I'm Really All-Around Accompaniment

I accidentally saw this book on a recommendation yesterday. To be honest, I was attracted by the introduction, and I was hooked as soon as I read it. After reading it all day and night, I finally got to the latest chapter, and I had to go into painful waiting mode first. As a book lover for the past ten years, I rarely stay up late to read a book. The beginning of the book is indeed interesting. The three golden chapters are not unreasonable. It is an urban harem theme dressed in a game literary system. In my opinion, the writing style is good and makes me feel comfortable reading it. There are no wry smiles, a bunch of modal particles, and very few typos. The story is a bit cliche, but the plot advances the plot well, and there is basically nothing to whet your appetite. However, there are still some problems in the writing and description of characters. For example, there is always a large psychological description of the villain "Mr. Wang" in the book. Although the author believes in avoiding character templates and being meticulous about the villains, to be honest, it is better to reduce such large chapters as much as possible on the platform of online articles. There is also Li Qiushui, a somewhat pitiful and hateful woman, who is afraid of guilt and jealousy for the so-called money. But the shaping method is still not suitable for today's online literature market. After all, it is a bit thankless to create a villain in three consecutive chapters, and some readers do not like this kind of intensive description. As an aside, it's best not to keep a certain villain as a stumbling block. I really don't like the idea of ​​a villain being dealt with only at the end, let alone this kind of system power story. The plot is somewhat similar to a group portrait, but the story is not similar to the plot of a unit drama? Probably? I don't care, any style is fine, but if the author wants to stay relevant in the online literature market, he or she should change the way of shaping it. Of course, if the author has already planned out the subsequent plot, then it will be fine. A reader's silent complaint:

The heroine is introduced in the first few chapters, and the female boss's affection for the protagonist is also very sudden, lacking plot foreshadowing. It feels like missing more than ten chapters, and it started inexplicably 🙂

Free for a limited time, stay up late to see the latest, say a few words sincerely, don't delete it This name is called Accompanying, it is actually half game, half life, urban pretense and slap in the face, the author contains private goods and many female protagonists The author likes branch lines very much, there is an SB villain who can write two and a half chapters about his personal activities (Li Qiu Shui). I really couldn't stand it anymore and skipped two chapters. I don't understand this It's so unlikable and has no merits. It's so long. I've finished reading everything else. Is there any personality change in the back? For the kind-hearted protagonist to be a killer and decisive person to cure the villains, pretending to be a slap in the face, this is a bit middle-of-the-road, but the writing is not particularly bad, I don't criticize, it is just a bit abrupt, and I also point out that the villains are all facial makeup. Mainly because there are multiple female protagonists, and one of them is hanging on to others. The problem is that the protagonist can't let go of any one of them, and his view of relationships is not correct. I followed the latest chapter (more than 300, almost 400). Two of the protagonists are ambiguous, one is definitely in a relationship, and the other is hanging on. The other two are not sure whether they are (most likely not), pure King of the Sea, but I have watched too many female protagonists, I won't make too many negative comments As I said before, the author likes to include private goods and expenditure lines. Normally, if you write an unlikable villain with multiple personalities or two chapters, the reader will feel uncomfortable at most, but it will definitely be uncomfortable to follow it. It means that you can't see the progress you want to see, so the follow-up rate will definitely not be good. I sincerely recommend and hope that the author can Make more improvements. If you like the expenditure line, you must do it in large quantities and don't delay us from reading the main line. The last point is that the author likes to pretend to be a slap in the face. If we can't draw materials from reality, don't draw materials from reality. The writing is really a bit embarrassing. If it attracts readers who come to read the article as a game/accompanying/anchor, then they will definitely be scolded. What school? The differentiated distribution of servers, the jealousy of small anchors, the revenge of the rich second generation, beating people at barbecue stalls, and cutting off mobile phones every day, it is really not very comfortable to watch. I believe it will be better if you can make the volume larger or target the reader category more clearly. These shortcomings will also be minor shortcomings. If these scenes did not appear in this game companion article, I would not criticize them.

I beg you, the author, please accept Teacher Fang. Otherwise it would be too uncomfortable to look at

The author is too short and the plot is outrageous. These ten chapters have nothing to do with the live broadcast at the beginning.

