A Journey That Started with Volleyball

Does the author know anything about volleyball? Don't just take it for granted after watching the anime, watch more real games... Are you kidding me if the secondary attacker can go to the backcourt to receive serve? Also, if the protagonist is the main attacker, it is impossible to hit the fast ball. I am convinced by Tiantian's suggestion that the fast ball is passed. The most important thing in the side attack offense is to rely on strength and technology. Basically, it is a high point ball or a flat ball. No strong team in the world has a main attacker who plays fast balls... And two secondary attackers can still stand in the front row? There are too many common sense errors and it's very confusing.

It feels most desperate that Qingcheng has failed and has little room for improvement. No talent means no talent [Qingcheng has not yet had the heart (for example, the iron-walled Date and so on played the prefecture in the second year. There are also 2-meter giant beginners who have made various progress in the training camp. The old Qingcheng is a bit like the jungler, and now there are multiple strong top laners. In fact, the main character went to Qingcheng. I guess it is the author's personal charm for Oikawa)] Tip comment It feels almost like writing a book to help Uzi win the S game I have almost figured out the plot for next year. Kyoutani will shine again in the third grade. The protagonist is already invincible, plus the protagonist has a perfect tool setter that he has been with since junior high school, plus two first-year high school students from Beiyi. There is nothing wrong with being among the top three in terms of hard power in the country. But now that IH is in the prefecture finals, except for Oikawa and the protagonist Qingcheng, the portrayals of other players are still mediocre. Not very optimistic about whether the next game will be exciting Summary Shiratori Chengya Niu Defeat Yiwu Protagonist Chengya Qingcheng Baiye Qingcheng In fact, watching small volleyball is to watch touching Asahi breaks the iron wall, the cracks in the iron wall shine into the light Moon Nishitani resists Ushiwaka, wisdom and hard work will shine Xiang Yang Open your eyes in the air and feel the beauty of the world The King Won the crown Captain will always stand up in times of crisis Yamaguchi has experienced the abyss of despair and climbed out bit by bit In fact, Karasuno is the best to portray. After all, the characters are relatively clear. Waves Or join the Cat Team [Yinju] Recommend a few books that are a bit passionate "The goal is to dominate the country" Karasuno is a small man who focuses on the ace. New book "Volleyball!" Volleyball! Inarizaki's blocking ace. It is recommended to look at the high school line and the late college line. The professional line is not good. "Volleyball Boy: ACE" Karasuno's main attacker ace "Forever Looking Up" original team is relatively cruel. The protagonist's setter

Regarding plot issues and future trends 1. In the previous plot, there was a Qingcheng white bird fight. There will be some aesthetic fatigue if we do it again. The author's decision is right, but he did not write it well, leaving an unfair perception to the readers. In fact, this is just a matter of writing a few more words and mentioning Tiwu's field strength. , Which led to a lot of criticism and the last game had to end hastily. It can be said that the advantages of fighting the original protagonist team were not written out, nor the passion of fighting the white birds was continued. The author suffered a loss once and remembered it next time. Always pay attention to the logic problem. In fact, this can be explained barely, and it is not a big deal. In the past It's over 2. The big thing is about the future direction. I don't know if the author wants to write All Heavens Unlimited Flow, but I'm really afraid that the author will get too excited and make a fool of himself. You can think about it for yourself. The readers who follow you until now are basically readers who want to read volleyball boy fan fiction. Most of your target market has been defined. Wouldn't it be a suicide attempt to transform later? Unless you have strong writing skills and are also highly creative, you may be able to improve your grades. However, if you write poorly, you will collapse. On the contrary, if you keep writing about small volleyball, maintain this level and finish the comics, you can edit the professional arena and other things yourself I have said before, what do you write about in the heavens? Kuroko basketball? What happens next? Running badminton tennis baseball? Some readers, not to mention watching anime like Kuroko Net King, may not know much about these types of sports. This makes it difficult for readers to subscribe. If the writing is even slightly worse, it is easy to die This book is medium or above average. It may be due to the scarcity of the fandom market of small volleyball that it has become very popular. After all, As a matter of fact, many volleyball fandoms are not good enough to read. The author is also a newcomer. You can use this book to hone your writing skills and outline construction skills. If the controversy is too big, you can decide whether to cancel the subscription + open a single chapter to chat about it. I hope the author will keep up the good work The above only represents my personal opinion

Did the author really only intend to write about two worlds? It's rare for a sports-themed book without a heroine to stream indefinitely. I think the author has written the first two worlds very well. It would be better if he could continue writing. Even if he stops for a while to sort out the book outline, I really want to read it. Later, I can write about football (Ao no Reed, etc.), Running Hakone Ekiden (strong wind), table tennis (ping pong), badminton (light feathers flying), dancing (dancing youth, etc.)

