Travel Around the World Starting from Xiaoao

This book is unfair and the author doesn't listen to opinions at all. While he looked down on Linghu Chong, he did everything Linghu Chong did. In the beginning, I said I wanted to change, but later I had to follow the plot.

The first dungeon was simply extremely poisonous. The protagonist's joining of Huashan not only did not change the original fate of Huashan, but instead exacerbated the ruin of the Huashan sect! This is how the protagonist repays Yue Buqun for his life-saving grace, his nurturing grace, and his teaching grace! ! ! The protagonist is extremely selfish and mindless in doing things. He starts from going down the mountain and is poisoned all the way to death! Even Yue Buqun actively colluded with Yang Lianting to obtain the Sunflower Manual. In the original work, Lao Yue got to that point, which was completely formal. But as far as the author is concerned, it is awesome. Yue Buqun actively colluded with Yang Lianting to obtain the Sunflower Manual. Is Lao Yue's Gentleman's Sword in vain? Regardless of whether he is a true gentleman or a true villain, since he is called "Junzijian" by the nickname "Junzijian" in the world, it is inevitable that Lao Yue must be consistent with his style. You can secretly scold him as a hypocrite, but there is no difference between his appearance and his appearance. He only gave him a wrong name, not a wrong nickname! As for the protagonist, all kinds of contrivances make the Huashan faction in a more passive position than the original work. The author doesn't want to follow the original work, but he is unable to construct a new plot, so he uses various ancient routines to make the protagonist transcend the original plot. As a result, the protagonist created is more exaggerated than Linghu Chong's actions, and he is completely an enlarged version of Linghu Chong! Lao Yue should be so heartbroken that he would jump off a cliff! 😮‍💨, Extremely poisonous, I'll read it next time I have a chance, damn, I'll write my own book starting from Huashan

After reading the story of The Legend of Two Dragons, I was really disgusted. Let me explain in detail. I think what I said makes sense, so I gave it a like and let the author see it: First, the first two worlds still knew the cause and effect (with Yue Buqun and the Yang family), let alone whether they did it well or not, at least they had the intention. Now that the identity and body of Shuanglong are no longer the cause and effect of others? The death of the body does not mean the end of cause and effect. Whether it is Buddhism or Taoism, this thing is taboo, unless you do not write about Gaowu in the future. Of course, the original work doesn't even know Yang You at all, and it's not clear whether he wants this country or a free Ma Nanshan (this is just my displeasure) Second, is the historical filter too heavy? He was obsessed with giving up the Yang family to Li Shimin. The problem is that Li Shimin's accession to the throne was not correct. Li Shimin also changed history. Although he did not change the fact that he killed his brother and imprisoned his father, he beautified it. It was Li Shimin's credit that Li Yuan took the lead in raising the army. The Xuanwumen rebellion was forced. The problem is that he himself is not clean. He established Tiance Mansion on his own and has his own small government and military power. Who will believe that he has no intention of rebellion? There is also the fact that Li Tang in history was originally mixed with Xianbei. What's more, The Legend of Double Dragon is an imaginary world. Why do you need to include official history? In Shuanglong, it is not just Liu Zhou and Wang Shichong who are praising the Turks' bad feet, but also Li Tang. The current Li Tang is not the Khan who swept across the grassland. Why do you just bow to him? If there is such a big prejudice against aliens in 183, why do we do this? Both Dang and Li Third: Did Shuanglong of the Tang Dynasty make a mistake in applying Xun Qin Ji? Is Xun Qin Ji tenable based solely on the expressive power of the two worlds? According to the development of the Shuanglong world, the force of force will become weaker and weaker, and it will become more and more difficult to break the void. This proves that there should be genuine Qi practitioners who cultivated immortality in the pre-Qin Dynasty. Is this it? Can he still die? There is no explanation as to why there is such a big gap in military force. Also, had you ever considered the God of War and Guangchengzi before Tao Xunqin Ji? Everyone has said that Double Dragon is divided into upper and lower realms, and there is also a demon dragon in the Temple of War (dragon), so the author never thought about it before setting up the world? Furthermore, there is a bug. If Xiang Shaolong passes on the named monarchs, their characteristics, and the method of identifying outsiders to future generations, isn't he afraid that he will be like a civet cat in a movie and TV show to replace the prince? Just call this person Li Shimin. Does it matter whether he is true or false? Do you know the saying that the Holy Emperor bows his head and the world governs itself? (Isn't this a constitutional monarchy?) Secondly, the longer the information is transmitted, the easier it is to be distorted. Who in the future will care about the predictions of the ancestors, let alone this person's death. The only lesson that can be learned from history is that the lesson was not learned Fourth: From the legend of Shuanglong alone, almost the entire decent sect bet everything on Li Shimin, and even planned to elect an emperor to build momentum for him. Apart from this, no good performance was seen. In response to Mr. Lei's words: Pigs can fly even if they stand on the wind. Fifth: Why do you think you can survive in this troubled world just because you are a great master? The question is, you can just like Kou Zhong today and give up the country regardless of your subordinates. If one day you are unable to advance in martial arts, will you want to enjoy being an emperor again? What do you think? Besides, the great masters in the original work basically have their own constraints and weaknesses. You alone have no weaknesses. Do you think a big power can sleep there? Even if Li Shimin doesn't care, Cihang Jingzhai will inevitably not take advantage of him for the sake of a stable foundation (they have bet all their wealth on Li Shimin). Not to mention that Xiaorou's two siblings are weak points. At best, they are just a moment of compassion, not to mention. (Don't act like a virgin, you know you are not) Akali: Assassins (strong ones) who don't obey others are the most terrifying. Don't brag about how awesome the protagonist is. There is an upper limit to the true energy and the upper limit to the output ability, as long as it lasts long enough. But when the world is unified, everyone will be liquidated, and there is no protection from being beaten by the master (again, they have weaknesses, and they can be driven and coerced if they have restraints, even if it is only once, it is enough). After your absence, Li Yu of the Tang Dynasty was to Zhao Kuangyin, and the royal family of the Ming Dynasty was to the Qing Dynasty. The examples go on and on. So this volume is really poisonous 😅

