. When Old Tang has no tasks now, he plays games every day with Lu Mingfei, who is back from get out of class, and Fingel, who is not in class. He also travels in New York with Lu Mingfei, who uses the school's plane to go to New York to find him on weekends using S-level permissions. He is a complete person. He may not be Norton. This feeling is the same as the relationship between the past life and this life. The author adds more words about Lu Mingfei playing games with Old Tang and traveling. Also, after Old Tang was involved in the plan to invade Kassel, he immediately secretly found an opportunity to inform Lu Mingfei. Lu Mingfei also went over immediately to rescue him from other people who were planning to invade, who had begun to suspect that he had surrendered. There is enough ink to make people resonate with the bond between them. Then the author clarified something that I didn't notice back then - the invasion of the college was done by the boss... The boss was Lu Mingze! So it was Lu Mingze who wanted Old Tang to awaken, and then asked Lu Mingfei to kill him! Grass! Although Norton may have betrayed the two of you brothers, is Lu Mingfei really willing to kill his good brother who played games with him and helped him tutor before his interview in Kassel for a past life that he can't remember anything about? Although it is okay for Lu Mingze to sacrifice himself to let Lu Mingfei awaken, but why should you sacrifice Old Tang and others like Lu Mingfei's friends! To put it bluntly, when Lu Mingfei's friends died one by one and the power awakened, was this Lu Mingfei dying, resurrecting the person who we still don't know whether he was the Black King or the World Tree or something else? So when the plot reaches this point, I actually feel that it is not impossible to kill Lu Mingze... This Lu Mingfei, or Ah Di, has died countless times in soul-based games like Elden's Ring, and has also lost countless friends who fought together in that world. For a person who has lost countless common fighting friends, if you give him a living friend, in order to keep this friend, he can really kill his possible former brother and Principal Angers. If we talk about the original Dragon Clan, we don't like Lu Mingfei, we just look forward to him becoming like a king after he awakens, because he is too useless. The feeling in this book is that Lu Mingze, your dead brother is your brother, Lu Mingfei is Lu Mingfei, Lu Mingfei has Lu Mingfei's life, Lu Mingfei's friends, and Lu Mingfei's emotions. You can't use what happened to your brother thousands of years ago as an excuse to hurt the people around Lu Mingfei now and his heart! According to this idea, Lu Mingze is actually the person who wants Lu Mingfei dead the most in the world. What he wants is his brother, even if he wants to exchange his life. And what about Lu Mingfei? It was so painful for him to lose so many cherished people. After the bonds were broken one by one, he didn't care whether it was considered alive or not. He never cared about the person named Lu Mingfei. This is an idea I have never seen in Dragon Clan fandom. This author actually organized this set of logic very clearly and is acceptable. In addition, the part about getting along with Old Tang was really well written. I think this author's writing style is very talented and his ideas are very unique. I am already selling Amway to my relatives and friends. Come on, author!

. . . . It feels like Lu Mingfei is invincible after returning from the old man circle, but he doesn't seem to be invincible at the same time.

There are various versions of Lu Mingfei these days. There are Ashes, Sekiro, and Master in the front, and Mercenary, Prophet, and Crazy Blood in the back. Now Elden is here, and Lu Mingfei is looking forward to the return of the Kingdom of Light.

The author must pay attention when writing. The combat power of the magic circle is very high. Basically, the demigods are strong ones who can destroy the city. Adie is even more outrageous. In the plot, it should be one who can defeat all the demigods in one life. Moreover, the faded ones cannot just look at the performance in the game. The reason why the boss and the protagonist are not strong in expression is to pursue the gameplay, otherwise the broken stars will scatter meteorites everywhere, and the Valkyrie Mizutori will be a seamless link. It is impossible to fight at all. This is a compromise made by the plot for the sake of gameplay. The real strength of A'Die (when fighting the Gray City) should be referenced by Ge Fulei, and he is stronger than Ge Fulei. After beating Lao Ge, he defeated the crippled Gangzi. After beating Gangzi, he attacked the Ai beast in full power without taking a break. The power of Ai beast can not be overstated to be called the strongest in the junction, so you see how outrageous A'Die's power is.

In comparison, I think the single heroine Lani is better. In the original version, Lu Mingfei is a child who lacks love. If others treat him better, he will lick it up. But the path described by the author is clearly not a bloody road in the border area. The person who becomes the King of Elden has a very mature mind and cannot chase Nono and Chen Wenwen. If there were no changes in the original Eri Yi, it would be impossible for Lu Mingfei to resonate with her now. So in terms of character creation, I tend to save Eri but don't have any feelings for her, because to be honest, Eri's mental age is too young, not even as good as Little Red Riding Hood Roderica. But Lani was different. She could plan to cut off her own body with a black knife, and formed a gang to overthrow the Golden Law. (Godwin didn't know if she planned to kill him). She was indeed worthy of the King of Elden version of Lu Mingfei. Only Lani can be called this version of Lu Mingfei's soul mate. It would be better to have a single female protagonist, Lani. It feels a bit unacceptable to make Lani a tool person and the setting of the old man with the ring. Of course this is a personal opinion.

Lu Mingfei, who became king, couldn't kill any number of dragons. He could even kill the beast of Elden, the incarnation of the golden tree, not to mention there were so many other gods. Apart from the many fancy speaking spirits in the dragon clan, I really can't think of a dragon that could do it.

