I Picked up a Girl from the Southern Song Dynasty

One day, I will kill all the dogs in pieces! It's really good-looking, but really slow! ! ! Also, why isn't Zhou Dongdong released yet? Don't Sister Hua love children to death? 👀

Clarification, I am really not a flower lady...

Well written, I added a superpower background and I'm impressed.

I want to ask if the protagonist won't sell a bunch of disgusting things about ethnic unity to others. The debate between Huayi and Huayi is a good one.

It was well written. The subject matter interested me very much and I read it in one sitting. But I would like to make a suggestion to the author: I hope you can take a good look at how to use commas. I always feel out of breath while reading. I copied a paragraph at random: "The problem is, this needle is right under our noses, and during this interrogation, I also discovered that this guy has a problem." This is a certain paragraph in Chapter 77. Did you feel like there were too many pauses after reading the whole paragraph? Five commas are used in more than thirty words. This is too exaggerated. Although the use of commas is more flexible, I feel that they should generally be placed where we usually pause when speaking. But this is not in line with our speaking habits. Especially at the beginning of this paragraph, it is really uncomfortable to say three words to take a breath. The point is not that this paragraph is a special case, but that this problem exists in the entire book up to now. Let me change a few commas for you and see if it makes it smoother: "The problem is, this needle is right under our noses. Moreover, during this interrogation, I also discovered that this guy has a problem." I think it will be much more comfortable to read after I change it. Let me tell you why I changed it this way. I feel that there is an emphasis after "the problem is" in this paragraph, so a pause should be added. Then it is a complete meaning group until the period, which is not suitable for pause. The word "and" after that is a turning point and can be paused. After that, there is another complete meaning group, and it is not long enough to need a pause. I actually don't want to come to primary school Chinese class, and I must have made some mistakes. After all, Chinese is a broad and profound language, but I can't bear it now. Although online novels don't pay much attention to this, if you can't even read the sentences smoothly, then no matter how good your subject matter is, you will definitely lose a lot of readers. It's because I love this novel that I can't help but say this. I hope the author can change it if he sees it.

The moment the superpower came out, I didn't want to look at it anymore.

Xiaohe seedlings from Kaiyuan, Mu Qingzhu from Southern Song Dynasty

I always feel numb, numb, and disgusted to death😠

The front is okay, but the back is really watery.

I have to say, the Southern Song Dynasty girl... I can believe that she is not Hua Jie, but is the similarity too much?

Whose trumpet is this? In the Great God

The heroine is not named Jiang? 🤔

We are reading everyday articles, not urban cultivators.

I'm really looking forward to this kind of book. Ask how the writing is. Is it edible?

The seven people with fan value are all authors...

It doesn't look good. Anyone who imitates others can't imitate it well.

The early historical part is too long-winded

Show off your skills

Come on, come on, I love books like this, I'll give you a monthly pass

I really don't understand. Isn't it embarrassing to call me brother or baby?