Rebuilding the Prosperous Tang Dynasty Starts with Calling Players

The poison has been tested. Hope everyone is well. The protagonist is too mentally retarded and has broken my three thousand years of cultivation.

When writing history, we must respect historical culture and social reality, and when writing games, we must transcend background and science. But the history you wrote is so rubbish and completely deviates from the era, background, identity, people's hearts, and human nature. You have ruined all the interesting points of historical novels. Besides, when you write a game, according to your settings, you can get 200 points per month. You only need one point for each attribute. If you add all of them to yourself, you will be invincible in just two months. Do you need players? So does the author want to write this book as a professional negative teaching material?

It is the system that summons the players, and it is the players who study what they are doing. When something happens, they have to ask the players for advice. What is the use of having a protagonist? Taizong's style, Taizong's ghost style, there are many talents in the Sui and Tang Dynasties, Taizong's proper t0 protagonist is really worth mentioning! Sorry for not being able to subscribe!

What's okay is that when written in the later stage, it means that a large number of players travel to this time and space, discover wormholes in the Tang Dynasty plane, realize the linkage between reality and the Tang Dynasty plane, and then join hands to move towards the interstellar world.

After reading this, I remembered a joke I had seen before When I was a child, I thought Yue Fei was very naughty, but later I found out that he was beating my ancestors Watching Li Shi of the Northern and Southern Dynasties, I cursed Xianbei, and then found out that I was a Xianbei who entered the Han Dynasty I used to watch TV dramas and felt that being exiled to Lingnan was very pitiful. When I grew up, Only then did I realize that I have been living in Lingnan My dad's family is Manchu, and my mom even said they were descendants of Zhu Yuanzhang. It was actually a decision made against the ancestors I used to think that our place was Jiangnan, and I felt happy, but later I found out that it was me who was the Nanman 🐶🐶🐶

The latest chapters are too serious.

The number of words in your chapter is too low, I'm unhappy 🔨

I voted for a monthly vote because I read what the author said and listened to the live version of "Yumen Pass" by the Rainbow Chamber Choir I voted for a recommendation because it's not a golden finger and the writing is pretty good. I haven't read the whole book, so here are some suggestions: 1. Contribute to exchange attribute points. It is best if the required contribution is multiplied exponentially. Otherwise, if you exchange 20 points for 1 point, you will be a superman immediately. 2. Although history is distorted, a very important point is that when distorting history, there is no sense of substitution of historical events. The depiction of wars, conspiracies, and people's love and hatred in them is somewhat lacking. So when I read chapters 200-300, it felt like I was reading a narrative, which didn't inspire emotions. Whether it's the hateful razor blade that makes people hate it, or it's sighing while caressing one's hands, or it's a story that makes people laugh when they see something wonderful, there's always a good story that can arouse people's emotions. Come on! Very well written! It's a bit boring later, so I'll wait and see again! 🤭🤭🤭

Is it Wang Chengwei or Wang Dawei?

