Star Catcher: Rule the Galaxy

This book is novel and creative in terms of its opening idea. It tells an ordinary person who acquires advanced civilization and technology and makes a fortune leading the interstellar era of stars and seas. I think the cornerstone of the whole story should be that with the help of Basha, he gradually built a technological empire of his own, dominating one small circle after another, leading an industry to leading an industry, leading a field to leading the development of the entire planet. Then support Basha and lead the Ditu civilization back to its former glory. Although the middle span is very large, the technical hard knowledge is high, and it is difficult to write, it is still very exciting. Moreover, the description of specific technological aspects is not based entirely on imagination, but is based on thinking based on reality.        ，，， As far as my personal reading experience is concerned, the writing is smooth but a little pale, and it feels like a plain narration of a story that has already happened. When narrating the protagonist's understanding of the world at the beginning, the real sense of vicissitudes of life helps the reader to get involved with the protagonist of the story. However, just writing about principles without the protagonist's specific experience will give people a sense of preaching. The vicissitudes of life represent stories, the process of realizing the truth and the help it will have on one's later life. It is also refreshing to see a young man who is supposed to be ignorant but use his experience to overcome invisible obstacles. However, I personally feel that the old man failed to handle it well.        ， I have been tricked many times just a little bit. If I give you an example of how being tricked turned into a setback and trouble, and created the sloppy and jobless situation of the protagonist now, it will be easier to have a sense of empathy. Then, when it comes to selecting the location of the toy factory, recruiting employees, introducing talents, etc., When negotiating with leaders or seeking cooperation, the procedures are not explained clearly. After all, not every reader has such an experience. Just relying on the undercurrents under various polite manners will make everything clear. I believe that many readers cannot do this and are confused. Then there are the characters. As the protagonist of the book who needs to be brought in, he was not that likable in my reading experience. It is true that an adult in his thirties has a big house, a mobility scooter worth nearly one million, and several million in savings. This cannot be said to be a failure, and the two sisters have connections and can borrow the start-up funds for starting the factory. The family conditions are definitely not bad. From the beginning, I was disappointed with life and just wanted my wife and children to be on the hot bed. After I got an adventure, I was still not too excited. Then I inherited the goal of becoming a big company and becoming a Fortune 500 company after inheriting civilization. From the beginning to the end, I couldn't feel the charm of the protagonist. Part of the start-up capital for the factory was borrowed from my sisters. The location of the factory was selected based on my sisters' connections and the help of my blind date's sister. Then there was the entanglement between the two girls Nangong Caiyue and Ning Xiyu. There is no problem with the logic and it is very close to reality. But from the beginning to the end, I felt that the male protagonist was alone and had no pressure to survive. He was supported by a pair of hands all the way. The smooth sailing was a bit boring and gave people the illusion of being a bit weak and soulless. Learning new knowledge and strengthening one's body does not seem to require any perseverance from the male protagonist, as long as he can finish it comfortably in his dream. The entanglement between the two women is also muddled. It's hard to comment on the emotional line, but it's really not to my taste. Nangong Caiyue has used others as a shield from the beginning. The male protagonist is not handsome, and their daily interactions are only comfortable. However, she felt that she liked him just by taking care of him when he was sick. Given Nangong Caiyue's conditions, it was not possible. Ning Xiyu's image is too little described as she only loves children. I don't make any comments either. What if she was the heroine? I would be uncomfortable. It can be seen that the old man has many ideas of his own, and I personally am optimistic about those ideas. However, the old man tried to learn from earlier cool novel routines, such as the multi-beautiful reverse style (I feel that this trend is developing), the naming and setting of characters (the beautiful Nangong sisters), and the adventurous adventure of going abroad to fight with force (the current plot). On the one hand, it writes realistic truths, and on the other hand, it writes cool writing routines that are far from real life. The contrast in the middle will bring a great sense of dissonance to readers. I think the characterization of the male protagonist also needs to be strengthened a lot, such as the portrayal of personal abilities (regardless of management, learning, etc.), Which can also be regarded as an explanation of the country he has built (a big house, a mobility scooter worth nearly one million, and several million in savings). There is also the sincerity of the male protagonist in dealing with others. He is simple and silly, but it is not enough. Moreover, the male protagonist gave me a tendency to develop in the direction of a scumbag, which would be contrary to the character image of simple, traditional and silly sincerity.        ， But my personal feeling is that it is not a masterpiece. The old man must continue to work hard! Come on!