After watching Xiaoao, I felt pretty good. Some people think that being unhappy is poisonous, but I disagree. But for people like me, when I see Time Travel Swordsman, I feel so happy that I feel so happy, hahahaha. I didn't feel there were any logical problems throughout the article, nor did I feel it was OOC, so I personally didn't think it was toxic at all. Although it is a pity that the Lin family and Liu family were still destroyed, I still like Yue Buqun's handling of it. Although it is a bit frustrating to read, it is indeed Yue Buqun in my mind. In addition, it is quite baffling to say that the protagonist is Linghu Chong plus. How many times did the protagonist have to consult with the master, but he was either driven away or prevaricated? What should he do? It was later confirmed that the master knew clearly that he was plotting against the protagonist. Don't say that the protagonist causes trouble, what did he cause trouble on his own initiative? Qingcheng faction? As long as you don't kill those bastards, do you still have three views? Besides, the Huashan Sect is not afraid of the Qingcheng Sect. In a real fight, Yu Canghai would just go around in circles. What else? I was afraid that the master would go astray and burned the evil-proofing sword manual, and then the master colluded with the Demon Cult to get the Sunflower Book to practice. . . So Yue Buqun was willing to fall. The protagonist tried hard to hold him back, but he was left in a state of embarrassment, and his master turned to the dark side with a twist of his face. Completely self-consistent, nothing wrong with it. It is true that a gentleman does not care about his heart when it comes to his deeds, and his heart is his sword. Later, when his heart is crooked, his deeds are also crooked, and he is just an evil demon. Although there is no way to turn the tide after time travel, compared to many time travelers, having their own persistence and not forgetting their original intentions is also a breath of fresh air. In this world of smiles and pride, there is no such thing as deceit and deceit, and even if you use a sword to fight against injustice, this life will not be in vain.

I read more than a dozen chapters and then flipped through the catalog. I subscribed to one and then let me tell you, this book is extremely poisonous. You have traveled through time and just sat back and watched the tragedy of the Huashan Sect repeat itself. Then why are you traveling through time? The only role of the protagonist is to walk the same path that Linghu Chong has walked. This is a disease, right? Yue Buqun raised you for so many years and still let him die. In fact, when you first saw that he was the reincarnation of a mercenary, you didn't want to see it anymore. I don't know if those who praised it are junior high school students. Anyway, I don't think any adult with normal thinking would think this book is good.

It's really outrageous. I was able to withstand the first dozen chapters. The following sword techniques and Huashan internal skills were all at full level. I became a saint and learned the Dugu Nine Swords Zixia Magic Skill. I was also sneak-attacked by Yu Canghai and fell into a coma.