Randomly written thoughts after reading [Chapter 1] ◎Motivation for reading the article I lamented to a friend that there are no good novels recently, and he shared his book list, and I saw this book in it. The title really attracted me, because history + game themes are my favorites. I tried reading the beginning, and I should be able to write about this theme with good writing skills. My friend also said that I can wrap up the whole text in the end, so let's read it. ◎Theme selection The identity of the protagonist is Li Tan, King of Jianning, which is rare. Before opening this book, the only thing I knew about Li Tan was that he was given death by Emperor Suzong Li Heng. This understanding is all based on the fictional martial arts force "Nine Heavens" in the game "Jian Wang III", among which there is a "Jun Tianjun" Li Tan (players' nickname is "Mr. Dan"). In the early plot, there are both good and evil, but in the later plot, Shenyin was inexplicably planned and abandoned. At that time, I looked up the historical prototype out of curiosity. After that, there was no opportunity to get to know this character. I have to say that when I see this name again after so many years, I still feel a little familiar. In addition to the freshness of the characters, the choice of dynasties is also fresh. In recent years, the hot spots of time-travel historical literature have changed from the Three Kingdoms, the Republic of China, the late Qing Dynasty, the Ming Dynasty, and the Song Dynasty. The above five periods are all popular, and other periods are rare. The advantage of writing about popular periods is that the popularity is stable, the information is easy to find, and there are many people copying from each other. The disadvantage is that the routines are rigid, especially the imperial examination plot of Ming Chuanwen, almost everyone caught Zhang Juzheng's Cheng Wen copying, and there are always only a few questions. Although I know that the total amount of information in this area is very limited, it is difficult not to feel sleepy. It is difficult to check the information when writing about unpopular periods, and you have to think of the routines yourself. The overall writing difficulty will be relatively high, but as a reader, you still want to see this kind of new stuff, and you can tolerate it even if there are bugs in it. ◎Opening Arrangement The first chapter is the beginning of the whole novel, which is equivalent to the sign of the store and the face of the actor. It can be said that readers will basically read this chapter if they want to stay. Personally, I feel that the style of the first chapter is very obvious. It can be seen that the author's language style is straightforward, and what should be said can be explained clearly and without being cumbersome. This kind of explanation-like writing style is quite suitable for a novel that mainly focuses on game systems. But the shortcomings are also very obvious, that is, it is not vivid, and the protagonist lacks "humanity", as if an operator is assigned to the system, and he is destined to be a tool man. What is "human touch"? Sensibility, desire, contradiction, impulse, etc. Are all human touch. For example, after the protagonist first arrives in this world and knows the current situation, he comes out of sadness too quickly, which is not very human. This kind of impersonal description makes the protagonist appear impeccable but loses his charm. The protagonists of some novels begin to covet the beauty of the little girl as soon as they travel through time, or desire to get rich instantly. Although such plots seem very lowbrow, they are still a way to humanize them and make the characters come alive. If you want to write something more advanced, there are examples. There are people who secretly build graves for their original bodies, and there are people who kowtow to heaven and earth to express their determination. Of course, the above assumptions are just assumptions. In the final analysis, the author still needs to be comfortable writing and not lose control of the work. This is the basis for completing the book. Only consider whether to make some polishing when the outline is not lost. ◎Revisions to history The author modified the cause of death of Li Tan, King of Jianning, and advanced the time of death. Li Heng's death was changed to murder by the prince, which should be to give the protagonist a relatively ideal start. If he is stabbed to death by the emperor, he can only be resurrected anonymously, making it difficult to effectively take advantage of his status as a prince. The confrontation with the prince makes the protagonist naturally have to seize the throne as his ultimate goal. The beginning actually determines the direction of the entire article. The protagonist's strategy must be to use the prince's status to separate one party and then force the palace to take power. ◎Selection of Summons Choosing summons as a player is a relatively natural choice under the conditions given in the article. Although it is not the only choice, nor is it necessarily the best choice, it is the most psychologically safe option for the protagonist. As the saying goes, it is better to be experienced than to be a stranger. Only by understanding the other party can we cooperate. However, if this selection process is skipped and the system directly tells the protagonist that only players can be summoned, it will not affect the subsequent logic. So this paragraph is indeed a bit redundant.

I really can't figure out why you want to summon players? What kind of combat effectiveness do the souls of ordinary earthlings have when they go to the battlefield? Didn't the system say that all characters can be summoned, but you just summoned the player? It's good if you summon a character from a martial arts plot with some fighting power, at least to protect your own life. And like a book friend said, when you summon players, there will always be some players who like to explore freely, and there will always be some players who like to be the protagonist and run around the world. What if it puts your plan in danger? Moreover, the system does not say whether summoning other characters will be loyal or effective for you? That is, a simple summons. I personally don't think this book is interesting to read. The system can clearly summon all characters, but first of all, there is no rating of strength, nor does it explain whether the summons are loyal to the protagonist and how efficient they are. And I feel that the key is to be able to summon other characters. Those who are powerful and have their own training system are better. But you summon players. You summon players. Players have no strength and no training system. You have to spend your own luck points to help them improve their strength. Isn't this thankless?

Author, why do you think the so-called soldiers in feudal society are very strong? ? ? To put it bluntly, for thousands of years, except for a few armies like Yue Fei, most feudal armies were essentially generals + soldiers driving so-called "soldiers" to fight. A very vivid adjective for this kind of army is that it has extremely poor tolerance for casualty rates and is a typical disposable army. And not to mention tactical training, even if you have a non-commissioned officer or above in the modern army of No. 100, You can easily raise an army of 1,000. In less than two months of training, the combat effectiveness can basically surpass Longyou.