The opening chapter uses the perspective of the protagonist to reflect what most ordinary people have experienced in contemporary times. It is not only the life of the protagonist in the book, but also reflects the real-life experiences of the author and most people in today's society. Unwilling to be mediocre but still far away from success and fame, after being tempered by life, a "surprise" comes from the sky, starting an extraordinary life. The opening chapter shows readers the beauty of the six-level imperial civilization and also reflects the heroism of the war. It is precisely because of the power of scientific and technological civilization that the war is particularly heroic, and a civilization falls. There is a foreshadowing at the beginning - the golden cicada pendant hanging around the protagonist's neck echoes the golden tree and the golden egg. If this pendant is the protagonist's birthright, can it be understood that the protagonist is actually the reincarnation of the golden egg? 😂 It is also good that the world's elimination law is survival of the fittest. If interests come first as mentioned in the chapter review, it would be the same as the beautiful country. Then there would be no lower civilizations, and there would be no classification of civilizations. The choice of a toy factory for starting a business is also very logical. If we really start to engage in military, medical, and high-tech industries all at once, let alone other countries coveting it, the protagonist may be arrested and dissected first. Then it is quite realistic to be crazily urged to get married, and I feel deeply about this. The protagonist's connections and opportunities are very good. Otherwise, even if an ordinary person has special skills, his pearls will be in the dust. The portrayal of the character Nangong Caiyue in the article is actually very classic. However, I am not very fond of the description of opposite-sex characters in career articles, so I will not comment too much. The description of this part of the content has been written by the id of Paradise Spokesperson, so I will not go into details. As for the manufacturing of bionic robots, I still think that 18 robots in one night are quite eye-catching. A company that is just on the right track has the ability to manufacture 18 bionic robots in one night. As mentioned below, some of the robots are actually used to serve as foreign masters, but the pitfalls of immigration and identity issues are still not filled. Fortunately, as an ordinary toy factory in a high-tech zone, there are no such strict restrictions on the identity of foreigners at the national level. Zhou Yuqing, the female district chief of Xingao District, is a very powerful person. From the detailed description in the article, it can be seen that she has keen senses and is good at discovering things that others cannot observe. For example, the two warrior mechas created by Liu Xu appear to ordinary people as just toy mechas with large sizes, but Zhou Yuqing found that they have a certain degree of oppression. It also reflects that these two mechas are combat-type mechas, which strengthens the portrayal of Zhou Yuqing's strong female image. Regarding the formulas of mother bacteria and incandescent iron porcelain, I think the protagonist can consider cooperating with the official (the live broadcast has already reflected this aspect, but I write book reviews one by one slowly, so I will repeat some of the things that the old man has already written). Of course, it is not easy for ordinary people to cooperate with the official, but according to the development trend of the factory, this aspect can be considered. In addition, even the robots are in pairs. Old man, how can you make the protagonist and us singles so embarrassed? In terms of product sales, the old man also has a good way of Internet live streaming + products + activities. As expected, he often patronizes Ms. Douyin, and he knows a lot of tricks👍. From the live broadcast toy robot sales to the application of combat robots (mechas) in actual combat, it actually feels a bit like a battle between a sixth-level civilized empire and that race (I forgot the name and it has a Mongolian character, and I am too lazy to turn it back). From the personal feelings at the beginning of building a toy factory (reviving civilization is actually too far for the current protagonist), to the technological problems of a powerful country caused by a pair of warrior mechas, the pattern has become larger, and the whole book has become more serious. I feel that Liu Xu's official partner is Nangong Caiyue. After all, the word love rival is used, and Ning Xiyu can only be Bai Yueguang. [Successfully Guessed Wrong] In the later stage of development, it feels like war is inevitable. After all, the foreshadowing of war has been laid in many places. The character of Lu Xiangyue in Chapter 24 is actually very strong. When he joins the protagonist's toy factory as the general manager, he is just a worker, but he wants the development of the entire company to be centered on him. The strength of the character is fully reflected, and it seems quite annoying at the moment. The three demands he made are unreasonable and arrogant, and he talks about business with the protagonist completely as a founder. The protagonist is also a person who is good at thinking and discovering business opportunities. From the common incident of tire blowout, we can associate it with the high-quality tire industry. I am really worried that the protagonist will have companies all over the country in the future. He has 360 companies and is famous in the industry. The detailed description of the industry is also very professional and well-founded. From the chemical material production process of toy factories to the principles of tire grade raw material production, I would not be able to write such a professional article without consulting the information. Overseas is very chaotic, and black people are indeed😅. The content of the following updates mainly revolves around Tongtong's illness, love, hatred and the war between black people. I am not very interested in this aspect, so I will not comment on it. 29-32 Although there are many emotional scenes in these photos, they are also interspersed with the drug situation and racial characteristics. The main line is Tongtong's leukemia treatment, which draws out the conflict between Ning Xiyu and Chen Scumbag. The only adapter in Syria is in a war situation and is about to leave for the war. In the chaotic country of Syria, the emergence of a mercenary team, but the high-ranking mercenary group did not accept the mission to the country of Syria. Does it reflect the danger of the country of Syria? The image of the leader of the Mongolian beast appeared. Can it be thought of what accidents will happen on the way to the country of Syria to find a match? Using the cruelty of war to test human nature in the purgatory on earth is very realistic. Although the domestic situation is generally peaceful, our neighboring countries are indeed in constant war. War has displaced people, and evil is everywhere. In addition to the evil side of human nature, it also depicts the kindness and perseverance of human nature, especially the little girl who protects her younger brother. It is simply tearful. The whole book analyzes human nature incisively and vividly. Although the protagonist has been hurt by the evil of human nature, he also realizes the goodness of human nature. Therefore, I think the main plot is the new opportunity opened by the protagonist's founding of a toy factory after obtaining the status of the heir of the sixth-level civilized empire. It can be thought of that war is inevitable. The essence of civilization development is survival of the fittest. War will definitely break out in the later period. In the early days of the factory, there were already very powerful robots. The development of mecha skills in the later stages of the war also makes people's imaginations expand. And the title of the book is "Star Catching: Starting from the Super Toy Factory" which also reflects that the toy factory is just the beginning, and the ultimate goal is to catch stars. It is boldly speculated that this "star" is an existence beyond the seventh-level civilization, so this novel written by the old man is a slow-burning type, and there will definitely be surprises later. As for the love line, this is too difficult for me as a single person. I made a bold guess last night and found that none of the lines were correct, so I gave up research. But Tongtong has already called Liu Xu daddy, so I would make a bold guess that the official match should still be Bai Yueguang. [Guessed wrong again] Sure enough, I am not suitable for analyzing love lines! {"TopicId":"737359998497128448","TopicName":"Silver rewards from the Tianjin Group for recommending books"}{"TopicId":"73832929881292800 0","TopicName":"Star Catching Starts from the Super Toy Factory"}{"TopicId":"733686575023718400","TopicName":"Contemporary Youth Reading Illustrated Book"}

