Marvel: Beginning with Fury to Compete with Director

To be honest, if you join S. H. I. E. L. D., It would be better to use S. H. I. E. L. D. Resources to build Spartans, which would be more efficient and stronger.

I quite like Marvel, but I don't like Marvel's Braised Eggs and Ancient One. DC doesn't like bats. Is there something wrong with me?

The first chapter is so addictive. What does being a SHIELD mean? The protagonist is the son of the President of the United States, and it is impossible to become the deputy director immediately. The second poisonous point is that the protagonist summons people. The protagonist has no absolute control over the people. This is only the first chapter. Ah, I can't imagine how poisonous it will be in the future.

In the first chapter, some people were persuaded to quit, and their connections were so tough that they were directly promoted to deputy director, which was not in line with the requirements of international organizations.

The writing is too messy. The protagonist of the summoning stream does it himself, but the summoned characters don't seem to have much use. There are too many various systems added, and the plot is forced together.

Marvel should be completely banned, it has touched the bottom line, and it really deserves it.

Marvel fics are pretty good, but I just can't stand licking Iron Man and Black Widow. Ninety-nine percent of Marvel fics basically write the protagonist as Iron Man's tool. It looks like Iron Man is a tool, but in fact it's Iron Man who keeps taking advantage. And Black Widow is really not beautiful, and I don't understand why a group of protagonists would like this kind of woman who has only had sex with hundreds of men.

It's too complicated. If you stick to a system to summon, you can either summon the main characters with the red pupil, or the main characters from other chapters. You can also mix in some popular characters from other chapters (not too many), but the system should not be too complicated. There are many that everyone has never seen, and it is difficult to make up for them. In the end, if you can't find something exciting, you can only give up, and the content will become a hodgepodge.

I'm really convinced, why is it a summons text?

If you see the previous chapters starting to be modified, there is no need to go back and read them. I must have been caught making a typo. . . It has been changed. In the following chapters, I py a website for finding typos. There are really fewer typos. Please believe me 😭😭😭

In Marvel, don't suppress Goldfinger too harshly.

If you are a new person, and you write this kind of summoning messenger, there will definitely be a lot of characters in the future. I am not looking down on you, but you are a new person. I don't think your writing power can support this kind of writing, and after reading a few chapters, you really don't have the feeling of "new people are all monsters" with your writing power. According to my experience, you will most likely write it not long after it is put on the shelves. Goodbye in the world, if you can evolve yourself to be better, we can still meet again by chance. I met an author before, and his first book was white and poisonous. I criticized him. After a long time, I came across his new book. The writing is wonderful, and he is the kind of author who can evolve himself. Come on, evolve

Well... Author, don't you feel a bit confused after reading it yourself...

The backend is a bit confusing, I can't even remember what the protagonist has, and every time the protagonist does it by himself, not the little brother he summons.

How can Demon Slayer's demon be so strong? A Susano'o who can kill and slash Akaka indiscriminately even if he's tired? Even if Susano'o doesn't explode, I think it's okay to hit him.

After the people summoned by the protagonist come out, you can introduce their background. After all, most people don't watch anime.

Final boss

Depending on whether Saiyu is paired with Akainu or the Punisher, he has zero tolerance for evil anyway.

Absolutely amazing

Just be lazy, dad will find a way

What can I say, I was a little tired from listening to the book the whole time. The author taught me how to write well, so don't waste a good idea.

The Alliance's Void has been dealt a huge blow, turning from a scourge to the entire universe into a problem for one planet in Runeterra.

Did I miss something? Why did I kill Clockwork?

It's too complicated and everything is written together, and the plot changes too quickly

According to the speed at which these local products appear, the earth may be gone before the purple sweet potato essence reaches the earth.

The first Sai Liu is really awesome! If you don't understand, you can bring in Rorschach. His personality is similar to Akainu, but better than Akainu! Just rush after Seliu!

Seleu Bellica would still be a good person if she wasn't being used by others. Before committing suicide, she would consider whether there are civilians nearby.

The writing is really poisonous, there are too many poisonous points, and the writing style is so poor.

The steps are a bit big. Will the plot collapse later?

Forget about the rest later, Dad? Are there any world history books?