It's obvious that the author didn't plan it well and wanted to trick Karasuno, but he couldn't find a reasonable way to do it. Because the main perspective has always been Aoki, and the corresponding main opponent Shiratorizawa, so the dark horse suddenly appeared out of nowhere and left everyone speechless. It would be better to train with Karasuno at the beach at the beginning. Then it would be reasonable for Karasuno to adapt to the ace attack of the world and win against Shiratorizawa. Now this is nondescript. The emotional protagonist has been involved so much and has improved so much. The improvement effect of the entire team is still not as good as Karasuno's training 😰 The author likes Karasuno so much and joins directly. Why did Iwa-chan give up the main attacker and become a reliever? What is the effect? ! ! ! If you can't catch Ushijima, you can't catch Tanaka, Dongxu's attack? Have they also entered the national ace level? ! ! A month of intensive training at the seaside is enough for you? ! ! If you can't take it at this level, then you won't be able to take it at the ace level all of a sudden. . .

No one can work as hard as the original creator of the anime. After all, the story will not continue if I learn it wrongly. Goodbye, the money I spent before is wasted.

The more you write, the better you get, and the more you write, the better you get. Do you think your grades are too good? If you don't believe me, just wait. Isn't it good to keep up with the level at the beginning? Do you have to drive your crappy car? What you write is a sports fanfic, not urban literature.

Universities in Miyagi Prefecture that are capable of entering the country include Karasuno, Shiratorizawa, Aoba Jonishi, and Date Ko. First of all, Shiratorizawa and Dateko can be excluded. Shiratorizawa has the top three ace Ushijima Wakatoshi in the country, so there is no need to consider it. Dateko's characteristics are iron wall blocking and second pass. Huang Huanggawa is a newbie. Although he is talented and will be a professional player in the future, at this time, the pass can be directly passed to the coach on the sidelines. The mistakes are outrageous and he is completely unable to use the offensive ability of the protagonist. So only Karasuno and Aoba Jonishi have hope. Karasuno seems to have the heavy artillery ACE Toho Asahi, but to be honest, it is completely incomparable to the top five aces in the country. Of course, Aoba Jo Nishi's ACE Iwaizumi cannot be considered a heavy artillery. First of all, the situation of going to Karasuno. Analyzing the protagonist position, the high school must be an ace attacker comparable to the country. If he goes to Karasuno to replace him, he must choose one of the three attackers, Tanaka Mine Daichi, who is most likely to replace Tanaka. Tsukishima's secondary blocker, Kageyama's setter, and Nishitani's libero are definitely not mentioned. Although Hinata's secondary attacker has a vague positioning and is not like a traditional secondary blocker, he can hit monster fast breaks, which others cannot, and the strongest bait effect is really strong. This is reflected in the comic monster battle. This kind of backup is definitely the ace's favorite. Therefore, Hinata's existence should be one of the reasons why Karasuno is better than Aoba Castle. In terms of strength, Tanaka should be the weakest among the three main attackers. His skills in smashing the ball in small diagonals and extreme straight-line pressing are probably better than Higashikata, but his high strength is definitely not comparable to ordinary aces like Higashikata. Defense is also the breakthrough point of the Fox team in the original work. To replace Dongfeng, he directly replaces the heavy artillery ACE. Dongfeng lost confidence at the beginning, which is indeed a good time to replace him. However, Dongfeng has stronger spiking power than Tanaka, has a height advantage, and has better defense. It is no problem to be an ordinary main attacker without being an ace. After all, there are only three main attackers. If Daichi were to be replaced, Daichi might be like Captain North of the Foxes. As the leader of the team, he usually serves as a substitute and comes on to stabilize the team at critical moments. But in fact, Daichi's solid defense should be indispensable for Karasuno. After all, Karasuno's attack power was already very strong when he was in the country. Plus the protagonist, so the possibility of Daichi being replaced is zero. The following is the situation when going to Aoba Castle West. The main attackers are the protagonists, Iwaizumi and Komaki. In fact, the main attacker Komaki is also very tall, but the protagonist's aura is here, Iwaizumi's tacit understanding is here, and Komaki's talent is here. Komaki said that it is too difficult for him. Of course, there is a conflict between Komaki and the team. , Before Shunmao was trained, Xiaomaki was definitely the starter. Kunimiying could only lift him up and sit on the 4th bench, with Kindaichi and Matsukawa as assistant attackers, Oikawa as the main setter, and the libero Koppu. I don't remember much about the scene. There is a pass that is eye-catching, but his strength may be that much. I won't analyze the specifics of Karasuno or Aoba Jonishi. None of the third-year seniors from both sides have entered the national team. There is only one quota. It would be a pity for either team not to go. Among them, the only future professional player is Oikawa, who plays for the Argentine national team. The other third-year players have not taken a professional path. If Karasuno hadn't gone across the country, he wouldn't have had a duel with Nekoma's Junkyard. Nekoma's core members, Kuroo Yaku and Umi, were both in their last year, and there might not have been a Junkyard in the future. There was no duel with the little giant from Oudai. It would really be a pity for Oikawa if Aoba Josai didn't go to the whole country like in the original work. If you go to a university outside the county, you are most likely to be admitted. There is no shortage of aces in other colleges and universities. Idayama has Sakuzaya, Kozaka has Kiryuhachi, Otodani has Bokuto, Oudai has Hoshikai, and Inarizaki has Oshiro Aran. As for Nekoma, like Karasuno, he is a declining powerhouse. The team does not have strong attack power, and none of the three main attackers reach 1.8 Meters. There is really no trump card. Instead, the team's defense is very strong. The protagonist is the last piece of the championship puzzle to make up for the attack power. It must have been last year that I finished following anime and manga. I hope everyone will forgive me if I have any mistakes. Friendly discussions are welcome