Highlights: ① An advanced and civilized technological toy factory with a modern background, combining reality and virtuality. The post-production content is well written, and publishing is not a problem. It may also affect mankind's new thinking about the future; ② The topic is novel, the imagination is very big, and it is not too divorced from reality; ③ As for toy raw materials, it is not said that it is all based on imagination. The raw materials and chemical elements of existing materials in reality will not be made up randomly. It can be seen that the author has carefully consulted the relevant information. Personal suggestions: ① Advanced technology with modern background, first of all, advanced civilization is displayed in front of the protagonist in the form of virtual projection (my personal understanding). The dialogue between the protagonist and the steward of the advanced civilization in the book should be a language system dialogue. I feel that in addition to communicating through the human language system, it is best to communicate through brain waves and consciousness, because even if this kind of advanced civilization can use the Chinese language system, every time the protagonist communicates with the steward, he must find a secluded place with no one, and the later content description will be more restrictive. ② The whole text is based on the toy factory, and it is understandable that there is an emotional line. After all, the protagonist's original life plan is not to be rich, but just have a wife and children on the bed, so there must be an emotional line, but I hope not to pay too much attention to the description of the emotional line. In the first ten chapters of the article, the emotional line content accounts for half, there are 5 beauties and only one male character (not counting the housekeeper). Looking at the trend, there is a tendency to have a harem, which will lose most female readers. ③ This book is not a story about a full-level boss at the beginning. It is a growth-oriented protagonist. The descriptions of machines, technology, chemistry, etc. Also reflect professionalism. It attracts readers mainly who are interested in technology, military, and science fiction. Therefore, the routine of a counterattack novel full of beauties is really inappropriate (I may have said it a bit harshly, no offense intended). The protagonist's network resources are currently obtained through female characters😂. In Chapter 8, the protagonist learns about blazing iron porcelain. He was very enthusiastic about it, but suddenly he got emotional, which is a bit disappointing (maybe I am a career fan) ④ In Chapter 3, the butler said that he will provide advanced technology manufacturing equipment and advanced civilization technology and technical support. Although the protagonist has learned the corresponding knowledge I also have manufacturing equipment, but two bionic robots in half an hour are a bit hasty. I think there may be a few defective or defective products in the first production attempt (of course, the finished robot produced by the protagonist is a piece of cake for advanced civilization technology). ⑤Techniques can be learned in a dream, but physical training has to be learned offline. What you learn in a dream is really empty. The body has not been exercised, just like other science fiction novels I have seen before. Mental power is 3s, physical fitness is useless, and the kind that will collapse when the wind blows.

