Wife, Your Tail Is Exposed

OMG, folks, this book made it to my daily guide today.

Keep writing, I will support you from behind!

Md, I always think of you as sister-in-law, your tail is exposed.

How should I put it? The subject matter and ideas are good, but the writing skills are a bit lacking and many things cannot be highlighted. I didn't finish it but only watched part of it, from saving the fox and protecting the city to fighting, for love and justice. There's nothing wrong with the outline. There are also explosive points. But I just can't ignite it. The picture you painted does not match the picture I imagined when I read this novel. There is a feeling of being neither above nor below, even a little awkward, which is very uncomfortable. Just like when I saw the title of this chapter, I knew it was about to burst into flames. I was ready to spontaneously combust, and as soon as a spark ignited, you put it out for me. Really uncomfortable. Not to mention that except for poor writing skills, everything else is fine. I don't know if there are many similar themes in this genre. The above is just my personal opinion. If you don't like it, don't spray it. Thank you.

Please collect it, please read it, please read it! Please read it! In addition, besides Zhao Linger, Green Snake and White Snake, what other fairies are there! Please give us some advice from readers!

The Great Wall of our family passes by. Where is your home?

I suggest you start a new book again. What's the best starting point? I just see the system and it feels like it's downgraded. Unless the fanfic has a system, it won't be criticized! You wrote well at the beginning, but when others see that you still have a system, they won't want to read it!

This book? ! ! , Wdf?

Ah, I can't see through the author's thoughts. It seems that the protagonist is not very good at the moment.

The plot is still interesting, but many parts are not clearly written. Come on.

The reason for defending the city seems far-fetched to me. The city cannot be defended at all. If there is a ghost king, just run away.

The cool articles are not cool enough, and they don't have much connotation. It's better to create more cool ones.

The author has changed his vest and started a new book