Helping Spirits Do Good

If you're not good at describing emotions, don't write it. The exchange with the blind date girl was very awkward. The protagonist himself has never taken the initiative to send a message once. When the girl took the initiative to send a message, the protagonist ignored it and added inner drama. There's nothing wrong with not licking others, but you can't wait for others to lick you, right?

After reading a few chapters of this book, I feel that it is just an ordinary system novel, without suspense or weird atmosphere. When talking about some events, it is like talking about daily life. It only talks about life. There is no story about being a ghost who harmed people. In short, there is no plot atmosphere. In fact, when writing, you can use split shots to write, and write the system to be released by the protagonist in his daily life. The task is to change the scene and write out the events that happened. If you want to describe the atmosphere of the scene, try to have a suspenseful atmosphere. Also include the result of the character being killed or frightened, how he was discovered, what the circumstances of his death were, who discovered it, and the people or things he came into contact with during his lifetime. Investigate clearly, or ask people in the village or relatives and friends. It feels like there is no causal relationship between everything, and there is no sense of atmosphere. Maybe the classification is wrong.