Fellow Taoist, Your Red Luan Star Has Moved.

With this number of words, it is considered fat enough to be slaughtered and eaten. If I keep reading, without the support of further reading, I won't be able to get recommendations and may not even be listed on the shelves, and I will really be dying by then!

Please be sure to turn the last page when reading the book. I will take a look and read... Please

The writing method is really rare and rare. To be honest, I have never seen it at all. I have seen psychological descriptions written in parentheses, but I have never seen so many psychological descriptions. And don't you think your writing is a bit messy sometimes? It is not very clear to the reader whose psychological words it is. In addition, the author's writing style is really poor. I should be tactful enough, right? Probably. Is there anyone with high emotional intelligence who can tell me? How to tactfully say that the author's writing is poor. There is also the problem of dialogue. The author also clearly recognized his own problem. I didn't read the back part, so I don't know what the author changed later, but I should still be able to read this book. Probably.

I ordered a chapter just to criticize the author, but after reading it at chapter 60, I changed it and there was not so much nonsense The subject matter is good, but the previous part is full of nonsense and there are only a few practical sentences. There is too much written, so I don't want to jump in for fear of missing the setting I have enough patience for the previous part, but it is too disgusting. Let's wait for the author's next book.

How should I put it? The overall plot is pretty good and the ideas are relatively good, but the plot is too serious and there are too many unnecessary things. There is too much nonsense in a plot, which makes it really difficult to watch. I'm waiting for the next one. The author has finished writing this one and practicing it. I think it's almost ready.

I really didn't pay attention to this issue before. From a certain perspective (myself), this writing method is very convenient. It can not only promote the plot but also better shape the characters (water word count). But many people have said that this issue affects the perception. I will use it as little as possible and try to exercise restraint in the future. Please bear with me in the previous chapters.

It's a bit interesting, but in my personal opinion it has a few flaws. As you already know, there are multiple dialogues between authors, and the dividing lines and psychological activities in parentheses make the whole chapter very confusing. When I wrote this review, I only watched the first few pictures, and the plot was good. But the first few pictures looked really confusing and almost put me off. This is just a personal opinion, and I would like to emphasize again that my personal opinion is not the annoying way to teach authors to write books.

After reading the first few chapters, I have no motivation to read further.

It feels like this Ye Ling doesn't like the protagonist very much. What kind of heroine would take the opportunity of the male protagonist and not give a copy to the male protagonist? For example, Nangong Li didn't swallow up the hero's sword in the stone even if he found it. This Ye Ling feels that she is of no use to the protagonist, and I feel that she would still want to steal all the opportunities from the male protagonist if conditions do not allow it, which is a stumbling block. Huanxi's enemy was just soft-spoken and refused on the surface, secretly giving the protagonist a copy of the technique, not afraid that it was an important life-saving thing. The protagonist used it to survive the difficulties of life and death in his previous life. There was no possibility of death in this life. She had never thought about this "heroine". However, the author's writing style and the creation of other characters are still perfect. I hope they can adopt some ideas and improve the heroine.

The story lines of the heroines before their rebirth are different, so let's talk about them here.

Can psychological language indicate who is thinking? It makes my head spin 😵

Is it necessary to fully describe the character's psychology? It looks really awkward

What bothers me the most is helping people with wiring

No one is there

I've read a few chapters, and my thoughts are OK, and I think it's quite interesting. But one big problem with this novel is that it looks too confusing. When looking at the characters' inner thoughts, you need to think about who is thinking, and you also need to think about who is speaking during the dialogue (it may also be because I read too quickly), and I feel that there is no need to add parentheses to the character's inner thoughts. It is very tiring to watch. It can be connected to the dialogue between the characters, or behind the characters. Fewer parentheses and more connection between words.

A love story without a knife is soulless! ! !

You can vote for as many monthly votes as there are harems. Harem = monthly votes, understand...?

I feel like there are too many activities in my heart, and it seems a bit chaotic

Is there nothing particularly attractive about the plot? I always feel like something is missing. 🙂

I took a quick look at it, it's quite interesting. I feel a bit uncomfortable about matchmaking, because having a good impression of each other does not mean liking each other, and there is nothing wrong with matchmaking if there is mutual affection. I feel that it is best to help him casually, rather than matchmaking for him if he has a good impression, which makes people feel a bit uncomfortable. However, the author's other writings are quite good and really interesting. The author is great, keep up the good work!

I have read roughly ten chapters, and I feel relieved that not many people have read it.

How should I put it? You have so few fans.

You have to remember that under the elixir is like an ant, love and love are like bubbles, do you understand?

Author, this system can be the consciousness of the male protagonist in his previous life

It's broken. I thought it was close to the point of scheming, but when I saw the bathroom, I changed hands and risked killing. I shouldn't have done it. Moreover, it was really bad because of the framing. There were too many psychological descriptions.