The Art of Exquisite Craftsmanship

Well written! The plot and writing style are both excellent. I've been reading on Qidian for over ten years, and I've given up on many books after just a few reads. Catching up to the same level in about a day is quite rare! Keep it up!

The writing is quite good, unfolding smoothly, but it's not a wish-fulfillment story. The male lead isn't an emperor, general, or prince, and the female lead isn't of high status either. People who love to dream and fantasize wouldn't relate to ordinary people's lives. The next story does feature a general as the male lead, but so far, I think the second male lead, who has only a few appearances as a female supporting character, is more compelling.

The logic is too messy; I can't understand what it's saying.

The writing is good, but it feels very disorganized, and there's a reason why nobody reads it!