The Heavens Beginning with the Broken Sword

The front is okay, the ideas are full, especially the integration method is not inconsistent. But forget about the daily comics. I will come back to read them after you finish writing them.

Since you want to maintain the mood of the Marist Party, then you shouldn't write a plot about burning the sword book in the first place. If you write this kind of plot now, wouldn't it conflict with each other? If you don't want to please both sides and just become a bit vicious, why should you write about returning the favor? Can't we just go over and help?

The knife skills are very good, why don't you let others learn from them? The most annoying thing is that when you get a treasure of heaven and earth, you share it with everyone. How can you share it if you haven't improved your own strength? The author's writing is very true.

When people reach a certain age, some are older and some are younger. There are many worries at work. Coding is one of the few hobbies. It can be regarded as a way to vent when you are upset. I had a minor operation in 2019 and took two months of rest. Later, I encountered many things and lent him more than 100,000 yuan to others. Later, when I needed money, the other party still didn't come out. It's gradually getting better now. Finally, after unremitting efforts, the guys who owed me money agreed to pay back 500 every month! Uh-huh. . I wish you a long life. . I haven't coded for a long time, maybe I can't find the original feeling. I'm very busy at work, so I don't read comments after posting every day. When I read it, I found that the book had been spray-painted. Just because of a small detail in the first few chapters. . They are all talents! The collection is no more than 10,000, and it is nonsense to put it on the shelves. Simply opt for a free contract. Since it is not on the shelves. What else am I afraid of? I will delete all those snarky comments! Let's update one or two chapters a day. I just want to give back to those readers who still remember me.

The protagonist is so selfish and shameless, it's so disgusting.

This protagonist is the most disgusting among Zhutenliu. After watching more than 20 pictures, I really can't stand it anymore. I can understand some readers saying they don't want to save the monk. After all, it's inappropriate for an otaku who just traveled through time to be involved in such a life-and-death battle. But what the protagonist does later is very disgusting. He steals other people's sword manuals and burns them after practicing them. I'll go and don't want you, the Holy Mother, but don't do this kind of thing that harms others and does not benefit yourself. What happened next was even more disgusting. When he saw the junior sister was about to step into a trap, the protagonist did not warn her, and the junior sister fell into the trap. The protagonist did not save her, but just hid aside and pretended to be cool. When the senior brother came to save the junior sister, she was also injured by the trap. The protagonist finally took action, WHY? What is the significance of this arrangement? Who would have known that one after another would be disgusting, and they would attack the master and the others even though they knew they were thieves, and the protagonist would not remind them. The brothers were beheaded, and the protagonist did not appear. When the master is about to die, the protagonist comes out to show off. ? ! The protagonist is not a guest who has passed through the heavens. You have an identity. You can't just sit back and watch like this without much emotion. I couldn't understand it at first because it was so redundant and disgusting. After thinking about it carefully, I finally realized that the author couldn't make up stories. When the protagonist intervenes in the plot, changing the plot will test the author's imagination. Obviously, the author does not have the ability, so he has to force the plot to develop according to the original plot, so the reader feels awkward and disgusting after reading it.

Seeing that the attribute points are 1 point per pound, and the protagonist has 4 points at the beginning, I feel that my IQ is insulted.

I can't stand seeing the secret book burning. The secret book is not a unique thing like heaven, material and earthly treasures. You are trying to steal other people's opportunities. Why are you burning that thing? Moreover, it is your senior brother's opportunity, and I have no enmity with you...

Nimei, you have to burn a copy of martial arts secret books. As the saying goes, use seven points to be very clever and leave three points to your descendants. Isn't it too selfish of you to do this?

Author, your data is interesting! 1024 points of strength attribute = a thousand pounds of strength. The protagonist has added a bunch of strength attributes to only get 13 points. This is because the protagonist is a blacksmith! Author, stop writing books. Why don't you do something bad? You have to write a book!

It only took about a month for Broken Swordsman to be exterminated. Are you sure you can master your martial arts skills to defeat the flying dragon? ! ! Will you take out Miji and give it to the master and the protagonist to practice, so as to increase your own strength to deal with the upcoming bandits?

