This Saint Wants to Retire

The more I write, the worse it gets. I have an incorrect outlook on things. I am a dog-licker of Marvel. I can't stand itgo

There is too little Saint Seiya flavor, and there are a lot of private goods. Regardless of whether the country is great or not, does it need you to praise it in fictional novels? If you want to watch national content, why not go to the history and military channels? What are you worried about as a fan writer?

The plot is written in a mess and has too many jumps. . . I predict that this book will still be as eunuch as the previous ones.

In Chapter 29, the protagonist uses his ability to forcibly change the personalities of everyone else in the school because he is a descendant of a veteran and looks down on the views of others in the school. So disgusting

If you want to criticize reality, just write it openly. If you don't dare to write it, just tell your story honestly, come up with some weird names, and make some weird metaphors. It's totally different, bad review

Can you please stop writing about the protagonist's original world? TM is too embarrassing.

I still didn't grasp the point. What I wanted to see was how the Saints defeated the heavens, not a superpower battle in reality. The protagonist's appearance is short and has no sense of presence, but the insignificant plot is very exciting. I opened a small account and watched The Amazing Spider-Man, and when I returned to reality, I just turned the pages without stopping. It's not easy to write a new story about Saint Seiya, but the plot is hard to describe in one sentence, alas! Come on, author

Just mention the real-life plot in one go, or don't write it at all. What everyone is watching is changing the various dimensions, not watching you create a modern plot to enjoy yourself.

In what era has this kind of third-rate urban Long Aotian routine appeared before the world was peaceful before cheating, and after cheating? Isn't this just a reskinned urban soldier king (the miracle doctor is the immortal emperor...)?

By the way, the little girl named Bai is your childhood sweetheart, right? The two families live so close to each other, but why is the conversation so awkward? She must have a good relationship. Why does the girl named Bai feel like a tool in your heart when you come back from Saint Seiya?

Saint Seiya can 👍, but I have promised to retire, but this is too much trouble. I think it is better to be the boss behind the scenes and train the cute little newbie in slippers and pants and wolfberry beach chair. Think about it

It feels like the current male protagonist is a bit inferior to the love and justice of the Saint.

It's a mess, it's a mess, let's change the title of the book.

I seem to remember that the mythology of the Saint Seiya series is actually different from the Greek mythology. The creator god of the Saint Seiya multiverse is Chronos. The universe was first born with 8 ancient gods. There is no god Chaos, or Chaos refers to chaos, has no self, and is not a god.

I didn't want it in the Saint Seiya's harem, but ended up returning to my own world to open another one.

Self-pleasure. . .

What should I say? I can't see the Saint Seiya, right! Can't see it! ! Because of the strength of the protagonist, it would not be inconsistent to switch to other systems. Although all methods have returned to the sect, the Mahayana has returned, and Ping A is invincible, but what I want to see is the type of Saint Seiya's holy clothes, the heroic moves, and the handsomeness of the light speed fist It is not the current one. It can be changed to at any time; the return of Star Wars, the application of the force;

The more I write, the worse it gets. It's not as good as the Marvel one. Why are you looking for a plot? I like Saint Seiya the most. What a pity.

Saint Seiya Alas, my first book was Saint Seiya, but unfortunately it was harmonized. I have a headache after harmonizing three books.

The author, let me tell you about the character of the male protagonist. His outlook is better. The latest chapter of Luffy's Transformation. After reading it, I felt that it was not too self-righteous. Luffy was transformed and tortured. This is too good of you. Why did I always get the wrong answer last time I read the book? Because the three views are not correct.

There was a movie about Marvel's Saint Seiya before, also called Lexia. Was it written by the same person?

The map changes suddenly, the plot progresses in a daze, and the author doesn't seem to have an outline to write what he has in mind.

The book is okay, but it's too watery. Only one chapter is full of 2/3 of the water.

I still remember that the account of Tencent's Saint Seiya mobile game, complete illustrations and complete Saint Cloth Awakening, called Harry Bo in the Q50 area of ​​my mobile phone was particularly large. I stopped playing it a year and a half ago and couldn't sell it. The main number used.

Are the top five in Saint Seiya gone?

Come on＾0＾~, it's rare to see anything written about Saint Seiya.

Nice to meet you

What the hell are you writing in the last few chapters? Is there no outline? The style of painting has changed!

Author, are you enjoying writing this? I can't stand it when I see so-called gamers going to Spider-Man in the United States to use passers-by as NPCs in the game and kill them indiscriminately. Moreover, the country's soldiers are described as mercenary and careless about human life (killing American police and chickens to scare monkeys). The protagonist is a shitty Saint. No matter how bad the Saint's character is, at most he only kills after the Pope's orders. Is it interesting to arrange this Invaders game on a whim?

The author has written several Saint Seiyas, right? The previous two Saint Seiyas and Marvel's were all written by the same author (both of them are unfinished😡)