Elden Ring: Godrick the Grafted Übermensch

Grek's final form😃

After discussing it with my roommate, I found that there was something wrong in the battle against Fengling Yueying. In fact, it should be written that the player unlocked the health lock, and then Ge Xiaochuan used throwing skills to knock him off the cliff and kill him. This is more logical and better reflects Ge Xiaochuan's understanding of the game. Then some places are not smooth and there are some problems in reading, alas :-(

Your shortcoming is very obvious, that is, you think about yourself. I haven't had time to play the ring yet, but I have always been a fan of Dark Souls. Because I haven't played it yet, I'm confused about your novel. You barely describe the characters. You didn't describe most of the monsters' shapes, sizes, and personalities. It seems very confusing to me. Author, you lack the ability to see things from the reader's perspective. Let's use an analogy. Although I am a Dark Souls fan, I really don't necessarily remember the names of the monsters in it. If there is a Dark Souls novel and the author does not describe the characters but only gives a name, I really don't know who he is talking about. You have to at least describe it: "It looks like a lobster the size of an elephant." The crab is as big as a cow but has a shell made of rock.

Thank you for your support. It is my first time to write. It has many shortcomings and it is not convenient to reply to everyone one by one. I have read all your comments. I will try my best to meet the requirements of the comment area and bring happiness to everyone and Ge Xiaochuan. Please bear witness😘

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Not many people write about Dark Souls, and not many people write about Wolf. A lot of people who wrote Dharma Ring suddenly jumped out! It's strange, it's all the Dharma Ring that got into the trap, right?

This must have been written by the King of Ten Zhou Mu Dian Fire, it's so crazy!

It's hard to imagine what kind of environment the author lives in to create such a crude article. It's really eye-opening

I just asked if you want to lick Marlenia's feet.

The subject matter is good, but the writing style is just for fun, with little potential.