Study Everything in the Star-Devouring Sky

Author, let me remind you, those who try to steal Luo Feng's opportunity are basically not popular, because there is no black spot in anything about Luo Feng.

After reading a lot of Devouring fans, this one should be in the top three, and it's still a seedling, so I'll post a few words about it. I think there are several criteria for good swallowing: 1: Respect the original work. The world view and power system settings of the original "Swallowing" are already very complete. Countless settings can be played within the framework. You can justify it if you open the Golden Finger again, but some Kaio Fist, Devouring Cultivation, etc. Are outrageous. Guan Gong's battle with Qin Qiong will almost certainly fail. 2: Don't copy the original text. This is really embarrassing for me. The most outrageous thing I have ever seen is that there is a book with long paragraphs and thousands of words copied from the original text. I reasoned with him and he plausibly said, "How can any fan not copy the original work?" Due to the limitation of clearly explaining the setting of Devour, there will definitely be similarities with the original work. At this time, we have to look at the third point. 3: Try to break through the plot. Some fans are simply copying Luo Feng, changing their names and golden fingers, and their life trajectories are exactly the same as Luo Feng's. It is difficult not to copy the original text, and the more they write, the worse they get. I think Devouring is actually the most suitable novel for writing fan fiction, because Tomato depicts the original universe with endless possibilities and leaves huge blank spaces. For example, you can start as a vassal of the human race, start as a foreign race, start in the early stages of the original universe, or be Luo Feng's senior like this one... The so-called "seizing the opportunity" is even more ridiculous. With the eight beast gods and countless special beings, you have to recreate Luo Feng's adventures, which is simply ridiculous. Having said so much, I still like this book very much. I feel that the author's text is quite mature and the number of updates is quite large. Maybe it's a small one. I'm looking forward to the follow-up plot.

I suggest the author read the book "Sword Master of the Swallowing Stars" and really write his own story. He has a golden finger and does not take Luo Feng's chance. The plot development is not with Luo Feng, but Luo Feng is there.

The existence of the heroine is a failure, it is too abrupt, and it also reduces the sensation of the protagonist's research on potions. The image of the heroine is that of a young girl. Even though she is powerful, the impression she gives readers is not as high as that of the veteran Immortal, or in other words, there is no comparison. The sensation of the protagonist developing a field-level potion is reflected through the perspective of the heroine, and there is no sense of satisfaction. What was originally a sensational incident at the cosmic level ended up like getting high marks in school. In the end, it turned out that the theme was obviously good, but the fun points could only be found through warrior gameplay such as breaking through the overpass, which was nondescript and boring.

Luo Qingshuang is an absolute failure. If her role could be less, she would be perfect as a vase like Xu Xin.

If you don't understand research, don't name this book. Just like Lord Lianbao, you are either fighting or on the way to a fight. Except for the refining of treasures in the first few chapters, they are all mentioned in one go.

At the age of 15, the protagonist's genetic level is 30 times higher, his will is comparable to immortality, and he can achieve planetary speed in seconds as long as he practices. Based on this condition, the author wrote a plot about Jia Yi accepting a disciple. The key point is that Jia Yi is also the teacher of the protagonist's father. Co-authors cannot be taught by disciples, they must be masters and disciples, right? The protagonist is born in the military camp and can reach planetary level immediately. However, he still needs to become a disciple. Is it because the military does not provide scientific research resources for planetary level, or can the resources provided by Jia Yi push the protagonist from planetary level to star level?

It makes me want to vomit, what is the meaning of the heroine's existence? Purely reduces the feeling of pleasure. The protagonist has not even left the universe, but you are given the wife of a universe god. What on earth do you want to write about?

Becoming a disciple of Jia Yi is the biggest failure

Before the heroine appeared, the subject matter was novel and aroused interest After the heroine appeared, interest dropped and complaints were made After the heroine awakened her past life memories, it was a piece of shit After the heroine became the master of the universe, was it written by the same person?

It's very fluent, and the writing is very long-winded. One potion study often lasts several chapters or even a dozen chapters. You are a fan, and the training system of the original novel has been perfected. It is no problem for you to add your own theory. Why make it so complicated? The essence is fantasy. No matter how much you write about the theoretical process, readers will know that it is fake and will not care at all. Therefore, fantasy cultivation will only build a cultivation system with no big logical problems, and it is impossible to write details and various theories. The golden fingers and frame are okay, but the direction is completely wrong. Also, the narrative is very long-winded, too watery, and there is too little real plot. It is all about various researches, and the research process is like a running account.

Being nice to Luo Feng goes too far, and training is fine, but the protagonist goes too far, and is just a licker. It doesn't matter what Luo Feng is like, he can just be brushed off. It doesn't matter if he becomes an ordinary person.

Brothers, can anyone understand why the author wants to write about becoming a disciple of Jia Yi? I see that I don't quite understand the author's thinking here.

Um, I don't understand why in time travel novels and fandoms there are always people thinking about gun opportunities. As an author. Can't you arrange some opportunities yourself? Think about it carefully. If it were a real time travel. I will grab it if I can. 😂

Let's just say I've seen a few of them. Anyway, what should I say? It's very intellectually jarring. The protagonist doesn't regard other people as human beings at all, and he rubs her the wrong way. Moreover, the heroine's writing is quite disgusting.

Do you want to become a disciple of Jia Yi? He doesn't even have a field... Well, I feel a little embarrassed, for a few resources? If you have a cheat and show some talent, you can just go to the genius training camp and get a resource. If you don't have a cheat and you are just trying to survive, I will definitely agree with you, but if you use such a big cheat (without fear of death) and have to become a disciple for a few resources, it's a bit...

