This Saint Seiya Hero Wants to Retire

The more I write, the worse it gets. I have an incorrect outlook on things. I am a dog-licker of Marvel. I can't stand itgo

There is too little Saint Seiya flavor, and there are a lot of private goods. Regardless of whether the country is great or not, does it need you to praise it in fictional novels? If you want to watch national content, why not go to the history and military channels? What are you worried about as a fan writer?

The plot is written in a mess and has too many jumps. . . I predict that this book will still be as eunuch as the previous ones.

In Chapter 29, the protagonist uses his ability to forcibly change the personalities of everyone else in the school because he is a descendant of a veteran and looks down on the views of others in the school. So disgusting

If you want to criticize reality, just write it openly. If you don't dare to write it, just tell your story honestly, come up with some weird names, and make some weird metaphors. It's totally different, bad review

Can you please stop writing about the protagonist's original world? TM is too embarrassing.

I still didn't grasp the point. What I wanted to see was how the Saints defeated the heavens, not a superpower battle in reality. The protagonist's appearance is short and has no sense of presence, but the insignificant plot is very exciting. I opened a small account and watched The Amazing Spider-Man, and when I returned to reality, I just turned the pages without stopping. It's not easy to write a new story about Saint Seiya, but the plot is hard to describe in one sentence, alas! Come on, author

Just mention the real-life plot in one go, or don't write it at all. What everyone is watching is changing the various dimensions, not watching you create a modern plot to enjoy yourself.

In what era has this kind of third-rate urban Long Aotian routine appeared before the world was peaceful before cheating, and after cheating? Isn't this just a reskinned urban soldier king (the miracle doctor is the immortal emperor...)?

By the way, the little girl named Bai is your childhood sweetheart, right? The two families live so close to each other, but why is the conversation so awkward? She must have a good relationship. Why does the girl named Bai feel like a tool in your heart when you come back from Saint Seiya?