Hurricanes of the Heavens

Brother, write beautiful comics and don't involve the country. It's easy to get banned, so be careful. It's okay to be patriotic, but it's really easy to be blocked if it involves domestic things. ٩(๑❛ᴗ❛๑)۶ Please be careful, the author, the book is very good, be careful not to get 404

I stopped watching it after seeing the power given away. It looks really good, and the flowing water does flow. After getting the Speed ​​Force, there are basically no enemies. The behavior in these chapters is very similar to that of a normal person getting the power, at least there are no Momentum or Banana Man. Although I don't recommend writing about Wotu, I don't write a lot, so it's not a big problem. The most unpleasant thing is to give power. Isn't it good for you to get it yourself? Isn't it bad to give someone a weakened version of it by using Speed ​​Brain Research? Sending strength is too discouraging.

Tell me why you changed the map. It's purely because Marvel is disgusting. I can't tell you the specific reason yet. I'm really speechless about the current SH system. I'm so angry!

A Han Chinese who had just crossed over, who almost died one second, started working hard to save Americans the next second. . . What do you want me to say?

Love is written like licking a dog, the woman has no role at all, the protagonist gives unconditionally, it's like licking a dog

It's so uncomfortable. I've posted it many times to explain why I changed the map, but it's all been swallowed😓

It's so well written. Don't write anymore. Find a job in a factory.

This protagonist feels inferior to the people of the motherland. He creates a remnant of time to cause destruction and pretends to be a good person to be a hero. This kind of character usually appears in TV anime and is the most annoying character. Where does the author get the confidence to think that he will write such a protagonist and people will like it?

Emmm, what do you say? Don't you think the protagonist's abilities have far exceeded the upper limit of the map of Marvel Earth? A Flash with all the abilities is already buggy enough, plus Superman and Doomsday... Can he still be a reporter on Earth in a single universe with such abilities? Fight gangsters? Fight warlords? Thanos and Darkseid are not good enough for the protagonist...

If you don't know how to write emotional scenes, don't write them. It'll be very embarrassing. Or write less and just brush it off in one stroke.

I gave one of my golden finger abilities to a person who I became my girlfriend after not knowing each other for a long time——La~

Why restart the whole thing? ? ? The system is completely gone, and only the Speed ​​Force is left? ? ?

The Flash and Spider-Man are generally written by relatively naive authors. Can be forgiven.

There is DC in Marvel, and there is Marvel in DC. I remember there was a parallel universe with characters from Marvel and DC.

Kill S. H. I. E. L. D., Nick Fury, and the United States

The ability is too abrupt, simple and crude, does not require development, and the pace is very fast. It is not expected that I can write a long novel.

Kara

Just read it as a fun article. I personally feel that this book won't take long to write. I feel that it will be good if I can write 200,000 words.

This book of yours originally had some hope, but your hope has disappeared. The reason is that the writing collapsed and you forced it to be cut. If you are a strong man and change the plot, no one will have such a big opinion. I suggest you start a new book and learn from the experience, or you may rewrite the entire book. Also, your writing is really bad, but the plot is okay, so I'll say goodbye.

It's hard to believe that I, a fan of books with multiple female protagonists, would say this, but it would really be much better if the female protagonist was deleted from this book. The emotional scenes are too awkward. How could you just reveal your identity on the second meeting and then get hooked for no reason... I put this book on the bookshelf for almost a month, but after reading a few chapters... Ugh

It's not good, it feels like those junk novels from previous years

I passed by but didn't watch it, I hope I stick to it! Personal suggestion: If you want to earn pocket money, then read the popular books and how they are written! If you just want to write down what you think about! Then don't care what others say!

The previous chapters have been revised. If there is anything that is not good, please tell me in detail and I will revise it. But I'll forgive you for the writing style. When I wrote essays in the past, I was average.

If comics are reopened, you can write novels and dare to reopen them

Five chapters of confession🤫

{"NickName":"Hunyuan Daluo","UserId":371605863} When will you return to Marvel? Continuing before the split America Six begins