This Saint Seiya Hero Wants to Retire

It gets worse and worse, the values ​​are warped, and it's just a Marvel fangirl. I can't stand it anymore.

It lacks the essence of Saint Seiya and is filled with personal bias. Regardless of whether a country is great or not, does it need your praise in a fictional novel? If you want to see content about the country, why don't you go to the history and military channels? What are you worrying about, you fanfiction writer?

The plot is a mess, too disjointed... I predict this book will end up being abandoned like my previous ones.

Chapter 29: The protagonist, because he is the descendant of a veteran, looks down on the values ​​of everyone else at school and uses his abilities to forcibly change the personalities of all the other students. It's disgusting.

If you want to criticize reality, write it openly and honestly. If you're too afraid to write, then just tell your story honestly, using strange titles and employing sarcastic metaphors. Creating something that's neither one thing nor the other deserves a bad review.

Can you please stop writing about the protagonist's original world? It's so awkward.

The author still hasn't grasped the key points. I wanted to see Saint Seiya warriors crushing all the gods, not a superpowered battle in reality. The main character has little screen time and lacks presence, while the irrelevant plot points are written quite excitingly. I could read The Amazing Spider-Man on a secondary account, but back in reality, I was flipping through pages non-stop. It's rare to find a new Saint Seiya story, but the plot is indescribable. Sigh! Author, keep it up!

If you're going to gloss over the real-world plot, just leave it at that. People are here to see how things change across different dimensions, not to watch you create some modern storyline for your own amusement.

What era are we living in that we still have this third-rate urban overlord trope where everything is peaceful before the protagonist gains power, but becomes a monster once the power-up is activated? Isn't this just a reskinned urban soldier king (divine doctor, divine divination, immortal emperor...)?

So, is that girl surnamed Bai your childhood friend? Our families live so close, but why is our conversation so awkward? We should be very close, right? Why, after the Saint Seiya event, does she seem like just a tool in your eyes?