Everyone Raises Troops: The Battlefield of Ten Thousand Races

The number of officers is too small. A major is only in charge of 26 men. It's not even comparable to a real regiment, is it? You should at least have a company or a battalion. Managing only a few dozen people is too stingy. It would be better to use titles like squad leader or centurion, like in ancient times. That would be more varied in writing and have more names, and it would be much harder to get promoted.

I have a suggestion. I wonder if the author has noticed a problem: all your prize draws seem too deliberate, like they're setting up for the next chapter or two. Frankly, it's unplanned; you're just writing whatever comes to mind. I suggest adding more foreshadowing and avoiding such blatant plot points.

I haven't seen chapter 10 yet, and I don't want to read any more. The protagonist's character is problematic; is he just there to play around with the nuclear bomb? He has his own shield, so what are you afraid of? Why are you such a coward? I've noticed many people say they enjoyed reading it, but I really don't know why. I'm done talking about it.

I didn't want to read any further after the third chapter. Instead of thinking about survival in a new place, the author is thinking about fighting amongst themselves and killing others. It's obviously written by an elementary school student who loves reading novels every day.

After reading chapter 26, I've only seen a few things about your "god-level" arms lottery system that are better than others. Aside from the initial lottery, the later parts are rather weak and don't deserve the title of "god-level" at all. 😥😥😥

Many people, like me, are probably just watching quietly, not commenting if they don't like it, and continuing to watch if they do, or stopping if they don't. 😏

I'm giving the author an advance of 5000 coins to buy instant noodles. So you won't be too hungry to write! 🙂

Just treat those high-ranking commanders and generals like fools. Let the protagonist develop slowly, like the Calabash Brothers rescuing their grandfather. The weapons the protagonist uses are obvious and nobody cares. Those lucky enough to draw ordinary weapons will get them, while the protagonist has a constant stream of all sorts of firearms. Nobody is curious or concerned. Even when word reaches Lord Wu'an, Bai Qi's ears, nobody investigates or cares. It's perfectly reasonable.

Yes, I'm that shameless, hahaha!!

I've given you two monthly passes. The premise is alright, but the writing is poor, there are inconsistencies in the details, and it feels like the author is deliberately making things harder.