The operation officer needs 500 contribution points. How to do it? It's my first time and I don't understand. Ahem, I took a look at the strategy. 100 Points will be given for improving the post, contribution points will be given for liking and being liked, and comments and being commented will also be given. Author, you know. .

Tang Longyou Map

How to increase the growth vitality of young grass? I heard that Idiom Solitaire is a good choice. Anyone who is interested can come and have fun together, let me start it. . . . . . The future is promising.

The setting is interesting, but the author writes rubbish

Summoning players at the beginning is poisonous. If you are the protagonist and you are attacked, you will be alone. Without a base, it will be very dangerous. Now you have the opportunity to summon a hundred elite soldiers and 80 earth players (the dead cannot be resurrected). Which one will you choose? I will be afraid of players summoning me. The first one to kill is the protagonist, because in the eyes of players, you are an NPC and have no loyalty. Instead, the probability of trying to attack the NPC first is very high, and players on the earth cannot be resurrected. Do you think you will be more effective than elite soldiers? Anyone with a brain knows how to choose.

The start is toxic. The biggest advantage of a player is not to die and to be brave. The author simply scrapped it. It's not as good as summoning other counselors and generals from all over the world who are powerful and powerful. The people summoned at random are ordinary people. Even if it is a top student in history, are you sure that the history you learn must be the same as the real history? P is useless.

The main character of the author of Good Guys is Li Yan. Why not just time travel to Wuzong in the late Tang Dynasty? Although the name Li Yan was changed when he was about to die, he still passed down history with this name. He was previously called Li Yan.

I finally understand why such a good subject matter is not popular. Your writing is too boring.

It's a little brainless. Isn't it good to summon regular troops at the beginning? Summoning a bunch of modern people who don't know how to kill people is poisonous.

On the fourth day, isn't the focus of the disaster all about the players' sandcasting operations? At the beginning, you don't write more about sandcasting players, and you don't even have a basic link to give nicknames. You write some sandcasting online names, which are not only interesting, but also fair and honest. As a result, in a group of players, there is only one named Cui Tao to focus on, and the rest use player names... What are you doing? I'm afraid the author's real name is Cui Tao.

Failure to revive the fourth natural disaster is equivalent to the tiger pulling out its teeth

It's so addictive that I didn't even read the first three chapters. Those who praised it must have bought it. First, the death penalty for players is so heavy, and they are still soldiers. So which player is willing to work hard to upgrade and save a set of equipment and then die at your command just because you ordered a war? Have you ever played games? The second is that the protagonist didn't introduce anything, just said that he was middle-aged and unemployed, and then disappeared, and then the system came inexplicably? To be honest, stop writing books, and don't look for brushes to get good reviews. Go home and raise pigs

The pictures are good, but you have to eliminate the summoning system. Your system settings are really redundant. Summoning players is not cost-effective at all. Besides, emperors, generals and ministers are not as good at cultivating immortals. You can summon a golden elixir to kill whoever you want, and you can also become an immortal and become an emperor... So the author's system is really redundant. It is better to set up summoning players directly instead of messing with Pangu...

I can't stand it after reading a few chapters. Do you really think that the player will be a tool? People just want to have fun. The basis of the Fourth Natural Disaster is infinite resurrection + having fun. It's okay for you to ask players to invent and create or divide and govern. But is it crazy to accompany you to fight wars and cultivate talents for you to play the role of noble and humble?

Not to mention anything else, just one point, the protagonist has no opinion at all, and is basically dragged away by the player. Whatever the player says, what role does your protagonist have? Players help make decisions at critical moments, and the protagonist seems to be incompetent in literature and martial arts. It is really low. If you can't write it down, you can refer to the one on the list. Although the people in the future are no longer on the battlefield, their strength and prestige have always suppressed the players.

I don't understand why we need to summon players. Summoning 100 soldiers at 100 points at the beginning is better than modern fat house.

After reading a few chapters, I really couldn't stand it. When I was writing it, I finally finished the outline and gave it a summons from the heavens. Good guy, you still have so many restrictions and so many worlds when you summon players. . . . And you think the mental quality of modern people is too high, face covering

This book died suddenly, and half of the credit was due to the operation. He always thinks others are stupid and then bans them. Do you have any understanding to discuss? I also paid a lot of money for my large account, and it's not just a brush in your mouth. If the author doesn't want to ruin his popularity, he should change his management to a rational and reasonable one.