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After reading it, it's so hard to write a review😂

The ideas expressed in the article are very clear and the thinking ability is strong. It is worth reading slowly.

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Quite a novel idea, looking forward to it 👍

😳 I've probably read a few, and it's pretty good. I'll update it soon.

The old man stays up in the middle of the night every day to write a book, and you still urge him every day. Leave the old man a way to survive.

It looks good, I hope it can be updated more often

300,000 Words can bring glory to Samsung. After reading the first 30 chapters, I can only say that there are many rich people in the author's circle of friends.

I hope the protagonist and Ning Xiyu are together. If they are not together, it means that the protagonist is not sincere to Ning Xiyu. What the protagonist does for her becomes a joke. Since you don't like her, why do you want her to be your assistant? Wouldn't you be upset when you see her? This is the typical eating from the bowl and looking at the pot. Nangong Caiyue did not misunderstand that she was a ghost.

Such incredible basic materials cannot be preserved without absolute strength. You must know that what flower growers lack is not high technology but basic materials. To give a simple example, the lifespan of the Raptor and the Veyron are 6800:3800. What is the difference? It's the material! So once a divine object like Chitian Porcelain is born, it will inevitably be stared at by countless pairs of blood-red eyes. It depends on how the old man deals with all kinds of monsters.

Although it has just started, it looks very strange. I originally thought it was a science fiction article when I came in and read it for a long time, but there was no trace of science fiction at all. Although it doesn't feel like it's being sent directly by the system, it's no different from sending it directly. It's just a matter of learning. And there is a little more space to write about love. It doesn't matter if you write about love. After all, even military themes now include love, but when you write about love, it feels like Boss Cao. You are talking about a girlfriend here, and you are still thinking about a wife. Is this a positive energy? Don't wait until the aliens have exported the protagonist, fell in love, and intrigued with the guys on the earth. If you are writing about space, can you have a broader vision? Don't let the protagonist rely on a defeated alien civilization to develop. The enemy has devoured the entire alien civilization and is still standing still. I won't say anything else. I was speechless after looking at the first few dozen pictures (personal opinions are for reference only)

The storyline of this book is quite well designed, and the development trend is also very exciting. It is the kind of book that you will find boring if you read it casually, or even feel that you don't know what you are reading, but it will be completely different if you keep reading. . . (My personal feeling after watching it, don't criticize if you don't like it) The character substitution is also just right. The faces of giants from various countries, the intrigues of business giants from all sides, etc., Make the protagonist, a rookie who has just started to upgrade, play a very good supporting role in absorbing upgrade experience. In terms of emotions, this one is a bit messy. I guess it has something to do with someone's dream or something. I won't comment on this. After all, it is a novel world and does not represent reality. I just hope that the protagonist can sort out his emotional thinking in the future, so that people will not feel confused after reading it. Another small comment I would like to mention: every time the scene changes, there is always a very sudden and forced jump, which makes people feel unsmooth. Also, when changing chapters, the ending and beginning are not rounded, and the storyline continues. The continuation makes people feel like they can't keep up with the rhythm. I hope the author can optimize this aspect My cultural level is limited, so it's no wonder if I complain poorly. 😁 It's just my personal opinion after reading it. I don't welcome trolls. Thank you for your cooperation. Finally: I wish this book will get better as it gets written, have more and more readers, and become a hit! ! !

It was actually set up to cost 100 starting coins to comment and post. I stopped my finger in front of the phone screen when I wanted to type and complain. Suddenly, it was impossible to read some interesting comments. It was just a way to screen readers. I offered a reward of 100 coins for leaving a comment, but it was withdrawn.