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I have finished reading Chapter 68. Let me share my thoughts. 1. First of all, I didn't feel embarrassed when I read this novel. I don't know what other people said was embarrassing. (It may also be that my academic qualifications are too short and I don't feel it) 2. Secondly, for a netizen like me who doesn't play lol, I passed the plot part of the game very quickly because I couldn't understand it, so I focused on the results and didn't really pay much attention to the process. The most I can do is search for what this hero looks like and how to use his skills. I really don't understand why some people want to deduct game details. (Maybe it's due to the love and rigor of the game) 3. Finally, there is really not much to say about the emotional lines of the characters. People really don't come here to criticize if they are unhappy with the harem story. 4. Conclusion, I hope everyone will read the article first and then comment. Don't come to the comment area to yell after reading the introduction. Note: The above text only represents my personal opinion. Don't argue with me. If you do, you are right.

Really, I don't understand why there are so many negative emotions in a companion novel. Are you, the author, unhappy in reality? Come and vent your emotions in a novel! !

Before it was released, the whole Dangerous Personality thing persuaded some people to stop them from wasting money on subscribing after it was released. The author is so gentle and I cried to death.

I specially spent 10 points to comment. I was fascinated by the previous chapter. Chapter 107 is poisonous, extremely poisonous. I, Shen Nong, died! ! !

The first part of your book was very discouraging, so I just wanted to read Accompanying You. You gave me a lot of things to do in a day, and it seemed that the specially arranged things were too deliberate (for example: I had trouble buying milk tea, and I also encountered problems when I went to the supermarket. I really felt sick). I really took it. It was so poisonous that I almost vomited.

I really don't understand. Did the author become self-motivated when he wrote it? It looked pretty good at first, but he just skipped over the slight flaws. What did you write about Dangerous Personality? What's the meaning of it? If you want to push for growth, OK, you can just give less points and increase the number of words. You can write about so many games, even if you don't want to be omnipotent, single alliance + postgraduate entrance examination + daily harem, with your description ability, many people will be happy to read it. There are so many comments saying that you don't even look at it, and most of you are still silent. Can you really think that you are the only one who is aloof and independent from the world, and you have to make yourself happy? It's so embarrassing. Why, everyone is trying to discredit you, and you refuse to listen to suggestions? Looking at the back, there are foreign chaebols, snipers, retro style, right? Recalling the urban soldier Wang Wen ten years ago, right? Changing the outline is indeed a taboo in online writing, but if you haven't decided on the outline at the beginning, just read the comments and listen to the suggestions. Don't be too pretentious about writing articles. Thank you. I finally read a good book in the early stage. The more I write, the more disgusting it becomes.

Tianhu started the game and was beaten to a pulp. The first few hundred chapters are really well written, but later on it feels like the author has changed. The companion system does not include companion, which is totally inconsistent with the title of the book. If the system is so strong, then you have to force yourself to find a way, right? Hardly written as a stallion harem flow. The live broadcast of the game and the daily life are very good. The first part, all the way to Qin Mao Mao, and even to the comic exhibition, are very well written, but the later ones are a mess. It feels like the protagonist wants every woman he knows, but he won't chase her or let her go. If you want a harem, you should write a scumbag. Don't you have a king's personality? But halfway through, you want to be a scumbag and have a cowardly character. Which woman has never seen a man. Since the little girl left, I can't understand what is being written, the system, the system has stopped responding. Split personality didn't respond either. If you care about the little girl, you won't think of ways to save her. If you lack luck, you won't think of ways to find her. You just rely on the heroine and want to tie her up. Even if you want to tie up the heroine, you have to coax her and find a way to find luck at the same time. You have no ability to move at all. Take the heroine home for the New Year, live in your own home, and let others stay in a hotel? I don't understand it at all. Then when the whole family gets together, the protagonist goes to play, and the heroine is left in the hotel. The heroine is set to need companionship, and everyone goes back to their hometown with you. Why don't you strike while the iron is hot, put the heroine aside, and go play by yourself. The heroine is a bit afraid of society. In the past years, the protagonist did not go to the party, but this year she had to go. She had to show off when she was rich. What are the last six hundred chapters about? You give Ji Ji so many scenes. Isn't the protagonist awesome? He can see through people's hearts at a glance. Can't you see through a Ji? Do you have to let him be disgusting there? Write about what a good friend Zhuang Xin is. Friends make a Ji disgusted? How awesome. Tianhu started the game badly.

The subsequent plot is becoming more and more fantasy and detached. Foreign chaebols can still be lawless here. Does the author think it is 1922?

