I Don't Rely on Mastery of Panels to Become a Martial Saint

Goldfinger is about familiarity, so you have to write steadily. If you have written fantasy, you can write fairy tales, fantasy, history, light novels, and science fiction. You can write anything.

A few more words per chapter and a few more updated chapters are not enough.

The descriptions in Goldfinger should be a little more detailed, the world of the novel should be a little richer, and it should also leave us with some reveries. The writing should have a solid foundation, so that it can become a god. It may not be popular now, but gold will always shine. No fast food articles. Nowadays, many of them are fast-food articles, written slowly and not in a hurry. Although there are panels and upgrades, the content of the novel should not turn into upgrading and defeating monsters.

When will I write a historical text about the Three Kingdoms based on the familiarity data flow? I haven't seen anyone write it.

The pace needs to be sped up. After all, it's not like writing a diary without being so detailed, and I don't know if this book will survive to the end 🤔

I have a few comments about the big benchmark The first one: The overall feeling is quite verbose, you can read it by yourself. In fact, some content also needs to be written in very detail, which leads to too much content in one paragraph and I don't want to read it. The second one: The skill displayed by the cheat finger feels like there are more words. One is the attribute data, because the cheat finger is a reminder of skill proficiency and cannot add points. It is best to only display the skills, and the later data of attribute points is also needed. There is no need to spend time compiling and brainstorming. Another thing is that there is no need to write out the skill description. It is better to just write the skill name + level + proficiency, such as: Breathing: Lv2 (56/100) Literature: Lv1 (23/100) That's about it. These are my opinions after comparing other well-written proficiency Goldfinger novels. The author can take it himself.

The shield skill integrates offense and defense. When used well, it seems to be no worse than other weapons. There are flying knives to make up for the lack of mid-range strikes and bursts. I feel that there is a lack of movement skills. If the enemy encounters this type and is dragged down, it is hard, dodges, and explodes. It must be a headache, and the ability to save life after losing is excellent. I just don't know the specific settings of the skills after becoming a warrior. If there is a type that causes continuous bleeding or poison, it will be a beautiful picture when combined with it 😏

I am short of wits, do you have any skills that you think are practical (exercise requires single-minded concentration), and imagine the effects of intermediate, advanced, master and entry level skills, thank you very much🙏

The tempo should be slow, but the text should not be watery. Two to three thousand chapters is best.

It also needs a better storyline.

Completed. What am I missing?