The Path Chaser That Begins at Admiral Night

Why does every Jiangye fanfic start in the academy and not in the Dao sect? The master of the temple is not Haotian's lackey like Xiling. Or maybe the Demon Gate start will work too! I'm tired of watching the academy's opening

Have you ever seen a woman who wants a female protagonist? Isn't it delicious to pursue the truth wholeheartedly? Creatures like women will only influence me to draw my sword.

The author's writing style is too plain and old bookworms can't stand it, but novices who have just started reading novels can read it.

Forget about the writing style, it's just that the logic isn't very reasonable and it's a bit too poisonous.

It is recommended not to have a female protagonist. Please don't have a female protagonist.

It is requested that there be no female protagonist. If there is, I will not watch it 🙂

The writing is so poor, there are probably too many characters, maybe five or six in one sentence.

I just read Chapter 5, and when I saw the Ninth Realm, I ran away

After reading a few chapters, I can see that the author's writing is a bit different. The most well-written novel I have read recently is Red Mansions, and the author has nothing to do to see how big the gap is between you and me.

It feels like I'm writing a running account, and I can't relate to it at all. It feels like it's no different from the original work, except for a few more sentences. This isn't called fan fiction, at least in my eyes.

It's so embarrassing. Find a factory to work in.

People at night have limited vision, so inner visualization can only visualize the flow of the river. As a traveler, you don't have any vision problems and can just try to visualize the Milky Way. . . . The reason why Ning Que is special is that he does not have the limitations of native people's vision. In the final analysis, the night is a closed world.

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Fighting over the night, covering the sky, this level is too great.

Since you like the book "Jian Ye", then read it carefully and don't read it all over and then rush out to write it. You haven't understood the most basic realm, and you don't know the strength or weakness of the cultivation system. The key is that you haven't even understood the most important important roles. First of all, most of the practitioners are sword masters, telegraph masters and talisman masters. The talisman master should be the strongest at the same level, but there are flaws in the battle between talisman masters. It takes time to draw the talisman. Then there is Nianshi. There are many natal objects of Nianshi, which can be said to be all kinds of strange, such as piano, chess, calligraphy, painting, sword, gun, sword, stick, etc. Many people in the back of the academy have them. The last one is the swordsman. Chao Xiaoshu and Wang Jinglue are both at the peak of Dongxuan, but Wang Jinglue is pressing down on Chao Xiaoshu and cannot move. In the second chapter, you came out and said that a telepathic master in the middle stage of Dongxuan can only defeat a swordsman in the early stage of Dongxuan. Then why did Lu Qingchen abandon the sword master and change to a telepathy master? But except for a few, such as Liu Bai and Ke Haoran, most of them are like this. I have only read a few chapters, and it really gave me a headache. You said that you are better than Liu Bai because your realm is higher than him, but you know that there are many higher realms than Liu Bai, such as Wei Guangming, Bear Infestation, Senior Brother, and Guanzhu. But you also found that these people have been in the Sixth Realm for many years. Who dares to say that they can beat Liu Bai. Liu Bai was one foot in front of him, and even his master didn't dare to get close. His sword was fast enough, so senior brother couldn't dodge even if there was no distance. Because of his speed, one foot in front of him was actually the same as a thousand miles. Didn't you see that when Liu Bai went to Taoshan alone to fight Haotian in the end, there was no one to stop him? In addition to fear, there is also speed. From Jiange to Taoshan, there is only one step for Liu Bai after drawing the sword. Okay, I only saw this, not the rest. A word of advice: if you really like the book or TV show Jiang Ye, read it more carefully and then start writing again. Otherwise, it is really a waste of time. Failure to make money is a trivial matter, and the key is not recognized.

After reading the first chapter, I understood that this kind of dream master type protagonist is not suitable for me.

That's it? After watching the first chapter of the game, join the academy and worship your master in seconds😒 It's not interesting.

Why use the system to throw dirty water on a book like Jiang Ye?