Studying Everything in Swallowed Star

Author, let me remind you, those who try to steal Luo Feng's opportunity are basically not popular, because there is no black spot in anything about Luo Feng.

After reading a lot of Devouring fans, this one should be in the top three, and it's still a seedling, so I'll post a few words about it. I think there are several criteria for good swallowing: 1: Respect the original work. The world view and power system settings of the original "Swallowing" are already very complete. Countless settings can be played within the framework. You can justify it if you open the Golden Finger again, but some Kaio Fist, Devouring Cultivation, etc. Are outrageous. Guan Gong's battle with Qin Qiong will almost certainly fail. 2: Don't copy the original text. This is really embarrassing for me. The most outrageous thing I have ever seen is that there is a book with long paragraphs and thousands of words copied from the original text. I reasoned with him and he plausibly said, "How can any fan not copy the original work?" Due to the limitation of clearly explaining the setting of Devour, there will definitely be similarities with the original work. At this time, we have to look at the third point. 3: Try to break through the plot. Some fans are simply copying Luo Feng, changing their names and golden fingers, and their life trajectories are exactly the same as Luo Feng's. It is difficult not to copy the original text, and the more they write, the worse they get. I think Devouring is actually the most suitable novel for writing fan fiction, because Tomato depicts the original universe with endless possibilities and leaves huge blank spaces. For example, you can start as a vassal of the human race, start as a foreign race, start in the early stages of the original universe, or be Luo Feng's senior like this one... The so-called "seizing the opportunity" is even more ridiculous. With the eight beast gods and countless special beings, you have to recreate Luo Feng's adventures, which is simply ridiculous. Having said so much, I still like this book very much. I feel that the author's text is quite mature and the number of updates is quite large. Maybe it's a small one. I'm looking forward to the follow-up plot.

I suggest the author read the book "Sword Master of the Swallowing Stars" and really write his own story. He has a golden finger and does not take Luo Feng's chance. The plot development is not with Luo Feng, but Luo Feng is there.

The existence of the heroine is a failure, it is too abrupt, and it also reduces the sensation of the protagonist's research on potions. The image of the heroine is that of a young girl. Even though she is powerful, the impression she gives readers is not as high as that of the veteran Immortal, or in other words, there is no comparison. The sensation of the protagonist developing a field-level potion is reflected through the perspective of the heroine, and there is no sense of satisfaction. What was originally a sensational incident at the cosmic level ended up like getting high marks in school. In the end, it turned out that the theme was obviously good, but the fun points could only be found through warrior gameplay such as breaking through the overpass, which was nondescript and boring.

Luo Qingshuang is an absolute failure. If her role could be less, she would be perfect as a vase like Xu Xin.

If you don't understand research, don't name this book. Just like Lord Lianbao, you are either fighting or on the way to a fight. Except for the refining of treasures in the first few chapters, they are all mentioned in one go.

It makes me want to vomit, what is the meaning of the heroine's existence? Purely reduces the feeling of pleasure. The protagonist has not even left the universe, but you are given the wife of a universe god. What on earth do you want to write about?

Before the heroine appeared, the subject matter was novel and aroused interest After the heroine appeared, interest dropped and complaints were made After the heroine awakened her past life memories, it was a piece of shit After the heroine became the master of the universe, was it written by the same person?

Becoming a disciple of Jia Yi is the biggest failure

At the age of 15, the protagonist's genetic level is 30 times higher, his will is comparable to immortality, and he can achieve planetary speed in seconds as long as he practices. Based on this condition, the author wrote a plot about Jia Yi accepting a disciple. The key point is that Jia Yi is also the teacher of the protagonist's father. Co-authors cannot be taught by disciples, they must be masters and disciples, right? The protagonist is born in the military camp and can reach planetary level immediately. However, he still needs to become a disciple. Is it because the military does not provide scientific research resources for planetary level, or can the resources provided by Jia Yi push the protagonist from planetary level to star level?