American Comic Plane Trader

It's been so long and the protagonist is still an ordinary person. When will he become stronger?

Then I would like to make some suggestions. It is not easy to find a book that can be read. Author, you need to grasp the heroine well. On the one hand, the heroine has been dedicated and is considered a good woman. If she abandons it easily or opens up a harem randomly, I think some readers will rebound. Generally speaking, go It doesn't matter if you are a romantic passerby in other worlds, as long as the person doesn't have a passionate love or something, or you don't have love at all, act like a king, and let the female character fall in love with you. This kind of writing is okay, but the protagonist is a king, and there are many things in the king's road, how can they continue to fight with their children all day long? What kind of coincidence is it that the protagonist has "no choice" to find more female protagonists? This is really inferior. Personally speaking, I hate this kind of thing the most. He is just a scumbag and has to build a memorial arch, saying that the mistakes of the whole world have nothing to do with him. Then he can see the potential. The author should be bolder. The content written is more interesting, such as operating it yourself to create the world's largest law enforcement organization, or directly creating S. H. I. E. L. D., Or usurping Hydra, or playing with technology, and then playing with super powers, You can also be the mastermind behind the scenes, layout, Later in the plot, it will directly lead to the entire interstellar era, where all the people are extraordinary/cultivation/superpowers, don't want too much, okay, having said so much, sponsored 10,000 coins, hoping for better results. (To put it bluntly, I couldn't read the original version, but the author has made great progress)

It's better to have multiple female protagonists. An eighteen-year-old young time-traveler becomes an American tycoon and follows a single female protagonist route with a second-married woman. No matter how you think about it, it's awkward.

For those who have read the 200th chapter, let me tell you that the protagonist is still very weak after 200 chapters. A metaphor that is not very vivid is similar to the middle stage of Qi training in Xianxia. Except for Yuri, none of the trading partners that the protagonist comes into contact with are of much help to the protagonist's strength and power. It feels like the author has been suppressing the protagonist's strength in order to improve the plot. It is estimated that after three or four hundred chapters, the author will finish the characters that existed in the twentieth century in Marvel movies and TV series. Then arrange a transaction partner that can quickly improve the protagonist's strength, and then the protagonist's strength will begin to take off. It is estimated that the novel will already have three or four hundred chapters by then. If I write another two hundred chapters about the protagonist's take-off process, the novel will be almost complete.

Writing about children so quickly! It's only a few chapters long. Most people reading this kind of novel don't want to be burdened by a child.

To be honest, I'm quite disappointed. I started reading the book as soon as it came out. The previous article is really good, but there are already more than 100 pictures. I haven't seen the main plot yet. I've been playing business wars and stuff. Brother, I'm reading Marvel.

Whether it is strong or not is one thing, whether you use it or not is another thing, whether you have it or not is another thing. You can not use it but you must have it. Writing about American comics is really not as good as writing about American entertainment.

Fanren

It can be seen that the author's combat power is basically based on the expressive power of the movie. I just hope that he will not write that Thanos can be solved with a "one shot", or that Thanos's physical fitness is actually not much different from that of a super soldier 😅 Then I will be really speechless. Although the movie's performance is weak, the setting is that Ronan is fine if he is hit by an ion cannon that can blow up the moon, Thor can carry a neutron star, and Hulk once smashed an entire snow mountain with one punch. But Thanos has nothing to do with the power stone that can destroy the planet when it touches the ground. The mental defense makes Mantis Girl, who can instantly hypnotize the living planet, helpless...

After reading for so long, I found a very serious question. Let me put it this way. Do you think everyone picks up their money? Take a look for yourself. Half of the figures in each chapter are about 70% to 80% popularizing knowledge. It's troublesome to read too much. You know this is a process, but you can't simplify it and popularize it. If you keep doing this, you will lose a lot of readers and make it not worth the money for readers.

The book is still good, but don't always use our unique Chinese language habits in conversations. Author, think about it for yourself. In the dialogue between two white people, the idiom "It's useless to be a villain" appears in the dialogue. You are as weird as Elizabeth going to the bar and saying, "Waiter, cut two kilograms of beef and a jug of good wine." In the conversation with Yuri earlier, Yuri said a Chinese proverb, and you also wrote that the protagonist was surprised that Yuri knew Chinese. I forgot about this incident later on. The two white people were talking about various idioms and proverbs. It was too dramatic.

Just update the author on this point and you have the nerve to put it on the shelves. Do you understand that if the initial update is less than 2.5W, it will be criticized?

This book is expensive. I wrote almost 300 chapters of the American comic and the timeline is still in 1950. I'm confused.

Margot

Generally speaking, the plot is a bit slow, and the writing is not bad, but of the 100,000 words, about half is lost... This is still a free chapter... From chapter 20 to the last chapter, I basically have to skip chapters 4 or 5 to read it...

I'm waiting to see how many chapters the author will take before getting to the main Marvel plot. If it's like the book on Asgard and doesn't overdo the plot until the end of the book, and everything else is original, then I won't plan to subscribe. . . It's just a state of mind

It's outrageous. Your entire booking is less than 100, and your speech is still 100.

Brother, are you writing about a business war or something? Since it is Marvel➕plane trading, can you add more drama to this plane trading? 🤫🤫

Generally speaking, the writing is very smooth and looks good. But you said you would write American comics, and then you wrote about World War II. You were not very familiar with the captain and became a snakehead. Then 60 years after World War II, you wrote it all by yourself, right? It's not that the writing is not good. It was because of American comics that you came in. At your speed, how many chapters will it take to write Iron Man's debut? And after writing so much, my strength has not improved at all. I had high expectations, but because it is too watery, I am struggling.

I thought I was resurrected, but it ended in a hurry.

Yuri and Long Ma have the same technology and materials. The tearing doomsday is the private assassin technology of the future, so the third little doll is really limiting the development of the protagonist. Even if it is written in the high magic world in the future, it will not be useful until at least more than ten years. It purely limits the growth of the protagonist.

It's a pity, this book is still very interesting, but it ended up being a mess.

After completing the story, the protagonist's outlook on life and behavior are relatively decent. Unfortunately, it's too short. I feel like I could have written another two hundred chapters.

Finally got a little stronger, although there is no use for it 😭

Is the author still updating? Is this book finished?

What about the new book? Why did it suddenly disappear?

Update quickly, otherwise I will almost finish it

It's already low quality, but it's so slow to update. I'm helpless.

Sorry, I've finished reading it, so when will the author update?

Does Pig's Feet have any force now?