The Great Entertainment Detective

After reading a few chapters, the author may have given the protagonist hacking skills without much thought. Later, the protagonist is threatened by a wealthy young master to leave his sister. The author probably couldn't imagine the immense impact a high-level hacker could have in this information age. To put it simply, even Jack Ma would have to back down if a top-tier hacker didn't reveal their identity.

I think the novel's title should be changed to "Entertainment: King of Paparazzi," or more directly, "Entertainment: I Am the Big Paparazzi," which would be more eye-catching.

There's no wealthy family or song donation involved; it's just one person pulling the strings behind the scenes, which is more interesting. Do those wealthy heiresses really have to cling to you?

This book is like having a thief as the protagonist; it's unsettling. Being a paparazzi is clearly an unethical profession. What right do the main characters have to pry into the privacy of celebrities? The article mentions celebrities becoming mistresses and engaging in unspoken rules, which is unethical, but his act of secretly filming is more illegal.

I think the author's subject matter is good, but the writing is flawed. You should have written it as a pure paparazzi story, or a system with incredible power that grants you an unbannable account, constantly releasing sensational news to stir up trouble. Make it like a disciplinary committee, making everyone in the entertainment industry feel insecure. What you've written is a hodgepodge; the paparazzi aren't paparazzi, and the celebrities aren't celebrities. Honestly, it's really boring.

This romance... I can't write it, maybe we should just skip it. One-night stands and casual sex are fine, but the way it develops is so weird. A rich heiress suddenly has feelings for you? You're just a long-lost, unknown classmate! Even if you've had some success later, you're still not as good as her at this stage.

Too many plot holes, too many inexplicable points, the protagonist's personality and halo are all problematic. A song is given out of nowhere, a top-tier heiress falls for a nobody who's greedy for money but seems carefree, a wealthy family investigator arrives and mocks her, a married woman helps catch her husband cheating, she's given coordinates and immediately encounters harassment, suddenly…

Shennong's Comments 1. Sticking to the paparazzi approach and avoiding anything illegal or borderline can make you a legend. 2. Writing about wealthy families is fine, but you must stick to the dog-like path. 3. His relationship with a pop diva was unbearable to watch; his relationship with a wealthy heiress was contradictory.

The first few cases were quite interesting, but I lost interest after they started focusing on talent shows. It's a shame about such a good topic.

This book is ruined. The premise is a detective story, investigating and exposing things in the entertainment industry, with most of the content revolving around navigating that world. Fine, that's one thing, but if you're going for an exposé narrative, don't include a bunch of other elements. Just have a system solve all the problems, that would be satisfying. But instead, you get caught up in this and that, hesitating and indecisive, so I abandoned it.