Journeying Through the Heavens, Starting with The Smiling, Proud Wanderer

I read more than a dozen chapters and then flipped through the catalog. I subscribed to one and then let me tell you, this book is extremely poisonous. You have traveled through time and just sat back and watched the tragedy of the Huashan Sect repeat itself. Then why are you traveling through time? The only role of the protagonist is to walk the same path that Linghu Chong has walked. This is a disease, right? Yue Buqun raised you for so many years and still let him die. In fact, when you first saw that he was the reincarnation of a mercenary, you didn't want to see it anymore. I don't know if those who praised it are junior high school students. Anyway, I don't think any adult with normal thinking would think this book is good.

It's really outrageous. I was able to withstand the first dozen chapters. The following sword techniques and Huashan internal skills were all at full level. I became a saint and learned the Dugu Nine Swords Zixia Magic Skill. I was also sneak-attacked by Yu Canghai and fell into a coma.

The writing style conceals the weak point of the plot. The whole Linghu Chong plus uses better martial arts than Linghu Chong, the ability to solve problems better, a deeper understanding of the information situation, and the almost prophetic advantage of a time traveler - and then watch him develop all the things that Linghu Chong was powerless in the original. Is the protagonist going on a trip? Read the original work in first person?

This book just changed Linghu Cong's name... Linghu Cong and the evil heretic call themselves brothers. The protagonist has a secret love for the leader of the evil cult. Then the granddaughter of the evil cult elder chases Huashan and makes unreasonable troubles. She stalks and wants to marry him, and the protagonist still protects... Linghu Cong hides all the good things he has, and the protagonist is the same. The evil sword manual is hidden, the Dugu Nine Swords are hidden, and all the information that predicts the plot is hidden... The author has not changed all the fragments that can change the plot. Linghu Cong still went down the mountain to deliver the message and angered the Qingcheng faction. Lin Pingzhi's parents still died. Although the protagonist was hiding not far away, the author explained that the protagonist could not kill the enemy. Although Ningzhong Zeyue Buqun was not far away, the protagonist was there waiting for the death of Lin Pingzhi's parents. Wait, wait In order not to affect the plot, the protagonist was locked up directly, and he couldn't get over the cliff. It was really disgusting to watch, and it was ridiculous at the same time. In the early stage, he said that he only knew one way to obtain potential points, and he would not use it even if he died. Later, in the name of eradicating violence and peace, he would never cripple him if he could.

The fighting force was so overwhelming that it exploded. The protagonist's initial martial arts skills were all extraordinary and reached the maximum level. However, he was suppressed and beaten by others (their martial arts were probably even strong enough for Dacheng). He even vomited blood two or three times and ran away, hahaha! ! !

The writing of Xiaoao is really ugly, and the main character is worse than Linghu Chong. I don't want to see the rest anymore

" It's really vicious and hypocritical. If you didn't plan to do anything to Yue Lingshan from the beginning, don't write it too ambiguously. After hugging and hugging each other, you ignored it, and let Yue Lingshan and Lin Pingzhi get together. Is this a case of literary youth? You have traveled through time, and people from the Qingcheng and Songshan sects have been killed. The plot has been changed a long time ago, and it has to be forced to adhere to the original work. You can't write the plot without leaving the original work, right? If that's the case, then why would you change the plot so drastically? I gave up before finishing the free chapter! It's a daily guide

Think about what you were like when you first went up the mountain, and then think about how Lao Yue treated you in the book. I hope you won't make Lao Yue sad anymore. As long as these time-traveling protagonists have some conscience and use Lao Yue to learn other people's Zixia Gong, can't they run Huashan well and satisfy Lao Yue's lifelong pursuit? Really, if Huashan gets better, will Lao Yue still pursue the sword manual to ward off evil spirits?

The first few pictures were okay, but after I saved Qu Feiyan, he died of poisoning! If you don't know how to write about emotions, you can write about how to carry forward the sect! I raised you up and taught you martial arts, but you still disobey your master? Traitor

Maintain a good rhythm, maintain the passion for writing, and finishing the book is a victory. Even if you think the middle period is going to end, it's okay. Your writing skills and writing skills are all developed through practice. In the future, when you look back, you will give yourself an explanation, not the dead eunuch that others say