The author can consider whether the next book will only write about small volleyball. He can write more delicately, just about daily life, etc. He can write more, or add a heroine or something. I really can't find good small volleyball articles at the starting point. The small volleyball written by the author is really good-looking and very graphic, but it is not delicate enough. But after all, it is understandable that it is not just about small volleyball. But I really want to read small volleyball articles🫠🫠

The plot arrangement is unreasonable and forcibly improves Karasuno's strength. You give everyone in Karasuno a protagonist's system. Forget it if the protagonist doesn't have a system. After all, this system is not one where you can get extremely high returns if you pay casually. So I will continue to watch. There is such a system and Akashi has enough scrolls to see what it is. What I see is that Akashi is stronger than his peers and can make a lot of cool points that are natural. You can disrespect the logic appropriately. But there is no need to forcibly improve Karasuno's strength so much. Just beat Shiratori. It's good to write it as hot-blooded after defeating the Mountain King like SD and then fall down. They are exhausted from beating Shiratori. They usually won't be able to fully recover after a night's rest. (It can't be a very long interval. In the original work, Miyagi's representative battle is from 10.28 To 10.30.) In the end, they can still vaguely suppress Aoki. Are you treating me like a fool? You can say that Karasuno was completely defeated in the first game. In the second game, he recovered a lot of physical strength and was able to improve, but he was still defeated in the end. . .

I can't stand it anymore. I can't stand this acting show anymore.

It's so disgusting. If Karasuno's strength is so strong, what kind of system will be installed for the protagonist? What's the use of flying birds inward every day? After a few years of involution, I am not as good as a player who only started playing in the third grade of junior high school. I am really speechless. Qingcheng has two aces, both of whom can be said to be the top players in the country. However, they cannot beat Karasuno. I am really speechless.

What to write next, I vote for Diamond Ace 😁

The writing is great, the writing style is also very good, keep it up! ! Follow up Also. . . . Update soon (manual funny) I think the protagonist looks a bit like Ushijima, not bad, not bad, I like the violent smash😏

A little bit of a pity What a pity. In the early stage, it was a really eye-catching little volleyball fanfic. It is really rare to have this kind of quality among the few small volleyball fans. But unfortunately, I didn't know what happened to the author before it was put on the shelves. His writing became more and more weird, and after it was put on the shelves, it became mediocre. Although it is still good among small volleyball fans, from the perspective of anime fans, it is difficult to call it excellent. All I can say is that it is a novel worth reading. In my personal opinion, the writing in the Sendai period is far better than that in the Qingcheng period. At that time, it really had the flavor of a small volleyball game. The more you look at the back, the less you feel.

The biggest failure was the time travel to Heizi. Xiaopai didn't want to write it. Then you can transfer to another school to play basketball to catch Heizi after winning the national championship. There is no need to time travel. The most poisonous thing is that after time travel, the body data will be reset and start from scratch. With this setting, as long as you are a normal person, unless you automatically time travel after old age and death, others will not choose to take the initiative to time travel.

It was originally written very well, but recently there has been a lot more driving in the article. The first chapter of the book was about to hit my face with a car. It was too greasy! The author's writing style is also much more frivolous, as if the story cannot be written without being clever and making a few jokes. Shouldn't the focus of small volleyball be passionate struggle?

