The Warring States Period Began with Zhao Wangyong

Could you please do it faster and update more frequently? It's gone before you watch it!

Write down your feelings about this book, 1. Logically speaking, we should write more about the impact of the reform on people's livelihood and the impact on the people at the bottom. You don't need to write much, just cut the length of emotional scenes in half. 2. I guess the author also realized that many people complained and came out to explain it, but I still want to say something here. Writing about emotions, writing about beautiful women to spice up the plot, these are all fine. But it needs to be prioritized. It is always written that a beautiful woman is always secretly peeking at you, or her eyes are straightened when she sees a certain beautiful woman. This is really something I have never seen written in this way. There can be many adjustments to the plot. If the writing is not strong enough, don't force it. It will be embarrassing to death, and the length can be compared with the main drama. 3. The plot of the reform that really makes me want to watch it is all about the tactics of the Warring States Period. However, this plot often feels to me that it is just made up without any clues. You can write related items or dialogue clues in the early stage. 4. The war plot cannot be said to be bad, in any case it is better than many authors I have read. However, ancient war, such a large-scale war, still feels too simple. It is recommended to play "Total War" and experience the ancient military formations. The war plot can be filled with too many words, and there is no need to use your emotions to play with it. This is a summary. I can feel that the author is very careful in reviewing the information, but the Warring States period is full of high-spirited and uninhibited style, emphasizing justice and self-interest over life and death. I feel like I have been transported into a modern Internet novel when it comes to emotional drama. It is recommended that the author write about the reform strategy in literary dramas, and intersperse the martial arts dramas with either upgrading technology or fighting wars. I have never written such a long review. There are too few articles on the Warring States Period. I also like Yanzhao very much. I hope the author can persist.

There are different opinions on the history of the division of the Spring and Autumn Period and the Warring States Period, and many historians have different views. I think we should start counting after Emperor Zhou officially recognizes the identity of the three families of Zhao, Han and Wei! As for the Tian family on behalf of Qi, they also followed suit and divided the Jin into three families.

Regarding the weakness of Wei State, one of them is that Wei State's new law is not perfect as Dada said. But I think there's another point, and that's the brain drain. Like Zhang Yi, Gongsun Yan, and even Shang Yang. That one is not from Wei.

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Don't write about the Zhao family as being too traditional and conservative. Historically, especially during the Spring and Autumn Period, the Zhao family began to use unscrupulous means to make some bad starts. It had a bad reputation, and the able ones prevailed. Why did the Zhao family have Hufu cavalry and archery during the Warring States Period? Because being unusual is the tradition of the Zhao family. The same goes for Qin, after all, it is also the Zhao family.

I hope there will be less fictional content, and I don't like supernatural forces appearing in history. There are too few novels about the Spring and Autumn Period and the Warring States Period, and I found Qin to be boring.

The update is too slow, one chapter a day, not many words, such a good subject matter, and the early writing is so good, if I update more, the results will definitely be good.

Rough map of the early stages of King Zhao Wuling

Generally speaking, it's okay, but I don't think Zhao is that weak! ! ! ! ! I hope women will write as little as possible, but it can be done but not too frequently. If the frequency is too high, you will get disgusted Also, try not to write about private visits on incognito servers. It is too easy to get into trouble on incognito servers. Doesn't this create opportunities for others to assassinate? The risks are high, and safety guarantees are simply insufficient. For a king, safety is the most important thing. Try not to write about assassinations. Is it so easy for a king to be assassinated? The protagonist should be vigilant. It would be disgusting to be assassinated casually. After all, he is the king! ! ! As for the sect, they are not that strong, so they still need the Mo family to send people to protect the protagonist? ? Is there no master in a country? Also, the relationship and attitude with the Mo family manager Zhao must be handled well. After all, the protagonist is a king. Anyway, I feel sick when I see "wry smile". Maybe I read too much of this word.

You can create a book club group, put it under the introduction on the homepage, and slowly accumulate popularity.

Full order! It's very well written, so cheers up

These last few chapters are excellent! Please make it bigger

There was still no shortage of famous people in the Zhao Kingdom during this period, including Le Yi and Xin Du (I feel like I could write more about military strategists).

Brother, keep it up. It's really good. It will definitely shine. Trust me.

The story of this book really unfolds after the hundredth chapter. After that, the plot is not exciting and the emotions are delicate. Why is the score so poor? Don't understand.

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Devour the land of Yanzhao and the Hebei Plain, destroy Qi and control the entire North China Plain, and then destroy Han and Wei one by one. After all, the geographical location is not good to destroy Qin, and Han and Wei will be attacked from all sides. Destroy Yan first and take the Hebei Plain. After all, the development of the Hebei Plain can be seen in history books. Even if the unit output is not as good as Guanzhong, the area is large and can be used as a base camp to clear out the enemies in the north and enjoy the benefits of fish and salt near the sea.

No wonder there are no results. The author can't write about women when writing about war. This kind of thing can be covered in one stroke, but if he has to write it in such detail, and the writing power is not enough, it seems very poisonous.