The writing style conceals the weak point of the plot. The whole Linghu Chong plus uses better martial arts than Linghu Chong, the ability to solve problems better, a deeper understanding of the information situation, and the almost prophetic advantage of a time traveler - and then watch him develop all the things that Linghu Chong was powerless in the original. Is the protagonist going on a trip? Read the original work in first person?

This book just changed Linghu Cong's name... Linghu Cong and the evil heretic call themselves brothers. The protagonist has a secret love for the leader of the evil cult. Then the granddaughter of the evil cult elder chases Huashan and makes unreasonable troubles. She stalks and wants to marry him, and the protagonist still protects... Linghu Cong hides all the good things he has, and the protagonist is the same. The evil sword manual is hidden, the Dugu Nine Swords are hidden, and all the information that predicts the plot is hidden... The author has not changed all the fragments that can change the plot. Linghu Cong still went down the mountain to deliver the message and angered the Qingcheng faction. Lin Pingzhi's parents still died. Although the protagonist was hiding not far away, the author explained that the protagonist could not kill the enemy. Although Ningzhong Zeyue Buqun was not far away, the protagonist was there waiting for the death of Lin Pingzhi's parents. Wait, wait In order not to affect the plot, the protagonist was locked up directly, and he couldn't get over the cliff. It was really disgusting to watch, and it was ridiculous at the same time. In the early stage, he said that he only knew one way to obtain potential points, and he would not use it even if he died. Later, in the name of eradicating violence and peace, he would never cripple him if he could.

The fighting force was so overwhelming that it exploded. The protagonist's initial martial arts skills were all extraordinary and reached the maximum level. However, he was suppressed and beaten by others (their martial arts were probably even strong enough for Dacheng). He even vomited blood two or three times and ran away, hahaha! ! !

The writing of Xiaoao is really ugly, and the main character is worse than Linghu Chong. I don't want to see the rest anymore

" It's really vicious and hypocritical. If you didn't plan to do anything to Yue Lingshan from the beginning, don't write it too ambiguously. After hugging and hugging each other, you ignored it, and let Yue Lingshan and Lin Pingzhi get together. Is this a case of literary youth? You have traveled through time, and people from the Qingcheng and Songshan sects have been killed. The plot has been changed a long time ago, and it has to be forced to adhere to the original work. You can't write the plot without leaving the original work, right? If that's the case, then why would you change the plot so drastically? I gave up before finishing the free chapter! It's a daily guide

Think about what you were like when you first went up the mountain, and then think about how Lao Yue treated you in the book. I hope you won't make Lao Yue sad anymore. As long as these time-traveling protagonists have some conscience and use Lao Yue to learn other people's Zixia Gong, can't they run Huashan well and satisfy Lao Yue's lifelong pursuit? Really, if Huashan gets better, will Lao Yue still pursue the sword manual to ward off evil spirits?

The first few pictures were okay, but after I saved Qu Feiyan, he died of poisoning! If you don't know how to write about emotions, you can write about how to carry forward the sect! I raised you up and taught you martial arts, but you still disobey your master? Traitor

Maintain a good rhythm, maintain the passion for writing, and finishing the book is a victory. Even if you think the middle period is going to end, it's okay. Your writing skills and writing skills are all developed through practice. In the future, when you look back, you will give yourself an explanation, not the dead eunuch that others say

I'm speechless 😑, can you please stop writing nonsense? The combat power system actually collapsed while smiling. (Don't find it unpleasant what I say below, it's a fact.) There is a place at the beginning that I won't say much about. What the hell is that in Chapter 29? The protagonist Dugu Nine Swords is almost perfect, and his internal strength is not low. Not to mention Hefeng Qingyang and Dongfang Invincible. At least I think Zuo Lengchan and his like are probably no match for the protagonist. What's the result? What did you write? Zhu Tianliu, are you afraid that you will have nothing to write? Why go against the readers? How many readers will be pissed off when you write like this?

The most annoying thing is that the protagonist in Zhutianwen kills the minions without mercy, and kills them with just a raised hand, but when he meets the plot characters, he shows mercy in all kinds of ways. What, the plot characters are human beings, but not human beings? Can't kill? Or can't you write without plot characters? Nowadays Zhutianliu is basically like this, as if the protagonist can't continue writing if he doesn't follow the plot.

