Smiling and Proud Martial Arts of All Heavens

It feels like the two worlds were not written by the same person. The second world is just a running account, which is boring.

It is recommended to write about a world with a higher level, and then write about a world that ascends to the highest level of the world.

I was originally very interested in the heavenly beings, but when I saw Chapter 21, it started to fall apart. A supporting character who didn't even miss a beat in the original novel showed up with the Holy Fire Token and learned the Great Shift of the Universe. This forced addition made me extremely embarrassed. . . .

The author is good at screening readers. In the first ten chapters, the protagonist has been practicing swordsmanship and even found his own swordsmanship! Readers who have read this basically like the protagonist to use a sword. Good guy, if you get a piece of cold iron, instead of making a sword, you can make an iron rod! Accepted

How do you look at this layout? My head hurts

If the network management is not strict and it can add some color, attracting a group of LSPs will depend on whether the novelty of the subject matter and the writing style can attract people. So now when writing novels, it's all about Siheyuan. When the simulator becomes popular, it's all about the simulator. But after all, this is a small AP. There is nothing new in how you write it.

It's funny. The first world summarized the swordsmanship and the seeds of his own martial arts. However, in the third world, he used Taibai Sword Technique inexplicably and lost all his martial arts. Did he travel through time in the game?

First, the protagonist forges a powerful dragon mace after practicing sword fighting for more than ten years. Second, the world of White Eyebrow Hero that the Chivalrous Chapter of Swordsman has gone to is also linked with Zhan Zhao, Wu Shu, and Lord Bao. Moreover, the main plot of the protagonist's martial arts training is unclear. I still haven't seen what he wants to do. The second world he went to is a bit inexplicable. The Swordsman died of old age and then glowed and took his mace with him to transform into a child.

In the past, he was smiling and arrogant, but when he arrived at the Seven Heroes and Five Righteousnesses, he was just like a running account.

Can't we not use first-rate and second-rate? Can't we downplay it? The most annoying thing is to write martial arts to a first-rate and second-rate level. It's not about fantasy. Are you hanging around in the world and others will say "Oh my God, I haven't seen you for a few days. I didn't expect that you have broken through from a third-rate master to a second-rate master. It's so scary." Isn't it embarrassing?

The traces are too obvious. The protagonist in the book has no thoughts of his own and is more like a puppet.

This volume on Chivalry is a complete mess.

Huashan Sword Sect, you don't need a sword, you use a mace! It feels like your understanding of the world is superficial and has no deep meaning! Although it can't all be conspiracy and conspiracy, it can't be completely without depth either!

There is no sense of immersion in Seven Heroes and Five Righteousnesses at all.

Xiaoao's writing is pretty good, but what's next? . . The Seven Heroes and Five Righteousness is so unpopular, and its force value is not high, so I can't understand it. I wrote more than two hundred chapters after looking at the table of contents. . . . The Moon Knife at the End of the World, In the Snow, I haven't seen it, so I can't comment on it.

I was intimidated by the copy of Chivalry. I couldn't stand writing this copy.

What the heck are the Three Heroes and Five Righteousnesses? They are not famous, they don't understand them, and they can't stand them.

His attributes are so awesome, he's just a scumbag if he does it. Farewell.

Does the protagonist use a trump card? Isn't this a heavy weapon used by generals? Its main function is to break heavy armor such as plate armor and chain armor. You, a martial arts warrior, use this thing? Is the enemy wearing heavy armor? How heavy a pair of maces is, how much effort they wield, and how much energy is wasted. And no matter how slow the mace is, shouldn't the Jianghu martial arts routines be fast? People of similar strength can hold a lancet much faster than you can swing a knife. A pair of heavy weapons weighing 10 kilograms each fight against lancets, Miao knives and long swords weighing more than 2 kilograms. 😓

You don't think that the Five Tigers' Door-Breaking Knife is really that ordinary, do you?

Rubbish, the power level is so high, I still don't know how to kill, I'm just stalling for time, the article is very watery, I don't recommend watching it.

Written. . . . . . . . . .

It's bland, just like a documentary, there isn't much dialogue, and the fight descriptions aren't exciting enough.

Why is the second world so long?

Are you excited about the Three Heroes? There are almost 200 photos.

Are you constantly kneeling and unable to get up?

There are actually people who are taller than Yu He. . It's just that Bai Mei didn't mention that Yu He is a martial saint, but there is a Sword Immortal level one higher than him 1. Sword Immortal: "Dominate the Universe" Ye Xuan Ye Yizhou "Invincible Young Master" Li Long Xiu "Mr. God of Martial Arts" Gui Hongfeng "Exclusively Fighting" Changsun Qing "Beihai Lightning God" Lu Caili "Hongjun Sword Ancestor" Xian Liubai "Eternal God and Buddha" Ming Deng Master "The First Demon in the Universe" Hai Qinzi "Dang Mo" The Great Emperor" Li Yuan Li Chengzhuo "The South China Sea Mystery" Su Zhi Su Dingfang "The Demon Forged in Thousands of Years of Ice and Snow" Qiu Haiyue "Kunlun Divine Ancestor" Zhang Hanxiang "The First Evil Emperor" Feng Feilang "The True Immortal of Da Luo" Chen Donglai "Han Emperor" Zhan Wuqing "The Tathagata with Ten Thousand Arms" Tang Tianlin "floating in the sea of blood" Why should he give birth to the "Purple Lightning Great Sword Demon" Baili inexplicably "The ice field determines the world, I am the only one who respects the old deer king" Lu Jin Lu Yuanqin Master Yu He: Zhongzhou Great Sword Shi Zhentian Master Xiaotian Master Huang Lun Shaolin Branch Tiexiang Temple Master Bai Xiang (Zhongzhou Great Sword Master) Exclusively the chief of the great sword Sun Qing Mr. Wushen Gui Hongfeng Master Pudu: Weird martial arts ways Li Wei, Li Xuanxing Eight-armed camel dragon Wei Junda Exclusively the chief of the great sword Sun Qing Mr. Wushen Gui Hongfeng Master Snow Bamboo Lotus: Beihai Electric Light God Lu Caili Beihai Hongjun Sword Ancestor Xian Liubai Exclusive Duo Tou Chang Sun Qing Mr. Wu Shen Gui Hongfeng

It is a low-level novel. Plot. Nothing has changed.

Both Nine Yin and Dragon Elephant, your label is deceptive.

The book may be a good book, but the layout is too dense. All connected together!