There is a problem with the balance of power in the recent chapters. There are so many zombies. The United States does not use heavy weapons when fighting. Light and heavy machine guns are nothing but heavy weapons. The upper echelons of the United States are pissed. It is time to use nuclear bombs in the middle of the zombie outbreak. When zombies cannot reproduce themselves, even if they do not use nuclear bombs and only use cloud bombs or heavy aerial bombs, they can kill them all. The author There may be something wrong with the estimation of modern military power. A 12.7 Mm heavy machine gun bullet can penetrate the heads of five people, and a 40mm bullet can cover fifty square meters. Especially when zombies are swarming, it is too friendly to modern military weapons. Heavy artillery coverage can clear the entire United States of zombies in three months. I suggest the author read professional military books.

I haven't read it yet, but when I read the comments, I wanted to say something. The main character in the original novel is not great because of his sword skills, but because he is great himself. Do you understand? Even if the unburned sword manual is practiced by another person, he may not be able to defeat Feilong. I can't understand how a person who can travel across thousands of worlds can use this kind of rubbish sword manual as a treasure.

Very well written, you have reached your peak! So, stop writing! The screw factory needs talents like you!

After watching it for a while, it was too poisonous. Dragon Elephant Prajna Kung Fu, ten weights and 1000 kilograms of force. The author's original words: Five hundred kilograms of force are so terrifying. The co-author has practiced Jinlun Dharma King for decades, and he is also a boxing champion, Tyson. The protagonist's three weights are only three hundred kilograms. Then add o.1 Second to use the knife. This makes Superman able to fight hundreds of people alone. Then Tyson can't fight a thousand people.

The force value set at the beginning collapsed, and the thirteen-pound protagonist was able to kill a lot of people. Can the thirteen-pound protagonist move a slightly larger watermelon?

The protagonist is a destroyer of cultural treasures, burning/destroying every copy he sees and never passing it on to others. 😓

I have been thinking that reality is already cold enough, and I want to see some truth, goodness and beauty of human nature in novels, so that good people will be rewarded and bad people will die. As a result, most authors directly wrote about the indifference in reality and further developed it.

I didn't understand it thoroughly. The whole discussion forum was about the protagonist's selfishness. ? ? ? Because of a violent wind sword technique? That's right, if a child is illiterate, should he be left to teach him how to read and practice martial arts? Or do you just leave him a secret book without caring about anything? Reading a book really depends on your mood. If you don't burn the secret book, do you plan to carry it with you forever or will you keep the secret book and wait for the child to be killed? Comparing the original plot, the current arrangement can be regarded as the most benevolent and righteous. I don't understand how it can be related to selfishness, harming others and not benefiting oneself. It's really just a hard fight.

It's very well written. I suggest you go to the factory to drill screws.

The most incomprehensible part is the part where the horse thieves attack and kill. The protagonist waits for more than half of the Lianfeng people to be killed before coming out. At this time, the horse thieves suffered few casualties, and they have already broken into the door and obtained a large number of weapons. What is the purpose? Either take action early, or simply wait until everyone is dead. The two groups of thieves and dogs will suffer losses and then catch them all in one fell swoop. It's very smart to do this kind of plot in the second half of the game just to show off.

I didn't use my brain when I was writing. It was all kinds of unreasonable. As an author, don't you think about it when you write? Forced and reasonable?

With added points, there is no comparison in the improvement of strength. After defeating the flying dragon, I gained more than 1,000 attribute points, but there were no additional points later. The author probably forgot

After looking at a few pictures, I knew it was garbage. It was too poisonous.

This author has no common sense at all. What he writes is completely to make him obscene. It is more poisonous than Hedinghong.

The Emperor's Grand Jia Lu Bo Yi Sword ——Longquan Sword

Lu Renjia, I still remember the name of this novel.

The flaws do not hide the flaws, the writing is good, please come back and update it!

After reading Chapter 20, to be honest, the author could still read it after changing it. The strength of 13 pounds is really impressive. Muscle weakness? I can lift six kilograms of water with one finger. My scalp feels numb when I see it

Updated, please give the author a big boost