I spent 10 to subscribe to a chapter of reviews. The first hundred or so chapters were really well written. I saw it at 1:40 in the morning. But in Chapter 107, "I want to destroy you, what does it have to do with you!" "Find a place to end it on your own!" "I don't, I don't, I don't, I don't, I don't, I don't," "Use points to clear the personality progress bar." These are really awkward, and the writing is starting to start to drift, right? Or did you hire a ghostwriter? A sudden change of style! If I really don't have a book to read, I think I can just read it for free. 10 Points means that I am satisfied with the previous dozens of chapters.

You can read the first hundred chapters, but after the personality setting appears later, poison to death! ! ! ! Ah, such a good beginning, why is it so vicious at the end? There is really no need for those girls like Qiu Shui and Qin to appear. It's a pity that the novel at the beginning is to your liking. The author's self-pleasure in the latter part is too serious. Come on, author, we have a long way to go. See you again...

No one scolds me for this kind of mindless novel because I really don't understand it. Whoever reads it doesn't understand.

The last post before deleting the book. The best thing about this book is that it focuses on reading it all before it is put on the shelves, accurately screening readers, and not cheating money after it is put on the shelves. Final words to the author: The reason why the dangerous personality is criticized is not at all whether it has connotation or whether it is reasonable, but because firstly, the protagonist cannot control himself, and secondly, the protagonist is weakened by forcibly recycling skill points. The first point is similar to the previous system that always wiped out the game. The second point is to put it bluntly, it is to enable the plug-in but not want to become invincible too quickly and then weaken the plug-in. These two points are second only to the green hair plot in my cognitive poisoning degree. Tongzi's green tea behavior didn't make me delete the book, and Qiu Shui's branch line didn't make me delete the book, because these are within the acceptable level of online writing. It's really impossible to tolerate the dangerous personality, because this setting directly kills all the excitement created in the early stage.

When I saw Chapter 400, the beginning was okay, but the reading was a bit awkward. Later, it became more and more deviated from the main line. All kinds of monsters and monsters appeared. After thinking about it, wasn't this the way the Bing Wang article was written ten years ago? Forget it, I can't bear it anymore, so I slipped away

I couldn't stand it anymore and read the first 20 chapters. I really can't stand it when I see that little girl appear. She claims to be a divine farmer and has tasted all kinds of herbs and is immune to all kinds of poisons. I didn't expect that there is such a heroic novel. Whose general is this! However, although it is very toxic, I still like the genre, and I hope to improve my ideas. The plot is a bit abrupt, and the layout may be good later on, but the early stage is really confusing and very discouraging. Come on! !

I came here to watch it for free, how can I put it? Even the settings like split personality did not dissuade me. But the appearance of the fan girl later on really made me wonder. I was wondering whether I was watching a male channel or a female channel. I feel like the author let himself go a little too far. The whole plot made me feel sick to my stomach. Besides being embarrassed, I was still embarrassed. It really highlights an embarrassment. Does the author think that driving and letting yourself go can be a hedge? While watching Driving, I might as well open a certain 404, the plot is bolder and the description is more leaky. But you, I really. Don't you think there is very little to say in each chapter? Do you really want to let yourself go like this? I don't really think the "split personality" system you mentioned above is too toxic. It's quite easy to accept it as a setting. But it feels like you really want to feed me lately, which is hard to watch. The reason why I specifically subscribed to a chapter to talk about this is because the previous chapter is really beautiful! I like it very much! I hope you don't let yourself go too far! Otherwise you will definitely become a eunuch. Whether it's because of interest or because of this, I make a living. You can't make money, there's no positive feedback, and you can't finish writing! Think twice.

The first hundred pictures seemed okay, but the personality was a little bit poisonous, and then suddenly I felt like the urban warrior king, which was a bit numb. I felt that I should write more about games, love, and something more relaxed. After all, this is the label. I really felt that the urban warrior king was unbearable, so I skipped it. The other ones were okay, don't be eunuchs, the style is more relaxed!

It was really a good seed that was wasted. It started well, and the plot and character details were very good. But from the moment the first negative personality appeared, whether it was thinking ability or changes in emotional lines, everything became illogical. Anyway, I personally can't understand why it suddenly became a harem with no intelligence and no brains. It's extremely abrupt and has no sense at all.

Three chapters, is it possible to collect 30,000 at this level?

Ordered one on the shelf and made me laugh by saying something about a bad plot and having a dangerous personality. What a bullshit.

Come on! Also looking forward to the next plot