It was quite enjoyable to read at the beginning, with just one or two hundred words. The protagonist is not very fond of today's society. He is helpless in the declining world but does not want to join in the bad things. He is not successful but has the capital to live well. The image of a contented and happy person who lives alone is vividly written on the paper. But the background setting that followed for nearly a chapter and a half actually somewhat destroyed the attractive coherence of the overall reading. At first, I asked the protagonist to sign a contract, which felt a little wrong: First: the contract must be protected by strength. How can we ensure that the protagonist can abide by it after he becomes stronger and surpasses it? Second: Why not cast a wider net and just select one protagonist to train? After all, today's supercomputers can run in N threads at the same time. With the technology of level 6 civilization, it can definitely cast a wide net for N pairs at the same time. Thirdly, the commander's last order is to find a predestined natural intelligent life to inherit the inheritance of the empire's civilization. The word "fate" makes me feel that something is wrong (do alien civilizations in the outer universe still talk about fate?) I can't help but think about it. For example, after the extraterrestrial civilization came to this universe, it was targeted by the Gaia consciousness of the universe and had no fertility. As a result, all of them died now, and they had to find someone to inherit the civilization. The contract I mentioned above, and the fact that only one protagonist is cultivated, can actually be explained in the author's setting: It directly let the commander finally realize that Gaia's consciousness does not recognize outsiders and wants to destroy them. One of the 50 Great Dao and 49 Tianyan escapes, leaving the outsider with the last chance: find someone with a level 1 civilization in this universe to invest. If the investment is successful, there will finally be a chance to restore the alien civilization, but it is not allowed to operate too much at the same time, so with the contract, there is only one investment in the protagonist. In addition, without the protagonist's order, the alien intelligent machine cannot even actively mine energy for development (if it develops, it will be destroyed by the universe). Why did one of the 50 Tianyan 49 people escape in the end? Is science fiction related to fairy tales or fantasy? Because I think the author has laid the groundwork: the towering giant tree (World Tree), the level 6 beast civilization that destroyed the alien civilization, is just a servant civilization of a certain civilization, and laid the groundwork for the opposite belief in the Shinto system (I don't know when it will be filled in), and then escaped to this universe and was targeted by Gaia's consciousness, which also hints at the existence of the mysterious system. I'm really looking forward to seeing how the author arranges it. I personally feel that it's not easy to arrange. The article has already given examples of DJI's toy airplanes, which need to be supported by core technologies to become big and strong. To be a toy company, if you want to be a Fortune 500 company within five years, you must have a complete set of core technologies. I don't know how the author will arrange it. I'm looking forward to it. Speaking of expectations, I actually feel that writing about a super toy company, there is another point, the large industrial chain supporting facilities must involve a lot of realistic descriptions, and judging from the foreshadowing of blind dates and the iceberg beauty downstairs, it is estimated that there will be a lot of urban writing. Reality is difficult to write, so you can't write too much. I don't know whether the author will focus on science fiction and write about the protagonist developing on the Blue Star, and then the Blue Star will engage in interstellar trade and interaction with the local alien civilization, or the protagonist will just jump out alone to open a dungeon? What will be the first toy? Smart robot toys? I think it's good to write this. The existing chip processors can actually make good ones. In the initial development stage, just assembly and hardware can actually make good intelligent robots. If coupled with the alien civilization AI black technology program, the robots can be endowed with low-level AI and be invincible. In the future, they can also enter industrial applications or military applications. This is purely a personal opinion, don't take it too seriously.