Please, please write a book called Genius Flow Blue Prison

Fuck, I thought I was just a volleyball fan, but it turns out TM is unlimited streaming 😐

I think the author can discuss it more with the book friends in the book club. It is feasible to write completely according to his own ideas, but it is also easy to die suddenly. Because the author's point of view is different from the reader's point of view, such as this time's schedule, most readers feel that after training with multiple opponents at the national level, Shiratori and Aoki's strength should have improved to a higher level, at least stronger than Karasuno's group. After all, readers rarely see Karasuno's training, and they must feel that Shiratori's Aoki has made great progress. The high schools that did not participate in this training must not have improved as much as the two of them. But the author's arrangement is not very reasonable. Karasuno "suddenly" defeated Shiratori, and then "suddenly" won a small game of Qingcheng. It is indeed reasonable for Karasuno to win Shiratori. After all, it also extended the training time, which is definitely a greater improvement than the original work. Moreover, the original work also defeated Shiratori. The first "sudden" is acceptable in a reluctant sense. But the second "sudden" is not acceptable. All readers feel that Qingcheng is the strongest year this year, because the third graders have not graduated yet and have all participated in the competition. In addition, Akashi is already slightly stronger than Ushiwaka. There is no reason to lose. There is a gap between the two teams overall. Karasuno's monster fast attack has only just taken shape, and the gap does exist. It is normal for Karasuno and Aoki to be anxious about the score, but it is very difficult for Aoki to be behind, not to mention Karasuno's jumping float ball to force a victory. It is not that such an accident will not happen, but if it does, it will defeat the logic. Generally speaking, it is very difficult for Karasuno to surprise Aoki, because from the reader's perspective, the strength gap is too big, and Aoki is stronger than Karasuno in all aspects, both in terms of tactics and fundamentals. On the contrary, if Shiratori is assigned as a teammate in the finals, I think it will be easier for Qingcheng to lose a game, because Shiratori's tenacity can win a piece of meat in such a strong team, and everyone can see Shiratori's progress in the training. I think it will be easier to write the ups and downs of the decisive battle with Shiratori as this year's finalist. To sum up, no matter how much Karasuno has improved this year, the author has not described it in detail and readers cannot see it. That means it is definitely not as much as Qingcheng and Shiratori. If the author writes that Karasuno wins, even if it is just a small round, it will easily destroy the logic of the book, and it is still in a way of jumping floats. Has the author forgotten that Akashi is a time traveler? After all, many readers are chasing after reading. No matter how they come back later, it will be difficult to get back what they have lost.

Flying birds from various angles

It is the best Little Volleyball fanfic I have ever seen. After watching Little Volleyball, I stopped following it. I read a book called Volleyball on another website! Volleyball! It was really well written and delicate, and at the end I saw the protagonist and Gong Yoo start to fall in love...

Blue Prison is quite interesting, has the author ever considered publishing a book?

I find that fan fiction is really difficult to write, and readers are difficult to maintain. Competitive sports must be winner-take-all. If your favorite team loses, you will be crazy and bad-mouthed. There is also the description of the plot of the original work. Take the plot where Karasuno wins Ushiwaka. The original work has the same ending. However, because there was a previous description of Ushiwaka staying together for a month during the summer, the description of Karasuno's summer training was basically brushed aside, and people were crazy about it. And if there is a detailed description of Karasuno's training, I will still be criticized like crazy. It is better to just read the original work. If I were the author, I would be crazy. 😄😄

There is something wrong in the 38th chapter of small volleyball. According to the rotation, the serve cannot be Akashi's at this time. Anyone who knows a little bit about volleyball should know that volleyball is the server of the six-round standard volleyball. Akashi served at the beginning. Now with the score (21:21), it is not Akashi's turn to serve. So I say that the content is well written, but some basic common sense is not right.

After all this time, I still think this book is the best among sports fans. Is there anyone who has a genius reader code to watch the movie? In the world of volleyball, watch Akashi play Demon Basketball. In the world of basketball, watch Akashi play monster volleyball.

Bro, are you serious? Free man goes to the front row? The referee has to say you are invincible after watching it.

It's all about losing, you can win against a weak team, but you will definitely lose to the champion in the first national level match, and then you will definitely lose against the national ace in the training match, and you won't win until the second time you meet on the competition field. It's not pleasant at all, it's all a routine

The best two-dimensional sports and competition article I have ever seen. Why haven't I opened a new book for so long? I can't find another one of this quality 😭

Keep going! You can also start playing football or rugby and baseball after playing the theater in the next world. Baseball has anime Major League Baseball. Rugby has the anime Inazuma Eleven. Football has football players. Anyone can come! You can also enjoy gourmet dishes such as Zhonghua. The options can be many.