It was uncomfortable to be Jia Yi's disciple, and it didn't help much that he had a master-disciple status for nothing.

What are you writing about? I have been talking about will, realm, and laws all day long, but after reading dozens of chapters, not a single one is about pharmacists. When it comes to spiritual masters and warriors, they talk at length, and when it comes to pharmacists, they are ambiguous. Still researching potions? If you don't even understand what a potion is, how can you study a hammer so that readers can understand it?

Just saw Making a Cosmic Doppelgänger here. The heroine awakens to the God of the Universe and shares her past life experiences with Lin Qingyu, and the world truly collapses. Other people use a system when they travel through time, and the plug-in is over. They never mention what happened before the time travel, and some even don't mention where they came from. And Lin Qingyu mentioned it, saying that he traveled from a chaotic source space, that is to say, he traveled from the real earth to the swallowing earth. Doesn't that mean that using the world-breaking teleportation technique, or even a higher teleportation technique, he can come face to face with Tomato after traveling back? The True God of the Void is indescribable. How did Lin Qingyu and Luo Qingshuang talk about the level of the God of the Universe, or even the ultimate breakthrough of the soul to the lord? Swallowing Starry Sky is in front, and Lord Snow Eagle is behind. Lin Qingyu's time travel has changed history. According to this trend, Lin Qingyu and Luo Qingshuang will become lords, and they will most likely achieve it before Luo Feng. The history of Lord Snow Eagle has changed. Instead of eight lords, there are ten lords. Even Dongbo Snow Eagle couldn't break through the lord. Will the memory of the changed future still exist in Lin Qingyu's mind? The future he knew didn't happen, that is, he didn't know the future. Wouldn't this conflict make the memory disappear from his mind? Other fans also traveled through time, but they didn't tell the future. Marvel's Doctor Strange could also see the future, but he didn't tell it, but Lin Qingyu did. If Lin Qingyu becomes the lord first, then when the source world is divided, Luo Feng will not be involved in Snow Eagle's Chaos Void, and there will be no Luo Feng's apprentice, the Sword Emperor. This will have a huge impact. Dong Bo Snow Eagle's future will inevitably change. If Dong Bo Snow Eagle did not successfully go to Jiexin Continent and reach the ultimate realm of the soul, how would Lin Qingyu know that the ultimate soul realm would inevitably break through the lord? This is a closed loop of time, a refutation of time. Also, Luo Qingshuang is not good at understanding the law. She is valued because of her talent and secret method. How can she enter the core level of the Virtual Universe Company if her talent is not good enough? How to get to the abyss of purgatory without entering the core layer? Even if you get in, how can someone who can't follow the rules kill the enemy in battle? There is no killing mark with technological weapons or anything like that, so how can she activate this new talent secret method? Isn't this also a time refutation? So the moment Lin Qingyu said it, the space and time of this world really collapsed. What else is there to do to refine a treasure by burning secret patterns? It turns out that the treasure does not need to be forged, just burn the secret patterns. Doesn't that mean that all the strongest people in the universe can refine the pinnacle treasure? Can all the masters of the universe create top-notch treasures? There is also the creation of the universe. The God King in the Devouring Starry Sky can create it, and Lord Snow Eagle can create it by the God of the Universe. It's good here, the world lord can create it. Not to mention Luo Qingshuang's help, because it was Lin Qingyu who helped the universe created by the secret method of the Master of the Universe realm. What level is the Lord of the Universe? He is just a powerful person in the Heaven and Earth Realm in Snow Eagle. The Blood Blade God Emperor in the Dominion Realm also created a small universe. Not to mention the five great talents and secrets, it is only a small universe the size of a small courtyard and consumes huge amounts of energy. Why don't you just create a source world and break through to world-class Hunyuan life? This novel focuses on details that cannot withstand scrutiny. The explanations are very detailed and there are not many bugs, but every one of them is very broken.

This heroine takes up too much of the role and is really a failure.

What is this thing written about? It's like an old lady's foot wrap, smelly and long.

Swallowing the Starry Sky World cannot observe the microscopic world,,, you are almost embarrassing me to death. Do you know the background of Swallowing the World? Science fiction, brother, a world measured in billions! ! ! Anyone who rides on a horse or sits on a mountain can transform his or her consciousness.

The author feeds the reader by the head💩

In fact, the creation and entry point of this fanfic are very good, but after the middle and late stages, it feels like the writing has collapsed. The whole article is not one idea, then another idea, and then inexplicably breaks through and progresses. There is no process, and it is a bit taken for granted.

Dear author, does this book have a female protagonist? If there is a female protagonist, I suggest Ai Chen or Qian Shui, these two are very suitable. If you find a woman from Earth to be the heroine, if nothing else, she will definitely be a vase, just like Xu Xin or most heroines in the fandom. As for Qian Shui and the others, as heroines, they will have common topics to talk about, and they will also show up more. Moreover, in terms of appearance, he is also at the forefront of the Devouring World.

I came here to see scientists climb the technology tree. This is outrageous.

Newbies writing books will inevitably encounter minor problems or bugs. If you have any comments, you can put them forward in the comment area.

To be honest, you are just trying to practice the Supreme Treasure with your mouth shut. The secret pattern of the starting hand on the Supreme Treasure is the sixth level. You want to run away even if you don't know how to eat. Apprentices have a field, and you deserve to rush to the street.

It's too watery. It's better for the heroine not to show up.

How should I put it? If you compare this book to a woman, and I read the free chapters but I still haven't gotten hard yet. Then I went to the catalog and picked out the paid chapters that I was interested in and subscribed to. It still didn't work. I laughed to death and got addicted all the way.