The Nine Songs of Heaven in My Eyes

I read several chapters but still didn't understand what was written.

Come on, author (there are so few people😅)

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This. . It's a bit discouraging. I've only read more than thirty chapters, so I'll tell you my own feelings, don't criticize. I'll just say it casually. Although writing a book can be more literary and suspenseful, at least the first few chapters let me understand who I am and what I am going to do, right? Or if you advance some of the explanations in Chapter 4 to Chapter 1, the retention rate will definitely be much better. After reading Chapter 89, I roughly figured out the plot of a character from the Space-Time Administration looking for a wife. It is also recommended to write from a person's perspective when writing. When writing action, don't use the perspective of other characters and then jump to the protagonist. That is, when you write what the protagonist sees or hears, you suddenly switch to other characters to see what the protagonist does. It looks very tiring. It seems quite laborious to switch between the perspectives of Han Fei and the protagonist in the previous few photos, especially because there are too many psychological descriptions, and the psychological descriptions are from Han Fei's perspective, so the switching of these perspectives is very difficult. If that doesn't work, add the subject to the beginning of each paragraph. In addition, strong settings can be superimposed with the plot, such as a strong setting and a section of action, rather than long descriptions of settings. Especially in Chapter 5 and later, there are really too many settings explained by the protagonist. There is also a sense of perspective in writing. Well, you've played the game, right? Normal novels are either in first person or third person. This novel has a sense of God's perspective. I don't know why I will study it later. But the sense of substitution is very weak when written this way. Because I also write novels, I didn't realize it until I wrote it for a while. Most literary creations are purposeful, and plot conflicts and foreshadowing are deliberately designed. That is to say, if you want to write a paragraph of text, you must first understand the purpose of the paragraph. It may be to relax the rhythm between daily battles, or it may be simply funny to increase the sense of humor and improve reader retention rate, or it may bring out a certain personality of the character, or it may advance the plot, or setting. It means that once the words are written down, the readers must understand something. Since I haven't read the back part of this novel, I'll just talk about the front part. The long paragraphs of text are completely ineffective. It just feels like writing wherever you think. It's a very literary feeling of water and water. I don't know where to complain at all. I have some writing skills, but I feel like I haven't read a lot of things. Speaking of running accounts, it doesn't seem to count. That's fine. . . Water In the final analysis, reading is either for learning knowledge or for entertainment. The starting point is definitely entertainment-oriented. Work and study are already very tiring, but reading a novel makes it even more tiring. . . . Of course, if you write casually for your own entertainment, just pretend I didn't say anything.

Well, the author worked really hard and I admire him a lot, but I really can't understand it...

Author, how do you persist?

I was persuaded to quit after the first few chapters and deleted them. The first few chapters were uninteresting and uncomfortable to read.

... One million words, no contract, still a fan. The author is great ~

It's clearly driven by love, so it's all about the author's own world. I hope you can meet readers who can resonate with it.

Haha, this introduction, at first glance, it seems that there is a psychological problem

Yours is suitable for general history. When I write a book, I can copy some of yours.