Shaking Light to Cultivate Immortality, I Shocked Master Three Thousand Times

It turns out that he is number one in Donghuang. I think he is number one in Dongguan.

It's very similar to that book, but the author still needs to write it well. I guess he should be able to Jockey Mie Zu

Zhong. Mortal body. Excellent understanding, no beginning + ruthless person =? Emperor of Heaven

The heroine's own emotional line is almost complete, so is it reasonable to insert a protagonist into it to challenge her? I don't know what the author is thinking, but arranging the protagonist and the heroine to end up together will only disgust most readers with normal xp. A gentleman never loses his adult beauty.

Well, I'm sorry, I can't stand it anymore. What I want to read is the kind of relaxed daily writing, similar to Elbow's King Spare Your Life. I've seen too many fighting scenes before. I don't want to see them anymore. I'm sorry. And you may also be a little off topic. Take a look at your profile.

I personally think that the reason why this book is not popular is that the author himself does not know what he is writing. Look at the title of the book, and then look at the introduction. These two are facades, and the readers attracted come for these two. What is the author writing? I took a look at the table of contents and found that it was 600,000 words long. It had nothing to do with Master Mao, and was still having an affair with a few senior sisters. It would only be interesting if it was popular, but other aspects of the writing were not that good. What I said was a bit exaggerated, but I also told the truth. If you think I am wrong, you can tell me.

How can I put it this way? I just feel that many of these recent pictures are very inexplicable towards the protagonist, which makes people feel uncomfortable.

A quick glance at the introduction showed it as the No. 1 Monk in Dongguan, but I didn't expect it to be Donghuang. Forget it, I stopped reading. Dongguan is still good-looking.

Too idealistic😒

Others are okay, but the logic is a bit problematic and the plot is forced. Like this competition, you have to fight to resolve the conflict between your master and the enemy? The character that your master could have shot to death thousands of years ago is neither humble nor arrogant. . There are too many similar shortcomings

I would like to ask if this is a deterioration of filial piety? Or is it just plain filial piety?

Hurry up and update it, it will be updated every day. I haven't survived the ones I watched with this theme.

It's well written, but the title is too cliché. I didn't even think about reading it at first. I read a few chapters before I got the hang of it, and then I ordered it all. It was to encourage the author, and I also voted for the few monthly votes I had. (In addition, the unhurried emotional line feels weird. If you want to write about Master, write Master, and if you want to write about Senior Sister, write Senior Sister. I don't see the harem tendency at the moment, so I should end it as soon as possible. This is the only poisonous point at present. The Master line seems unlikely, although I like Master more) Also I have an idea and found that in this kind of choice-oriented system, most protagonists often choose options, but they are never forced to choose. If you don't like all the options, just don't choose. Doing things according to your own heart is cultivation. There is no need to listen to the system just for rewards.

Good book. That's the name stain. Unattractive

This background setting is a bit like covering the sky. . . .

After reading the introduction, three words suddenly came to mind:

The pace is too slow. I'm not passionate enough. I've read more than 40 chapters, but there's still no "point" that makes people want to continue reading (forget about being cool). The system is so annoying. It keeps wiping out the presence of the system.

Was it shocked three thousand times once, or was it shocked three thousand times?

It's January 29th, I guess he's a eunuch

Why do I feel like looking at perfection + covering the sky?

No matter how hard you practice the Heart Sutra, everything will be fine. . . .

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Wang Wu is mine, you go away 😡😡😡

. . . 1.14Th, no updates for 14 days

The author's sister, is she a harem?