Film and Television Time Travel Starting from the Courtyard House

If the author wants to improve his book writing, it is best to read more toxic novels and see what readers complain about. After reading more, he will know what is considered toxic, or what makes people not want to follow the book. Later, when I write, I will not make the same mistake easily. Not only will I write a fairy grass, but I will write a grain and grass, and the people of the top grade will be safe. For example, the subject of the courtyard house is mostly about revenge against the first uncle, the second uncle, Qin Huairu, Jia Bang, the Jia family, Xu Damao and the Xu family. It doesn't mean it's good writing, but it doesn't offend people. If you want to write it better, you can write it in reverse. For example, write that the protagonist is the eldest son of the second uncle, Xu Damao's brother, etc. The writing is good, or write that the protagonist is the mastermind behind the scenes. It can be cold-blooded or dark. It can be righteous but not a holy bitch. Or write the protagonist outside the framework of the courtyard house. The writing and plot are better. The subject of the courtyard house must have a place in this book (◦˙▽˙◦) My little personal opinion, I hope it will be useful to the author.

After reading dozens of chapters, I don't like this kind of protagonist. Qin Huairu is the most suitable wife in the whole drama, although she is not suitable as a neighbor. Ask yourself, if you were gone and you were left with three children and a mother-in-law, would your wife still stay at home?

That era was really not suitable for writing about the harem. Do peanuts smell good? I want to try it myself. Lou Xiao'e's part is really inappropriate, and Lou Xiao'e is not that kind of person. The protagonist just drinks in a daze. People who have experienced it will tell you that you can't be strong even when you are drunk. You are forced to lose your wits. You have a big secret in yourself. How big of a heart do you dare to drink drunk and talk nonsense. If the protagonist really had such a personality, he wouldn't survive two levels.

It's very well written. Originally, I didn't support being a Aquaman in that era, but the author handled it very well and wasn't too abrupt. Come on, I support you.

The background of the era is when Aquaman himself eats peanuts. Of course, it can be seen that the author has tried his best to be reasonable and blurred certain details that cannot be avoided. I personally think about how to rationalize the plot arranged by the author. There are a few points that I feel the plot was not handled well. One is that the part where Xu Damao's father was killed and blamed was not handled well. The other is that there was too much interaction with Qin Huairu. Of course, I believe that the author will not arrange it for him. Personally, I really don't like the character of Qin Huairu. After flipping through the previous book, I can see that the author's progress is very obvious. Come on

In the 1960s and 1970s, no matter how successful you were when you opened a harem, it was like a castle in the air. If you were reported to the society for eating peanuts, you would at least be charged with hooliganism. If you let others fall into the trap, you would be in trouble.

More than 1 million words are still lv1. I don't even think about why the author has masochistic tendencies. If you know it, you have to write it. I read novels to express my anger. Who likes to read it depends on the abuse. It is to disgust people. It only strengthens people without knowledge and skills. It doesn't use my brain. I don't know what I want to express. I just write it out to get a subsistence allowance.

Came into the heart to resist the poison and read more than 50 chapters, finally couldn't bear to watch anymore. How to put it, I can only say that the story is quite tortuous, but not good-looking at all. The author is still learning the writing techniques of the 1980s and 1990s. Don't you know how to keep pace with the times? Society is developing, and our need to read novels is also developing. In the past, we read stories and watched other people's joys and sorrows. At that time, the pace of society was slow, and we had time to appreciate it slowly. Now the pace of social development is too fast. What we need is to let ourselves go, emphasize the sense of substitution, watch for fun and passion, and pursue the pleasure of the moment. No one wants to experience suffering and helplessness anymore, because we have experienced too much in reality. The negative energy you want everyone to experience, you want to eat, no one will pay for you...

Ran Qiuye is so beautiful🙂Haha(ಡωಡ)hiahiahia

There were so many sailors. In one afternoon, two animal traps caught more than 40 rabbits? ? ? Are you kidding me?

Chapter 5 is a bit intellectual. How can there be so much game near the imperial capital? ? ? Catch 80 rabbits in two days? Are the farmers nearby not getting rich yet? Just wait for the protagonist to catch you?

The writing is as bad as shit, and it's probably weird to be able to read it.

It looked good from the front, but after seeing the divorce, Qin Huairu and He Yuyu ran to the protagonist's house to sleep, and it was disgusting. One widow and one ham. He said at the beginning that he didn't like the ham type. What was written in the back, he couldn't find the yellow flower girl, and He Yuyu even wrote a report. The letter was written like a love letter. Do you know the power of a report letter in that era? It was comparable to the power of an atomic bomb, and it could be kept in the room. Don't write about that special era if you haven't experienced it. Sons sued their fathers, fathers sued their sons, and there were many people who deceived their masters and destroyed their ancestors. I didn't want to talk anymore and couldn't stand it any longer, so I just made a few remarks.

It's very well written, don't write it next time

What's going on with the author lately? The chapters before and after are incoherent! I don't even know where I wrote it! Everything is repeated after that! My subscription money💰!

All are poison! The author is a cobra spirit, full of poison. Goodbye!

This book has a bad outlook. The rest of the writing is okay, but the main character running away is disgusting. It's a purely moral issue. He took over someone's son's body and ended up faking his own death and running away. If this is found out, his parents, brothers and sister-in-law will be unlucky. But if he can't be found out, wouldn't he be sad if his child died? Just for a few women, the licking dog is so disgusting that I gave up.

The writing is too exciting. Since all the women in the courtyard have gone to bed and taken over the rooms, why are several important characters missing: the deaf old lady, Mrs. Jia and Zhang, and Aunt One, Two, and Three? These five should be treated equally.

Don't read it, you turn a blind eye to people who are good to you, and what they say is good for you is actually cheating you (the protagonist's wife can't have children, so the protagonist finds him a mistress to have children). The protagonist earns all his money from informal channels. The protagonist lets his wife take care of the money. The key is that his wife spends money lavishly and lets a sister with advanced ideas know about it (this is a sister with a big mouth and shows off). The most important thing is that the protagonist does not know (he is the most rubbish protagonist I have ever seen. None of his trusted subordinates dare to make money from speculation, and he also gives the money to his ignorant wife for safekeeping. His wife often spends money to satisfy him. Without the aura of the protagonist, he would have eaten bullets long ago)

I'm really sorry. I was tightened for two consecutive times. I should be able to recover tomorrow morning. I'm sorry!