Sit back and wait for the eunuch🤭

I don't know how to put it, but the character creation of Ning Xiyu is really a failure... You can create such a female character in the novel who is cheated of money and sex by a scumbag, but don't hook up with the male protagonist, because this kind of female character gives readers a very bad impression. She is extremely irresponsible for her own life. She gave birth to a child before marriage, gave birth to a child for Neptune, and then was abandoned. The result is still the same. The heroine's goddess is really speechless and feels like she ate shit. If Ning Xiyu's background was rewritten, it would be a normal marriage and children, and then her husband died in a car accident or her business failed and she was owed a lot of debt and committed suicide by jumping off a building. It would be 10,000 times better than this image of being defrauded of money and sex by a scumbag... 🤫🤫🤫🤫

This kind of person is the most annoying. Please tell me, eunuch. Grass

What kind of master is this? Has the previous book been taken off the shelves?

I've read Chapter 35, and I feel like there are more and more fucked up places. While talking about the protagonist being hurt by love, being hurt by friends, not daring to touch his feelings, etc., He is having a good time among several women. Not only that, he is very indecisive on some things. And, to be honest, I really don't see the use of a trip to Syria. Reveal the fuck-ups of the West so that the protagonist can make up his mind to screw with them? Brother, the protagonist is already in his thirties, not a young man in his early twenties! The above opinions are personal opinions, please don't comment if you don't like them.

To the fake readers who don't like this book As the saying goes, everyone has their own preferences for vegetables and radishes. If you like it, please continue to like it. If you don't like it, please avoid it. It is not easy for the author to code, and he does not force anyone to like this work. There is freedom of speech, but if you don't like this genre, just don't read it. There is no need to jump out to gain a sense of presence and affect the mood of readers. It makes you seem so noble and tasteful. Seriously, we don't need it, we really don't need it. You are all old readers of Qidian, and you are all at the level of a boss. Please have some boss qualities. Don't be like a wet market lady who jumps out and makes all kinds of accusations when you encounter something you don't like. Seriously, if you are real readers and read the book seriously, if you have any good suggestions, point them out calmly, I believe everyone will accept them. The book club is a place for everyone to speak freely, not a battlefield for you. Please don't bring your bad emotions here, as this will really affect everyone's mood for reading. The above remarks are just my personal thoughts, the real thoughts of a real reader, and have nothing to do with anyone else. Please also ask some people not to take the position, let alone start a fight. This post only accepts readers who like Stupid Old Man's books as much as I do, and share their reading experience together. I do not accept the accusations made by big guys from all walks of life. Please respect yourself.

First time so European🙂 😎

I want to watch Star Wars and conquer the stars and the sea, but I don't expect that my parents are short-lived and obsessed with the love between their children! 😰