Author, if you want to post the popularity of Elden's Ring, you should at least get some key information correct. I haven't seen the location you updated, but there are already many fundamental errors in the beginning Lani is a god, not a demigod The original words in the game are that Lani, Malenia, and Mikaela are gods, with the power to start a new era and succeed Marika as the leader The possibility of becoming a god Having the law is a god-man, perfecting the law to replace the Golden Law, and becoming a god after opening a new era Rani has become a god after completing the branch line and entering the starry sky Second: The Great Rune does not require the death of a demigod to be deprived of it, because Because it itself is a fragment of the magic ring, the demigod is the heir of the god, and the owner of the fragment is the fragment king Third: The Dragon King Platon Sanks does not have a big rune, but that is because the Dragon King serves another god under the law. This god left the world in the ancient golden tree era. The realm has reached a certain level, and the Dragon King has also disappeared into the cracks of time and space. The Great Rune is a product of the golden law system and has no right to crown the Dragon King Even if you are just trying to gain popularity, please at least clarify the detailed settings of the game. This is the minimum respect for the readers

I hope the protagonist will not be An Angre's thug and have his own ideas.

After reading Chapter 18, my evaluation is The King of Elden is so weak. He has to rely on luck to withstand even one tranquilizer bullet.

Black Soul Sekiro Magic Ring FGO... Several versions of Dragon Clan fandom are available. The Dragon Kings said they are under a lot of pressure and hope to hire someone else.

Before I finished reading, I saw three executioners. One of them wanted to arrest Lu Mingfei for interrogation? Isn't this a violent attack on this family? Can the King of Elden be casually offended? When Angers tried to break off his limbs, couldn't this have affected their family's ability to take care of themselves? Otherwise, I will be sorry for your status.

I have seen many versions of Lu Mingfei. 🤫 Why is it not written about the fairy Eevee? It is clear that the fairy type restrains the dragon type

Ah, this... Lu Zai has now finished running Dark Souls, running only Wolf, and finishing running only Wolf, running Old Head Ring...

It was so badly cut that it was actually weak and had a combat power of 64 against the dragon world.

Like those ashes with names, most of them died in the battle between the gods. These ashes of yours are equivalent to the little brother that King Elden took with him when he went to war. He must be able to participate in the battle of gods and not be killed with a slap. At the very least, he must be at the level of siege Broken Star. He can survive two moves with Broken Star. Being killed by Angers instantly is insulting the reader's IQ.

All Lu Mingfei's novels have a common problem. They are all invincible, not domineering at all, and it is unpleasant to read. Moreover, fan fiction always wants to overwhelm the fighting power. They don't have the strength to make major changes to the original plot, so they can only follow the old path of the original author. None of the characters in the original drama dare to be written to death. They looked good in the early stage, but they were pulled as soon as they entered the main plot.

Repair the part where Lu Mingfei's hand was cut by glass shards. You have a huge bug. You ignore the damage reduction rate. Your glass shards can even cut the skin of King Elden. I'll get a shrapnel launcher. It can spin thousands of times per second and skin Lu Mingfei.

The author is a good protagonist, unlike other people who are disgusting if they don't pretend to be good enough. They pretend to be cool if they want to hide it. There is a person who calls himself a nickname and is like a retard. He doesn't look like a fan at all. The most basic thing about a fan is the smell of the early stage. It becomes okay later. But if the early stage doesn't have the smell of a fan, this fan will be useless.

I discovered that regardless of this path in the novel, which world did you travel back from? What did you do? They are all so low. Could it be that no one has traveled back in time? Does the protagonist become stronger because his character matures? In fact, when I see this kind of person travel to other worlds and then come back, I would rather change her character than the power system, because what I hate the most is her character.

I guess next there will be Lu Mingfei who returns from Genshin Impact, MC, Ark, etc. Oh, yes, there is also someone from Sekiro who has been around for a while.

How to say it? There is a problem with the combat power. Oleg is the wing of the Storm King. No matter how strong Angers is, he can only use this one move at a time. I guess he can't even break through the defense. How could he be killed with one strike? This combat power is a bit broken, and most of them were defeated in an instant.

A cool question about the world of Ring of Laws. Those who write about Dragon Clan fandom basically want to satisfy the fans' regrets. Since this book is about two worlds, I suggest that it satisfy the old man Huanli's regrets to a certain extent. Let me start with an idea. Just like the living beings in the dragon clan, doesn't the author have any ideas? (Maybe there is, but I said it in advance). The big runes of Latarn, Valkyrie, and Gretel are in the hands of the protagonist. The fragments of Brother Hu and the ashes of the jellyfish Kurala are also in the hands of the protagonist. The living technology is added to the doll body. I want to see Latarn Valkyrie fight Odin. In addition, you can completely write about the original Lu Mingfei's experience of traveling to the world of the Ring of Magic (in the form of a side story, preferably after it is released), or wait until the dragon world is almost written, and let people like Chu Zihang travel to the world of the Ring of Magic to take risks (there are too many reasons, for example, Lu Mingfei's power gradually disappeared, and Lani suddenly told Lu Mingfei that time has reversed in the junction, so it is necessary to go back and repair the Ring of Magic, and bring Chu Zihang, Caesar, Fingel and others there). Of course, these require some preparation from the author before writing, so as not to conflict with the dragon world. Strictly speaking, this book is "Double Chef's Ecstasy", and it is basically read by people who watch both Dragon Clan and Ring. So as long as you write more about the transition between the Dharma Ring world and the Dragon World, people will follow it. If I keep writing about a certain world, I will gradually become reluctant to read it. For example, when it comes to reducing combat power, the starting point is very good, but the estimation of the gold content of the King of the Ring is somewhat wrong. That's why everyone's opinions are great.