The protagonist goes down the mountain and goes to Qingcheng to show off... Why are you in someone else's house? Later, knowing that he could not defeat Yu Canghai, he still killed his disciple in front of him and was beaten half to death. "..." Chunchun is a brainless and reckless upstart, so forget it like this. I mentioned before that he is steady, and his city... Is amazing. Immediately afterwards, I was rescued by Ren Yingying, the Blue Phoenix... Be more natural!

This combat power has collapsed. All the internal strength, swordsmanship, and light kung fu are all at the level of extraordinary. He has also practiced the Dugu Nine Swords, but he still can't beat Yu Canghai. He was beaten into a dog twice, and he escaped by chance each time. Among other Xiaoao fans, Yu Canghai is just cannon fodder in the early stage. He can't beat the protagonist even though he is cheating. It's so funny.

The title of the book is right, the protagonist is just traveling around the world, and the author pretty much copied the plot. Yue Lingshan likes the protagonist, but the protagonist knocks her beloved sword off the cliff during a sword fight just like Linghu Chong in the original novel. After that, Lingshan goes to play with Ping Zhi, and the protagonist just hums when she finds out. The only difference is that Lingshan didn't change her mind until the protagonist left Xiaoao. Maybe the author was afraid of being too vicious to scare away too many readers. The most poisonous plot is the protagonist's death in filial piety for Lao Yue. When he went up the mountain to become a disciple, he vowed to give Lao Yue a good ending. What was the result? What Lao Yue is doing is to rebel against the Five Mountains Alliance, Shaolin, and Wudang. In such things as rebellion, there is never any progress or retreat! The protagonist, however, jumped out and said something about stopping when Lao Yue was crippled and left to his own devices, and Fang Zheng was fighting alone. What have you been doing! ? Knowing that the plot was going to develop, he did nothing to stop it before. When Lao Yue was about to succeed, he suddenly jumped out and said, "Stop it." Can you stop rebellion? This kind of thing has always been either successful or benevolent! My filial piety to my father-in-law!

They are all praising the author. Do you really mean it? The water is too deep.

Last night I had the patience to read the Xiaoao chapter. Overall, it was very good. The ideas were novel. I haven't felt this way for a long time. The author wrote something of his own and did not follow the trend. This is very good. In the current situation, few people can do this from the starting point. At this point, I congratulate the author on the successful conclusion of Swordsman and raise some hopes: I hope the author can persevere and not give up halfway, I hope the author can consummate the marriage of the protagonist (Yue Lingshan) in Swordsman, I hope the author can continue his efforts and write a good story about the Shooting Condor and even the Divine Condor.

Until now, I still haven't figured out why Yue Buqun became like that. Obviously Yue Buqun had previously passed on the Zixia magical power to the protagonist; Obviously the protagonist had burned the evil-proofing sword manual in advance; Obviously many things had changed, but in the end it was still the same...

In order to be able to write comments, I specially ordered a few copies. I just want to tell everyone that the first 20 chapters were okay, but the 21st chapter was toxic and I was forced to quit.

Do you also charge for a closing speech? That's outrageous

Is Xiaoao okay... Datang is really bored to death, he keeps chirping back and forth... It's really trying to persuade him to quit.

By the way, I have never seen the level division. To be honest, I still have a human touch. I will be like a swordsman in the future. The Condor is even more outrageous. Others are getting better as they practice martial arts. However, here is the superposition of top skills. I dueled with the Golden Wheel for a long time and realized the inner sword. The superposition did not show how high the martial arts is. The more the stacking, the higher the number of years it takes to achieve the mastery of the skills. The Tang Dynasty is even more outrageous. He traveled through time and directly replaced the emperor. Although he was a puppet, let's write something new. He should not be the emperor. I am not the emperor. I only need to absorb people's inner strength, find top skills, and then practice, and then break the void. Seeing now, I have the same impression of pig's feet. Even if I always time travel, I still have to practice swordsmanship and practice. I want to get stronger and stronger. I am just a crazy person.

The sudden ending was a bit rushed, but the ending was handled well, at least it gave Yang Qing emotional completion! It is also a destination in my heart as a reader! Overall it's good!

I specially ordered 100 yuan to come back and say something, which is about moral issues and false propaganda. The reason why I came to see this country is because of the comments section. Some people said that he is creative, and I was also hit by his creativity. The result is still the same routine.

Let's do a gradual cycle later, come on! This book is still okay

The ending was a bit ridiculous, I was still thinking that I should go to other worlds.