
Hunter's Perfect Evolution
猎人之完美进化
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 484k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 3y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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Personally, it's a bit bullshit. First of all, the development of telekinesis requires mental effort. Why was Doulang Hua Shi considered broken by Hisoka? It was because he developed telekinesis abilities that did not belong to his own department and took up mental effort. Hisoka thought it was hopeless. The protagonist develops a perfect evolution. First of all, manifestation will not manifest fantasy creations. This was mentioned by Kurapika's master when he was guiding Kurapika. How could it be possible to manifest a magic circle? To put it this way, it is better to manifest a gourmet cell and replenish oneself by eating. With this perfectly evolved ability, you can actually create telekinesis abilities based on other people's characteristics after allowing others to sacrifice themselves? It's not like there's an extra external brain, so where does this power come from? Can I use other abilities when using this telekinesis ability? The most important thing is that the ability to read is a reflection of the soul. All previous experiences, personalities, and desires in life become part of the ability to read. Hisoka loved chewing gum when he was a child, and his telekinesis turned him into a flexible love; Kurapika's chain was intended to restrain the spider, but it was also subconsciously restraining himself, so he thought of the chain. The protagonist was still thinking about revenge before, but later when he got telekinesis, his first thought was to evolve? ! This ability of thinking cannot be cultivated at all.
I feel that it is really unreasonable not to add a few more restrictions to this kind of telekinesis ability that surpasses the thief's extreme will. There is also no clear explanation about the sacrifice, I hope it will be added later!
Just a reminder, generally you need to use Ning Qi to see Nian Qi
The abilities in the novel are too easy. The stronger the ability in the hunter, the harder it is to develop it. In fact, the telekinesis ability that is most suitable for time-travelers, especially soul-travelers, is body seizing or inheritance. Using the plot of the prophet as a layout and seemingly impossible conditions as oath constraints, it is possible to complete this type of ability. For example, if you know the importance of wheat to the ant king and know that the ant king is not going to die soon, you can create the following telekinesis ability: Name: Bet on a lifetime of wealth Activation conditions: Satisfy one of the opponent's heart sources, and perfectly inherit his telekinesis ability after the opponent's death. Premise 1 of the oath: The power gap between the successor and the successor is at least 1000 times. Premise 2 of the oath: The inheritance contract must be reached on the premise that the other party voluntarily agrees and effectively fulfills his wish. Premise 3 of the oath: If the subject dies within 12 hours after the contract is completed, 100% of the ability will be inherited. If the subject dies within 24 hours, 50% of the ability will be inherited. If the subject dies within 24 hours, the ability will be terminated after three days. Oath premise 4: The ability can only be activated once in a lifetime. After activation, regardless of whether the contract is reached or not, this ability will automatically be invalidated. Then activate this ability when the ant king is eager to see Xiaomai before his death.
Although he is a future warrior who is omnipotent in telekinesis, he is a patient with an underdeveloped cerebellum who only has an A level. Others are making crazy sacrifices, but the protagonist can only draw A. I can't figure out what the use of this reading ability is? Your ability to read is just a tool to push the plot forward. If someone sacrifices something to you, you have to fulfill the wish of the sacrificer. What is the ability to read? It won't be inconsistent if you change this telekinesis ability into a system task publisher. After all, your protagonist relies solely on level A to beat people and it has nothing to do with telekinesis. Why don't you just give the protagonist a strengthening system? Can this still be called telekinesis?
Let the poison start at the beginning, let the protagonist be direct, pour out some extremely profitable secrets, and use this as a bargaining chip to prevent others from touching him, and others really can't touch him, so he can survive with his will and be tortured. It is impossible. What on earth did the author think? It's so stupid to write people down
I don't want to watch Almighty anymore…
Well? I don't understand that there is something wrong with the protagonist's ability setting. He is too unhunter. Why do people use the term "traveler" to explain how valuable it is? So what's the point of fandom? The fan fiction is a fantasy, not a complete regret, not a cool article about "high-dimensional creatures' dimensionality reduction attack"...
The reason why hunters are so good-looking is because the combat power system is rigorous. You, the hexagonal warrior, have directly eliminated the biggest attraction of hunters.
According to the author's setting, since the protagonist knows so much information. Then he can use this information to find professional people to teach him. For example, the Juezi Juela in front of him has a lot of people in his team. It is definitely worth it to sacrifice one person in exchange for that information. Why doesn't the protagonist do this? You still have to explore on your own. It is much better for professionals to teach you than to explore on your own. Although the protagonist has exchanged the method of practicing mindfulness. But there is a huge difference between knowing how to do many things and actually doing them.
Cheating word count
The word count is cheating, one chapter, after reading the first half, the content of the second half is completely duplicated with the content of the first half, and it's not just individual chapters, it's like this for many chapters! !
The description of Hisoka is very apt. , But the description of his strength is not appropriate. It was said before that the strength of Hisoka is five times different from Hisoka. If Hisoka's progress is 20 times in one year, he can catch up with Hisoka. This means that Hisoka has improved four times in one year. I admit that Hisoka's talent is very strong, but his strength cannot improve so fast. He is not just learning to read.
I remembered Nirvana vs. Apollo in Death 200. I typed the lines according to the subtitles Perfect life? Yeah? The so-called perfection does not exist in this world. This argument is a bit trite but it is true It is precisely because of this that worldly people will long for and pursue perfection But what is the meaning of perfection? Nothing at all, meaningless I hate perfection Once perfect, there is no room for progress There is no room for creativity It means that wisdom and talent will be useless Do you understand?
Please tell me where I can report this author. I can't bear to report this novel.
Didn't you update the article after completing the anti-theft measures? Are you trying to make money?
The content in multiple chapters is repeated and the word count is cheated.
Hunter World has the concept of brain domain. If you spend too much energy on one ability, you will not be able to learn other abilities. The more complex the ability, the more it consumes. Even if you learn the abilities of other departments, the further away from your own department, the less powerful it will be.
Are you crazy? What the hell are you writing? Are you trying to make money? Report it