Hong Kong Films: One Hand Covers the Sky

Going undercover? You're insane! Three years after three years will kill you. I don't think anyone here is using that section chief who went to get a "gilded" position to argue, right?

Undercover agents can get promoted in any country, but don't expect to reach high positions, and your job will likely never be a key one.

Undercover work depends on the location. Hong Kong was under British control at the time. Undercover work was considered dirty stuff. Furthermore, the scope wasn't broad enough. Even if they destroyed Hung Hing and Tung Sing, it wouldn't have made much difference.

Author, please put some effort into this! It's frustrating that a man with such a powerful ability is forced into infiltration by his superiors. Either make the ability suitable for infiltration, or don't make him an infiltration character at all. As a transmigrator with such a powerful ability, he could do well even without being a policeman.

Although I haven't read the book, the comments all say it's about undercover work, so I'll share my thoughts on it. Undercover work has no future. Going back to the police force might get you a promotion at best, maybe to inspector, but forget about promotions beyond that. You'll never get into an important department; you'd be lucky to even stay in traffic police. Going back to the police force will lead to suspicion and isolation; even the slightest overstep will definitely arouse suspicion.

This flop novel is written to make the reader feel miserable; it's incredibly discouraging. What was the point of a police officer with superpowers going undercover? And the writing is terrible, like something a primary school student would write—it's so painful to read.

Why don't you just have the protagonist transmigrate into an undercover agent? The way you've written it is like choosing a stinky ditch over a perfectly good road, and the writing is poor; it feels like the protagonist has been tricked, like they lack independent thought and have intellectual problems.

That's bullshit. Becoming a policeman and then leaving to join a gang... Does he really think everyone else is stupid?

I don't dislike fat people, but I dislike fat people who are the main characters.

Why would they send a cop who just killed a gangster to go undercover? You kill someone and then join a gang, and you say you were fired from the police force because of public opinion, so you joined the gang to protect yourself. What will the other cops think? If you kill one scoundrel, and other gangsters can just go to a newspaper and spread rumors and get fired, who will want to work in the future?