Tower Defense: My Talent Is Unrivaled

With your talent, even a pig could hold the line here, is it really necessary?

The primitive city siege is a major bug; the design is purely for fun. If you have a hundred people taking turns attacking you, you're useless—unable to move or develop. This dungeon design is a complete failure.

This beautiful young woman is being unfairly maligned!

Well, it looks alright, but the main character is truly trash. Playing a game, especially one so closely tied to reality, he doesn't even grind. He gets diarrhea from eating instant noodles and then quits for a day—is this what a real gamer is like? A perfect start, and he doesn't even amount to anything. His interactions with the female lead are also incredibly arrogant; it's just annoying to watch.

The content is very unscientific, it's all about having fun, and it's painful to watch!

Hongmeng, with its split body and inner city, grants it the ability to resurrect instantly and remain immortal. The other level-one tower relies entirely on its soul power ultimate skill for damage output. Why not just develop properly? Instead, it just collapsed on its own... Even Xiaobai sighed after seeing this.

Every time, the beginning is well-written, then they insist on adding a female character and setting. This monster has only a few dozen drops of health, and you deal millions of damage. A game novel is being written perfectly well, but you have to add a saint in the first few dozen chapters. What's the point of this saint?

This book is even worse than your last one. If you have a high starting talent, write a game/real-world story. It always starts strong but ends weakly. Before even reaching a hundred chapters, a saint appears. And you insist on suppressing the saint to a lower realm so the protagonist can slap them in the face.

Given the intensity of this first wave, after the first round, the only thing left in the world is the protagonist playing a single-player game.

Short and weak, no wonder he's my father-in-law.